IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 802

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research

It has became a controversial debate between who believes misuse of animals is against the human ethics so excessive coloning of animals should be baned while others believe they are an integral part of biodiversity evolution as being hunted by further creatures or been experienced biologically by scientists.In this essay we would have a deep looking on both views also strongly support the letter poit of view with bringing evidence.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compare to the past due to advanced technologies which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

It's believed that the crime committed nowadays reduced from the past days, because of using modern technologies to solve and prevent crime. In my opinion, I think that technologies and artificial intelligence have a huge role in decreasing crime rate. like using digital c

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The key to solving the environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient lifestyle for the sake of future generations. Agree/disagree?

Nowadays, Environmental issues are the major concern for human being and to solve these problems today's generation have to sacrifice their comfortable lifestyle for the betterment of the next generations. However, this essay is satisfied with this statement and the reasons will analysed in the following paragraphs with a reasonable conclusion.

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Is money an important factor in achieving hapiness?

Many people believe that money is an important factor in the pursuit of happiness, while others do not. I myself understand that money is one of the important factors, but I also believe that it plays an important role in achieving happiness.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Nowadays , technology is increasing day by day . That,s why most of the inviduals were opined that administration shound payout money for railways by prefering on roads .I will slightly agreed with this statement

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a hundred years ago some people believed that the human race was steadily making progress in all areas. Nowadays there are less certainty that this is the case. In what areas do you think the most progress has been made so far? In which areas does more need to be done?

Human beings play a vital role in the development of technology around the world. Nowadays, pupils are involved in various areas for the redevelopment of the nation. In this essay, we will discuss different areas in which the human race has done various progress meanwhile we will also see the least progress areas.

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The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful to the individuals and the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the recent years there has been a significant shift in the media towards bringing to light horrifying problems rather than emphasizing on positive outcomes and news. Some believe this is damaging to society, however I bet to disagree with this statement, because constant negativity fuels adaptability and brings emotional, financial benefits.

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By punishing murders with the death penalty, society is also guilty of committing murder. Therefore, life in prison is a better punishment for murders. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, it is controversial that a state-sanctioned practice of killing a person as a punishment for a crime is too intense for offenders, as people are afraid of being guilty of committing murder, and prefer to retain bad guys in prison longer or forever. While opponents including me disagree with the statement due to wasting the authority's money and ineffectively discouraging bad guys. In this essay, the reason to support my disagreement will be presented before my conclusion is reached.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are some of the possible solutions?

Learners are proving to be over-dependent on technology, such as the Internet and mobile phones. This essay will discuss some of the major problems associated with addiction to computers and how this situation can be alleviated.

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The popularity of news media often had significant influences on people’s lives. Some people believe this to be a negative development. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays the level of social awareness has grown drastically. Humankind is getting so much information that someone consider it redundant. Let me expatiate over this phenomenon.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?

Computers these days play a very important role in everyday life specially for working professionals. The use of computers among children would prove positive as it would make them more familiar with the most commonly used machine and simultaneously develop their cognitive skills. Although, there could be negative effects too like being less socially active, not indulging in outdoor activities and may also lead to risk strain injuries. However, I would disagree that using a computer everyday has more negative effects than positive effects on the children.

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Salary is the main consideration when choosing a job.To what extent do you agree or disagree with that idea?

People how much do they have income decide how much their life are perfect. People who live on the world are rotating day to day lives with eating, wearing, socializing. All these activities are based on each and everyone’s financial scope that how much they earn. Therefore, earning is most important element in our life.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football, while other people thinuk that taking part in individual Sports like Tennis Or swimming is better .discuss both view and give your opinion

In current times, society believe that it is more useful to take part in sports which are played in teams like basketball, hockey, whereas others think that taking part in personal sports like table tennis is better. From my point of view, that sport with others as a team has lots of benefits.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The discussion on the potential adverse effects of daily computer use on small children has been active ever since these devices became common at households. Some people argue that playing games or performing other computer activities even as often as every day is good for the development of young people. I don't agree with that and strongly believe that there is more negative about these habits, and further down in this essay I will argue why.

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Some people think that famous people's support towards International aid organisations draws attention to problems, while others think that celebrities make the problem less important.Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In today's world shopping malls have become so popular among folk our small markets have their own customers therefore in the following is a I will examine both views and also I will give my opinion with suitable reasons in the conclusion to begin with there is no denying that shopping malls are bigger convenient and they have ride of items because of because these malls are more spacious moreover shopping malls recommend efficient prices efficient and reasonable prices because they sell more products on a daily basis in comparison to a small markets on the other hand shopping malls are not as available as markets for instance there are three markets adjust near our house but there is just one shopping mall in our town for them or small markets are situated in various locations incentives does getting to a small markets is more convenient moreover markets do not have customers as much as shopping malls there for Market sellers have to sell products more expensive in order to make pr...

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Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier stage. Do you agree or disagree?

Some communities believe that, it is unfair that everyone should get retired without considering their proficiency but for some ,pupils it is necessary to get retired at an early age and enjoy benefits. Certain occupations do not require a break at a certain age. In this essay, I will discuss certain reasons for this matter and then give my opinion on this statement.

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Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas (in paintings, books, films and songs) in anyway they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

There is an on going discussion around the world that artistic freedom should be restricted or not, even in some democratic countries. I agree with the idea of no restricts because I believe that society’s best interest are served when there is no limitation in artistic fields.

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Some people believe that advertisements targeting children may have negative effects on them, and suggest banning such advertisements as a solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Ever since the liberalization (losing of restriction) of media, advertisements have been its primary source of revenue. Children, who are in their formative years (early stages 0-8), are more likely to be influenced by advertisements than their elder counterparts (peer/equivalent) and are regularly targeted by marketers. It is agreed that this has negative effects on children, thus, shall be banned. This will be proven by looking at how, these advertisements can ultimately make children defiant, (resistant) and play a part in distracting children from academic activities.

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How buildings have changed in comparison in the past

Over the past many years, there have been huge changes in how buildings are designed and built, from the introduction of indoor plumbing to luxurious extravagances like glass windows. There has also been a huge change in the construction industry as a whole, which has affected housing for everyone.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.

Nowadays, the society of some nations has been formed from younger people which outnumber than older ones. Although the Young population has many benefits, the drawbacks involved are important to be scrutinized.

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