IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 9

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are two types of professionals based on how they choose places where they are going to work after graduated from their trainings. It is debatable whether they choose to work in the same country where they got their degree or not. People are divided into two different sides of this issue, the one who think it is a must to work in the same country and the one who think it is their freedom to choose which country they want to work in. This essay will discuss both sides of the arguments and provide clear explanations why it is required for them to work in the same country.

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One of the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present times, the upgraded medical care system can have both positive and negative outcomes in society. Despite that condition; however, I agree that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages, which will be discussed in this essay.

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Detailed reporting of crime has bad effects. Consequently, such details should not be reported in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays more and more people have had crime and bad effects. It is reporting details journalism and TV news. Therefore, it is the outcome of bad effects such as should not be reported in the media. It is I totally disagree with and in this essay, I will discuss it.

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Some people prefer to carefully plan activities in their free time others think it’s a waste of time. Discuss both views and give your answer?

A number of individuals tend to manage plan undertakings in their leisure time. Meanwhile, others assumed that it is kind of way to proscratinating. I will discuss both of these opinions and providing my own views.

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Some people believe hat all children should learn a foreign language from the time they start school, while others believe it is better to wait until a child is at secondary school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals feel that all kids should be learning a second language since early school years, however, others think that it should preferably begin from secondary school. I believe that it is better to start learning a foreign language since the beginning of school years as younger kids are fast learners. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and a reasonable conclusion will be drawn later.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

Over the last few years, climate change has become one of the major problems that people should pay attention. While some problems that global warming and many people are claimed to be the main reasons behind this issue, there are some effective solutions that can be applied. In this essay, I will discuss major reasons and effective solutions of this problem.

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Since most information about culture and history can be found online, museums are no longer needed. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is generally accepted that in the modern days internet has become a big important role in people's life. Some might argue that museums are no longer needed anymore because an online platforms are much easier to access through the information. This essay will demonstrates why both sources should still exist for the learners.

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Nowadays, most companies improve their living standards through economic development. However , some social values are lost as a result. Do you think that the advantages of the phenomenon out weigh the disadvantages?

In the last decade years, more and more countries were improving their economic stuations. Therefore, locals can live in high quality lifestyle. Nevertheless, some people think that the developing of living standards by economic policy caused to upset their some social values . However, there are many advantages of living standards through economic development. I believe that the advantages of developing quality lifestyle can outweigh its drawbacks.

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Some people think that the only way to judge someone's success in business is by the amount of money they make. Is money a true indicator of the success of a business? In what other ways could success in a business be measured?

The debate surrounding an idea that money is a standard to assess the success of people in business. However, the writer claims that money is just a supportive tool, while well-adaption and advantageous contribution to society are the core factors of success.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reason for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

From a generation ago¸ due to many reasons such as eating fast food and lifestyle society are becoming fat more and more and this causes that quality of life have become less. All around the world, nationalities have accomplished some action, nonetheless, they have encountered obesity. This problem influences individuals at any age. In this essay, we look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions and I extend my opinion.

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Some people suggest that childern do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

I am currently doing a project on why people in Zetland should study IT. I have found a pie chart with the results of some opinion polls. Now I am going analyse the data in the pie chart, express my point of view and draw a conclusion.

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Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem?

Studying at higher education is more difficult than at school for some individuals. In this essay, I will first look at the reasons for this phenomenon before suggesting some viable solutions to alleviate it.

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Foreign language should be part of curriculum of the school. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, we find no difficulty of learning from every corner of the world thanks to the development of the Internet. The advances of the Internet and communication technology as well form a new thinking of the world: the world is flat. In this world, language is the most important factor preventing us from living together, communicating and learning cultures of each other. To this end, I strongly agree that foreign language should be a part of curriculum in high schools.

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Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination,while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals consider that there are different ways to achieve success in their life, while some people think that money and appearance are two factors affecting to people's success. This writer is of the opinion humans can reach a peak of their career when they work hard and have determination.

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İn some countries ,a few people eran extremely high salaries.Some people think that this is good for a country,while others believe that the goverment should control and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both two views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, some of poullations have a high everage of salaries. Whilst, other not. This issues has a wide dubts among people. Same people believe that a high salaries bring a benefits for a country, and other falks have a opposed view. In forwards prgraphas l will discuss both of view, and then draw my own opinion.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that young people choose IT related jobs. It is undeniable that IT professions have become an essential part of our life. In this essay I will look at facts about people's view, examine factors responsible for this opinion.

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The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table shows information about how many people visited Germany annually through three major airports, over a five-year period, between 2007 and 2012.

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Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?

It is often argued that it is more advantageousto choose ajob with high wage, even if it doesn't appeal to you at all.D completely disagree with this opinion and think that job satisfaction is much more important than salary. First of all, I believe that job satisfaction gives people a sense of fulfillment that no money can guarantee. Even if someone is earning a high salary, but feels tensed and compromises with his conscience, this person won't enjoy his life, While pursuing one's interests will always bring pleasure and feeling of satisfaction. For example, a lot of famous researchers made their career choices not because of appealing wages, but because they were passionate about science. Add a That's why it's more important to choose the kind of work that makes you happy than to look only at a high salary. Secondly, doing what you like keeps you motivated and therefore leads to a career growth. In other words, there is a strong relation between job satisfaction and productivity....

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Some people think that all entertainment TV programme should educate people about the importance of social issue. To what extent do your agree or disagree.

It is argued that some indviduals believe that social awarness must be provided by all the TV entertainment channels . I completely disagree with the statement. This essay will discuss that parents would be more concern about their childrens and people might be loose interest in channels .

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There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate about whether people have the right to attend college so the governor should cover the tuition waiving. Meanwhile, from in my point of view, I do not consider myself an advocate of this idea.

Without a shadow of a doubt, the waiver of tuition fees is not the sole responsibility of the government. This is because the authorities have to pay for many other facets and residents should pay for their tertiary education. By doing this, they will have more responsibility for their studyings and raise awareness about their learning quality. For example, building facilities, thriving tourism and expanding the entertainment industry can be cited as a compelling instances, which the government must invest in. Moreover, if the governor pays in full, people who drop out of schools or are slothful will also benefit, which would be unfair to other conscious learners. Thus, the government is not required to cover the educational expenses of students attending universities.

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