IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 6

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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These days, more and more people are going to other countries for significant periods of time, either, to find a job or to study. There are clearly many benefits to doing this, but people who live abroad can also see some difficulties discuss of advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign country.

The topic of living in other countries has been controversial. Whilst many advocate that young people significantly move to other countries to chase their drem jobs or study for a long periods, others argue otherwise. Personally, I am inclined to the view that the merits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people think that there are things individuals can do to prevent global climate change. Others believe that action by individuals is useless and irrelevant and that it is only governments and large businesses which can make a different. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In recently years, global climate change has been a heated issue in human community all around the world. Some people hold the view that everyone can make a effort to protect our climate from getting worse wheras others believe that it is the governments should take the resposibility to make a change. As for as I am concerned, both individuals and our governments should take an action regardless of small or big to contribute to global climate change.

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In some countries, there is an increase in the number of parents who educate their children at home. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays there are many countries that is getting up the number of parents teaching yours kids at home. I think this has some positive and negative sides. The positive is the children will spend more time with their parents but in another hand they are not spend time with other kids.

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Some people think that renewable energy sources like solar and wind power should replace fossil fuels such as coal and gas as soon as possible. Others think we should continue to use fossil fuels while it is still cheap to do so. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Apart from traditional sources of energy, such as fossil fuels like natural gas and coal, producing energy from renewable sources has been increasingly popular. Some people support the idea of replacing fossil fuels with renewable energy sources in power generation, while some think fossil fuels should remain in use. This essay believes that the increased usage of renewable energy can benefit public health, but it is worth considering that fossil fuels power are cheaper and have a higher accessibility.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the current modernized era, people are increasingly concerned about children

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IELTS 8 - Exam 2 - Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

In this contemporary scenario, owing to the advanced technology, a considerable alteration has been observed in the terms of intraction by the individuals. I personally believe that technology intend to strenghten the relationship regardless the distance and allows the people to do multitasking. That is why, it is a favorable change.

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most high level -position in companies filled by men even through the workforce in many developed countries is more 50% female companies should be required to allocate certain % of these portion to women

Its argued that firms should be legally required to appoint a certain proportion of females to high-level positions. This essay agrees with that statement , because women are capable of doing a job to the same level as men ,and females are performing boys in many university courses.

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Some people think that the individuals who make the most money are the most successful. Others believe that the most successful are those who contribute to society, such as scientists and teachers. Discuss both perspectives and give your opinion?

Meaning of success is different from person to person. One on hand, a group of people think that a lot of money can bring success to them, on the other hand, other thinks by doing something for society for example, serve education, treatment etc. could bring the real success. The essay will examine the both statements and provide a personal opinion.

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The internet is an amazing invention which has changed the world. Some people think that the changes are all positive, while others think that it is negative. Give the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

The world, in fact, society, has changed a great deal because of the internet. Some people think that it has made life easier and positive. Others believe it causes problems. This essay will examine both the advantages and disadvantages of the internet.

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wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree.

There some countries who suffer from poverty and they can't help themselvs, so poeple believes that richer nations must give them some assit and help wether it's financial or even physical help. The essay agree with the statement, because we are human can feel the same, second this help can effect them as they can get some other benefit from the country rather than money.

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Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with their academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A certain group of people believe that pupils should learn real-life skills like car maintenance or bank account management with their day-to-day subjects at school. I totally agree with this notion, because, someday or another , students will have to face the real world and learning such jobs will prepare them early.

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Fossil fuels (coal, oil, natural gas) are the main source in many countries, but in some countries the use of alternative source of energy (wind and solar energy) are encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary world, usage of fossil fuels are commonly observed in many nations, leading global warming consequences to increase. While some countries are try to switch to generating sustainable energy from wind, solar, and water, I personally believe that the advantages of this action will far exceed the disadvantages.

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The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people suggest that the best solution to traffic and transportation problems is to live in the metropolitanareas, rather than the suburbs. Indeed , living in center near to centre of working places can reduce the high levels of traffic.

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IELTS Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The best way to study is a heated topic that is frequently debated. While many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their subjects, others argue that it is better to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. This essay will discuss both perspectives and present my opinion.

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Many children today are overweight and unhealthy. Give reasons for this and give solutions to fix this problem.

The world, and society has greatly changed. Many chilldren today are unhealthy. This is because they suffer from being overweight. This essay will examine the reasons for this and give solutions to solve this problem .

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming athing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today’s world, people propose that internet becomes more popular. As a result, they believe that newspapers are becoming out of date. In my view, I whole-heartedly agree this notion since internet is a more modern and convenient pattern for browsing.

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on young children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people think that using a computer every day is bad for young children. I agree that computer can be helpful sometimes,but I think they can also cause many problems if children use them too much.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the moden world, the issues on increasing traffic pressure and pollution are concerning for everyone. While some people suggest that increasing the price of petrol is the best solution for the problems, I believe that increasing petrol price is not the optimal method to solve the issues. I suggest that promote public transport is the ultimate solution.

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Some people say that shops should sell food products from the local area rather than sell food imported from other country's.Do you agree or disagree?

It is always argued that small shopkeepers should promote food items prepared by local brands, rather than they getting products from a wholesalers or big brands. In this essay the writer is agree with the statement and going to discuss both sides.

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Some people think that school children need to learn practical skills such as car maintenance or bank account management along with their academic subjects at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a discussion about learning subjects at school. Some people claim that practical skills need to be taught at school as well as the academic subjects. For example how to manage a bank account or maintaining a car. I agree with this statement and I believe it should be common in all type of school.

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