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In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world developed rapidly through the telecommunication and air travel. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that in the last century, technology has revolutionised the way people communicate and travel around the world. This essay will dicuss the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon.
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in many countries, people are now living longer than ever before . Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Others believe there are benefits is society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantage of having old aged people outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, some people believe that over population of old people could make several issues for government, while other people argue that those eldery citizen could also be advantage for society. In this essay I will examine both views and provide the reason why I think this is a negative trend for our society.
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Some parents want their children to read only serious educational books at all times. They don’t want their children to read entertainment books because they think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Why?

The question of whether parents should allow their children to read entertainment books along with academic books is very debated nowadays and has divided public opinion. This essay will try to shed light on my disagreement to the question.
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Some people believe that government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce congestion,others think that building more and wider roads is the best way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In today`s fast-paced world, everyone believe that the government should invest more fund on transportation to reduce traffic on roads, while some people think that expanding road to wider may help to overcome problem of congestion. In my opinion, it depends on the city and the area of the downtown, some cities have enough space for broader lanes and few cities have limited space, due to underground railaway can be the best option.
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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school ti. me. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The question whether school syllabus should include news of the world or not, is a very debating one nowadays and has divided the public opinion. In this essay we shall try to spot the light at both sides of the opinion and will try our conclusion.
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Some people think it is more important to plant more tree in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Trees are one of the most essential elements for a human being's survival. As people are evolving, trees are being cut down by a massive rate to make them use for various purposes like housing, furniture and etc. This becomes a major issue in the cities where environment is effected due to imbalance of ecological structure. This makes people beleive that planting more trees are important than the provinding house in the developed towns. I agree with the statement that societies need to grow more plants to have less polluted air and water sources.
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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The happest period of the life is the teenage years or the adult years is always a topic.Some people believe that they felt much happier in their chidhoods but the other people do not agree with that.I will discuss both views and give my own opinions.
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In many countries today, the eating habits and lifestyle of children are different from those of previous generations. Some people say this had a negative effect on their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Lifestyle pattern changes over course of time and it changes from generation to generation. Our earlier generations, their living patterns were completely differently than ours. And probably the generations afterwards would follow some other way of living completely different from ours.
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In some countries, the use of renewable energy sources is being encouraged. Is it a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Energy, it's what that runs the world comes from various sources. But we can divided the sources into two large sector, the renewable sources and the non renewable sources. Nowadays many countries promote using renewable sources. This essay will try to depict about the positives of using renewable sources with some relevant example.
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Some people think history has little to teach us, but others think that studying the past can help us better understand the present and predict the future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some are believe that past not teach us more much however some other think that study ancient times can be helpful in nowadays and upcoming time according to my opinion learning previous era may be helpful for better for coming soon time
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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Admission fee for enetring museums is definietly has its advantages for the museum andfor the individual experience,there is no doubt that the this claim is true but ont the other hand there is many people who argue that it should be free espacily that the point of the museums is entirely cultural education,this essay will discuss both views and provide a conclusion.
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People often think about creating an ideal society, but most of the times fail in making this happen. What is your opinion about an ideal society How can we create an ideal society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently, A lot of people have been establishing an perfect society but it always does not success. I belive that diffrenence between people is very important, so we shoud not to be ideal at every thing.
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Higher education seems to have been universalized as more and more people have the chance to pursue it. While some welcome this emerging change, others raise concerns over some unexpected consequences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many individuals argue about popularization of higher education, someone thinks that this can cause some consequences, otherwise thinks that this is a good trend. In my view this trend more bad than good for reasons which I will outline in the following essay.
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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people’s lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Fashion trends are always being around people these days, especially teenagers. Keeping up with fashion trend is like two sides of a coin, it would be great for human being and also bad for them.
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In the past, when students did a university degree, they tended to study in their own country. Nowadays, they have more opportunity to study abroad. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

In today`s fast-paced world, students want to study in foreign countries and get international degree after their university education, while in past times pupils tended to study in their home nations after graduation. The benefits of study abroad is they can sattle their life in better country, while home nation may give them limited opportunity.
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In many countires, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?

In many countries, smoking is now illegal in public places. Many people believe that such a ban is justified. Do you agree or disagree?
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Some people say that governments should be responsible for transporting children to school, while others believe that parents should get their children to school. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education for children is the most important and integaral part of the society. But people would argue on 'who should be responsible for taking them to school'. Some believe that it should be goverment's responsibility to develop a transportation facility that is specially designed for the take kids to school and back home safely. While other would argue that parents are responsible for thiers offsprings education. I beleive that it should be priorty for both, a goverment and the parents.
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In some countries, people buy far more food than they need. As a result, a large amount of food is thrown away. Why do you think some people buy too much food? What could be done to reduce the amount of food that people throw away?

Nowadays, most people purchased too much food than they actually need. There are a lot of causes, but based on a lifestyle everyone have recently, it is caused by social media. Social media plays a pivotal role in our life, especially due to globalization and the use of AI, which have been viral recently on the internet. Social media also gives lots of impact to our life, that is why it has a lot of positive yet negative impact. Then, what is the correlation to this topic?
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There are many benefits to a good eduction. Therefore, a university education should be offered to all students, not just students with good high school grades. Do you agree or disagree?

University education provides many benefits in the modern era and, thus, must be available to all students regardless of their grades. I fairly believe that higher education is essential for all, however, high academic performance from the school should also be considered for any additional support.
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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In resent year, some specialists such as doctors and engineers are expected to work in the country where they have learned, however, other people believe that those professionals should have freedom to choose wherever they want. In this essay, I will examin both point of views and also provide my own view.
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