IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 949

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

According to the opinion of a few people, students who Pursue higher education should opt for the branch in which they are interested . However, the other group of individuals say that branch for University education needs to be selected based on future perspective and scope. ,First we will consider the part that, one always go for the branch which makes him happy and understands better. The specialisation for higher education should always be based on one's interest as they will put all efforts to learn that, they will be happy throughout the process of learning, they explore, analyse, interpret from the heart. In the end they will secure a good scores and they will be having vast knowledge in the subject. After ,graduation they will join the jobs that give opportunity to grow further. By all the above process they will be happy in their life and personal life will be calmer with lots of enjoyment.

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Some people think that newspaper are the best way to get news. However, others believe that they can get new better from other media platforms. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is believed that nes should be read in an original way to absord latest information whilst the remaining trusted in social media flatform when getting news. As my point of view, this situation depends most on individuals hobby, negotiating is what im going to give my own vision below.

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Transport delays and long journey times are a widespread phenomenon in many cities today. What are the causes of this problem, and how could the situation be improved?

Undoubtedly, transportation has become integral part of urban cities. However, traffic jams and prolonged travel time is becoming common these days. Increased number of vehicles and poor infrastructure could be the main root causes to this problem. In this essay, both these issues will be discussed in detail.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, there is a high expectative that different kinf of transportation will be driverless, as a result, most of people will become just passengers. This technoloy will bring plenty of adavantages for humans arund the world, but it is important to look at the other face of the benefit.

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As well as making money, the business should also have social responsibilities. Do you agree or disagree?

Besides generating profits, enterprises have to be socially conscious. I strongly agree that enterprises should take a role in society while doing business. Firstly, being labelled as a social conscious's firm will increase the association's profits and secondly, it will enhance the company statue.

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries but others think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the internet. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people consider that it is mandatory to travel abroad to learn about foreign countries. However, others believe that there is no need to learn about those countries but to gain through the television and the internet.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent to you agree or disagree.

Allocation of taxpayers money and utilisation of national funds for the development of the country is a common topic of discussion for many. Whether it should be used to focus on railways instead of roads is debatable. In my opinion, I feel both need to be of equal importance and budgeting should be appropriately addressed to provide hassle free modes of transportation to the public be it railways or roadways.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to?

As we all know, our kids are the most important element of the future and they should be thought well to have the proper quality for their responsibility. Based on this fact, many people claim that we must show the difference between right and wrong to the next generation as soon as possible for the best outcome. They add, using a rigid discipline along with different kinds of punishment is vital.

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In most of the societies, the role of mother and father differs, what are the causes of this difference? What will be the parental roles in future?

Now a days in modern societies the parental role and responsibility varies and the main causes are the busy schedule of the parents. In this essay we will intend to describe the main role of parents which is obligatory to raise the children in a well-mannered and cultured way.

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In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Family organization and memebers' roles has siginificantly changed in recent years. There are no longer seperate duties for men and women, meanwhile, adults in a nuclear family are both breadwinners and housekeepers. This essays will prove that this is a positive, modern, ethical and stable changes.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation ?

In current days, people who are from different nations complain about the crucial role in having a house, yet renting a house may be unnoticable. Personally, I myself reckon that this development has both positive and negative terms in which it will totally depend on different individuals’ purposes

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Some people say that the Internet is responsible for destroying social skills of teenagers and young adults. Why do you think the Internet is seen as dangerous in this way and what can we do to ensure that it does not harm the social development of teenagers and young adults?

well there is alot of argue behind this about internet nowadays it is a challenging thing in universe in present time in this Essay i will talk about the internet complicate things and benefits also my opinition too

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Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree

It is widely known that the amount of wild animals has considerably decreased within a few decades mostly due to the humans' actions and natural disasters. Therefore, some individuals devote a lot of efforts in order to prevent wildlives from extinction, while others consider that these efforts are too exceeding. In my opinion, I completely disagree that there are over-abundant endeavours as well as I will expand why I think like this in the essay below.

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Some people advocate death penalty for those who committed violent crimes. Others say that capital punishment is unacceptable in contemporary society. Describe advantages and disadvantages of death penalty and give your opinion.

Currently, there are numerous disputes about the death penalty. Some people believe that this kind of punishment is necessary while others argue that it is objectionable to include this penalty. In this essay I will discuss several benefits and drawbacks of the death penalty and explain why this punishment should not be available in our modern world.

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In some cities of the world, cars are replacing bicycles. However, in some other cities, bicycles are replacing cars. What are the reasons for these two developments? In your opinion, which one is better?

Ever since technological innovations took place, there have been numerous options available for commuting from one place to another place from which cars and bicycles are the most prominent ones. It has been observed that individuals of a few nations prefer to travel by car, whereas, in some other countries, the number of bicycle users is even surpassing car users. The rationale underneath the origin of these two contrary trends appears to be the ease of owning a car, in contrast with, the concern for environmental protection, which altogether goes against each other.

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Today people are surrounded by advertising. This affects what people think is important and has a negative impact on people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Owing to evolution of technology, there is inevitable hammering of advertisements on television, radio, and roadside hoardings. Indubitably, it is the most persuasive tool of marketing hence has become an indispensable part of human life. In my perspective, it is beneficial for society by virtue of not only providing information about new products launched in the market but also dispersing social message effectively.

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Humans are basically selfish. Write a paragraph about 300 words to state that whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Include examples and illustrations to support your viewpoint.

Since evlution of humans, its nature is always debatable. Few people have thought that they are self centered, whereas others of the view that they are generous and kind. Personally, I am completly in favour of the latter view that every individual should be selfless.

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Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that the improvements in gender equality have encouraged many organisations to recruit a similar number of male and female workers. However, I believe that it is better for a company to adjust its workforce composition according to its business plans.

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Nowadays, some workplaces tend to employ equal numbers of men and women workers. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Given current circumstances throughout the world, more and more employers prefer to hire same number of male and female as an employee. There is no doubt whatsoever in my mind that this is progressive evolution.

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Some people think that getting old is a negative thing, whereas others think it is much easier for people to live in modern society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Aging is inevitable for everyone of us. Some find it an absolutely terrible thing that has no good for anyone, others believe that as the elderly, living in the modern society turns out to be much more comfortable and happy than ever before. I, for one, think that growing old in the modern society is much less distressing and anxious than before, but there is still a long way for the entire society to go. As we age, our immunity system deteriorates and we are more likely than young people to be subject to some dangerous diseases, including diabetes and cancers. This natural trend has not changed much despite technological advancements. As a result, the elderly patients with these diseases might have trouble living a normal life and some of them might suffer from premature death. Aside from the physical problems, the elderly are also more likely to encounter emotional issues. For instance, after they retire, the elderly tend to socialize less and thus gradually detach from ...

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