IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

It is sometimes argued that whether pre-school experience or adolescent time plays a more pivotal role in students' future life. I firmly believe that both these experiences are irreplaceable.

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3. Goverment investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money Government mus invert this money in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

In recent year, the topic of goverment inves in the arts, such as music and theatre, is it reasonable has emerged as a significiant comcern for the general public while some in dividials contend that government inverment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money, i maintain that goverment inves in the arts, such as music and theatre, is not wasterful. This essay will elucidate these differing perspectives.

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Some people belive that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes?

In recent year, the topic of the advantages of engaging in unpaid work has emerged as a signigicant concern for the general publuc. While some individuals contend that unpaid comminity service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes, i maintain that voluntee public facility not necessarily a compulsory part of high school programmes. This essay will elucidate these differing perspectives.

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Some experts belive that it us better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this oitweigh the disadvantages?

In recent year, the topic of cildren to bigin education a foregin linguistic at primary school rather than secondary school has emerged as a signigicant concern for the general publuc. While some individuals contend that children should star learning verbal in elementary school, i maintain that child can learning english from high school. This essay will elucidate these differing perspectives.

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The main purpose of university is to provide graduate with the knowledge and skills needed for students to get a good job.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Universities play a major role in society, and my people appreciate that its primary goal is to equip people with essential skills for great employment. Some individuals assume, it should not be the only purpose, as academics should also enhance personal mind and creativity.The following paragraphs will examine why universities play a crucial role in personal development, research, and broadening students' perspectives.

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Some people think that homework should be given every day. Others think that it gives children under pressure. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Many parents prefer the idea of homework to their children but others think that it causes stress. I strongly agree with balancing due to that they are in an early stage and need some space to relieve their energy.

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Students should spend a period of time studying and living in a different country to learn language and culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that students who study their post graduation in foreign countries enhance their language skills and learn local culture. I totally agree with this statement and state my reasons in this essay.

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New technologies have changed the way for children to spend their free time. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

A widely heated debate regarding whether the merit of latest technologies outweigh the demerits has received accumulating attention from the public. As for my perspective, I am in favour of this statement and the reason will be elaborated on thoroughly as follows.

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There are a lot of countries where more money is being spent on vehicles in the towns. It is believed that the system of transportation is one of the main parts of the country`s economy.

There is a lot of transportation that is being developed. For instance: Buses and taxi cars which are run on electricity, public bicycles which are easy to use or high-speed trains which are getting more and more popular nowadays.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some tourists prefer to staying for a long time or living in foreign counties, and sometimes it can be a big problem for them. However, it will bring to person a lot experience and improve a language. In this essay, it will be discussed firstly about how people can improve using another language in society, then added why using external language may develop social skill, finally it will be better if people started to learn language and using it in community.

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Nowadays, a large amount of advertising is aimed at children. Some people think it is negative for children and should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, advertising targeting children has become increasingly prevalent worldwide. While this strategy is undoubtedly lucrative for companies, I strongly believe that advertising has a significant number of drawbacks including the negative effect on health, influence on behaviour and cognitive development therefore ads should be prohibited.This essay will discuss the negative consequences of ads on children.

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An increasing number of people do not know their neighbors, and there is no longer a sense of community. What are the reasons for this? How to solve it?

More and more people are unaware of their neighbors, leading to a decline in community spirit. Several reasons contribute to this issue, and there are ways to address it.

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Some people think that it is a waste of time for high school students to study literature, such as novels and poems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I agree with that, I think it is waste of time for high school studnts to study literaure.

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It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the government can't provide university places for a high precentage of young people. I a gree of this point, so in this essay, I am going to discuss this veiw and give an example.

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The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from the suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that is the most effective way to end traffic and tansport problems in the city is to encourage people from the suburbs and countryside to live in the city. I dissagree and do not think it is right to till the families who are live in the suburbs and countryside to come in the city will solve the traffic problems.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Zhazira.

It is argued that announcement is exceedingly lucky at coaxing us to buy things, while others say that sales promotion become common

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In recent years, it has become increasingly common for some members of the public to admire mostly sportsmens and other well-known individuals rather than the professionals like teachers and doctors. This essay will provide the possible reason and some positive and negative arguments.

It is the social media which is the main factor of this trend. This is, many companies are taking advantage of famous people’s faces in order to get immediate profit which means as soon as they post on celebrity endorsement ads, these ads can easily bring targeted leads due to the immense popularity of these figures. If it was to continue this way, inferior outcomes might take place. For example: an over-reliance on celebrities can lead to disrespect towards professionals who play an integral role in society, allowing people to start to overlook their performance. Given that, the professionals who always contribute to the development of the world should be appreciated not only financially but also socially.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are good at or that the find the most interest. till what extent you agree.

Some individuals believe that adolescents should focus on all subjects in school. on the other hand, some believe in focusing on the subjects they are good at or passionate about. In my opinion, I agree with the former because it can help in student's overall personality development and opens up a great number of career choices.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.

People without social network or no interest about that for me do not exist. of course I am talking about place, where people have got access with internet. Thus their advancments are bigger than other countries. Some people think coverage of celebrities is having bad impact, and in the future or in present have or will have influence on their children. While others think their children can have access all this tings and get information celebrities life and it is usually. This essay will discuss both views and explain why I believe, children can have access wiith that.

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Having babies later can have more negatives than positive effects on young adult? What is pros and cons about having babies later and how do you think?

In 2000s ,most of people prefer having babies later than their work . Since 2010, the fertility rate of Hong Kong has decreased quickly .Obviously, having babies later can have more positive effects on young adult .

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