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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Do you think English will remain to be a global language despite globalization?

Globalization is one of the processes to increase business productivity. In the last few decades, globalization has strengthened and many countries like India came to foreign states. In this ,process global accent also plays a vital role in the development of businesses. This essay will illustrate the importance of English as a global accent in the globalization process.

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Some people think that the family is the most important influence on young adults. Other people think that friends are the most important influence on young adults. Which view do you agree with?

Some folks opine that adults who are younger get influenced by the family. Whereas few people believe that friends play a prominent role to influence young adults. This essay explains my view of this subject in some instances.

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Most people these days prefer getting news online rather than reading newspaper or watching TV. DO you think it is a positive development or negative

In the olden days, newspapers and television were the only sources of information for people. With the immense development in technology, these mediums of information are swept away by the internet. Though most people have shifted from the traditional way to online for getting daily updates, I personally think that this is not a positive development and shall explain the reasons in the following paragraphs.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children) To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsorily incorporated in secondary education programs.In my opinion, this is an unwise proposal, which carries a lot of serious consequences on the society and citizens. Therefore, I do not agree with this view.

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It is predicted that robots are going to become increasingly important in our lives. how could robots be used in future? Will this development be a positive or negative develpoment?

With the thought that robots are going to be significantly important in our lives. They can be used as a helping hand for humans in various manufacturing industries and other workplaces in the future. This trend will lead to a positive development in our day-to-dayday activities.

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Tourism has increased so much over the last 50 years that it is having a mainly negative impact on local inhabitants and the environment. However, others claim that it is good for the economy. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and give your own opinion.

According to some, tourism has a great influence on uplifting the economy, while some argue that because of accessive tourism, local people and the environment has negatively affected. This essay will discuss some of the benefits and even drawbacks of foreign people visiting different places and also suggests my opinion.

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Celebrities such as actors, athletes and musicians earn large salaries compared to other professionals. Some people consider this unfair, while others think that celebrities deserve to be paid a lot for the work they do. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion on the subject.

Handsome salaries are earned by renowned people like sports players, role players and musicians compared to other working individuals. There is contention among people that whether it is fair to pay them more or not. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and would argue that it is totally fair to pay these celebrities more.

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Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce these increasing levels of crime. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, it is true that many countries have been challenged by increasing crimes happening per day. Some considered that a police force can address those kinds of issues. However, having more police on the street which cannot help reduce crimes and I completely disagree with this statement because there are other actions that can tackle this increase in crime issues.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A disappointing job or being out of cash is one of a million troubles humans might face during their lifetime. Some people seem to accept living with these difficulties, while others consider that they’ll try working to get through this. With these two ideas, I have several points of view which will be discussed below.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Majority of people believe that a foreign language is solely learnt with the purpose of visiting other countries or business goals, while, there is an opposite opinion that the mentioned goals are not the absolute reason to learn another language. In this regard I am going to discuss both views and elaborate on my reasons to concur with the second opinion.

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Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry to replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this time and age, some people have debates that it is not a great choice for an industry to replace old but experienced workers and recruit new and young yet inexperienced individuals. To my belief, there should be changes to the system.

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Some people prefer to have a job that requires a good deal of travelling, while others prefer a sedentary job. Why? What other factors should be considered while selecting a job?

In this contemporary world, everyone wants to do good standard job and ean more so that they can afford a good life. The work can require travelling abroad or within the country to different destinations or the person can persue job from home and office alone. In my opinion ,although work from office or home gives a person ample time for his family and little stress but , travelling extensively exposes them to diverse ideas, concepts and builds a global tourism experience.

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some people think sense of competition in children should be encouraged, other believe that children who are taught to cooperate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The children are a relevant part of our society as they will contribute to the country as well as society. When it comes to the upbringing of the youngsters every parent sees their child be successful and achieve extraordinary in life. As a result, they tend to complete wishes and desires which in return are expected of good results.

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Some people believe that all students should be made to have an unpaid job in their free time. Do you agree or disagree?

Getting experience is more important than getting paid. Some communities argue that students should prefer a volunteer profession rather than paid work meanwhile others are not choosing to be a volunteer. In this essay, I will discuss my opinion regarding the given statement.

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some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teacher will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, Education is very crucial in everybody's life. Some communities argue that children will be more influenced by their faculty rather than their parents. This essay describes both sides of the given statement.

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Nowadays fast food is a trend in many places and countries. Many believe that it is affecting our lifestyle and diet too much. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Fast food nowadays is literally everywhere and is almost accessible to everyone. Delicious and fast, this type of food seems to be a combination of the best of both worlds. Whether we are looking for a quick bite or just running low on meal options, these establishments are always there to fill our growling stomachs. As good as it sounds, there are still numerous reasons why they have to be eliminated from our lifestyle and that is why I agree that they indeed destroy our lifestyle. In this essay, I will explain why fast meal is not the best choice for our diet.

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Nation should spend more money on vocational training rather than on university education. Would the advantages of these outweigh the disadvantages?

Every county contributes significant amount of money to maintain world class education system. Many today feel that countries should prioritize skill training over higher education. Here, I coincide that disbursing highly on technical training will be fruitful as such practice would succor during recession period, also the unemployment problem of any country can be resolved. However, this trend may impact the development of the country.

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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think a role of a parent should be in their child education.

Academic performance has always been a vital issue both to parent and their ward. High number of youngsters receive little support from their parents in respect to their academic results, while others are excessively pressurized by their extremely zealous parents and this pose bad effect on the child. The reasons why parents over pressurized their kids and also their duties towards their child's academics will be discussed in this essay.

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Should the government fund the education and healthcare system? What is your opinion?

Public services which include education and health care are major determinant of standard of living in any society. It is agreed that government should fund education and the health sector. This essay will analyse how this will give equal access of citizens to good education and health care, as well as serve as an avenue for revenue generation.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is in the debate phase on how funds raised from various means into the society's pocket should be managed by the government. Meanwhile, some people are saying that public funds should be invested in public services rather than arts, music and theatre. This easy, will give consequential reasons why such should not be done.

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