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An increasing number of people do not know their neighbors, and there is no longer a sense of community. What do you think are the causes of this situation? What are the solutions to solve the problem?

There is no denying the fact that an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors, and there is no longer a sense of community. This essay will discuss the causes of this issue and suggest some soultions.
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ome people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others belive that some imformation is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Sharing information in order to improves knowledge is a good way in many occasion, such as, research, business, and even academic world. Altough, some people would not be to open with sharing their thoughts, it's because some informations are to valuable to be shared freely for them. This essay will gives two sides of perspective regarding to the topic.
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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to a child’s development as other subjets, so it should be compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or this disagree?

In this fast-paced world, art is considered to be an essential course in the student's curriculum. Learning art facilitates development of cognitive ability as well as proved to be a good leisure activity. I would argue that art lesson is beneficial and made compulsory at early stages of education.
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People living in the twenty first century generally have a better quality of life than people who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Human who lived in the beginning of the 20s usually have a sense of satisfaction in their lives more than those who lived before the 20s. This essay agrees with this idea because living in this century, they can get whatever they want easily, and also there are a lot of available sources.
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Some people suggest that bringing up children by the whole family includimg uncles, aunts and grandparents is better, rather than only by parents. To what extend are you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that bringing up children is a vital thing during family structuring. While it is a commonly held belief that whole family members should share in upbringing process. There is an argument that opposes it.
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coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities in australia bought instant coffee bought fresh coffee went to a cafe

The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of people purchasing fresh coffee, instant coffee and having coffee or tea at cafeterias last month in five Australian cities - Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart.
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In some countries there is a restriction on legal marriages. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

In this contemporary world, there is no exaggeration in mentioning that, in this millennium, many people are neglecting marriage despite the age limits imposed for legal marriages.
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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development

Some people suggest that foodstuff of another national are sold at supermarkets and buyer can easily by it , I totally think this is a positive development. Firstly, this essay will discuss, why comsumption food processed from global countries can bring the world development. Secondly, it will discuss the positive impact this may have on a mental health of that country.
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Many people depend on their cars for everyday domestic, social, and working needs. However, unlimited use of cars causes a number of problems. What are some of these problems? What can be done to reduce the use of cars?

The issue of significant number of vehicles has been controversial. Some people believe that the unlimited time use of cars causes pollution and environment issues, whereas I agree with those who think that this problem can be solved by practical solution such as limit usage year or more strict quality check. On the one hand, it is commonly believed that long time usage cars may cause many society issues. One of the main reasons is that the exhaust from old cars or bad quality vehicles make smoke and ashes which lead to contaminated air, since the old vehicles cannot burn all fuel, which smoke and ashes will happen from that cause. For example, according the latest research conducted by Kasetsart University, it was revealed that 50 percent of bad quality cars which cannot burn all fuel tend to make the environment worse. This example shows that unlimited usage cars play a major role in contaminated air. On the other hand, it seems to me that this problem can be addressed by the gove...
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Many things can influence the academic achievement and emotional growth of a student. In this regard, peers have more of an impact than teachers do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many things can influence the academic achievement and emotional growth of a student. Some people think that cohort have more of an impact than teachers do. I totally agree with it for some reasons.
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Scientists say that junk food is harmful to people’s health. Some say the way to ask people to eat less fast food is to educate them, while others say education does not work. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Researchers believe that junk food is detrimental to people's health.Many believe that the way to ask people to consume less fast food is to teach them,while others say education does not work.This essay will discuss both side and an opinion will be given in the subsequent paragraph.
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Some students like to take distance-learning courses by computer. Other students prefer to study in traditional classroom settings with a teacher. Consider the advantages of both options, and make an argument for the way the students should organise their schedule.

Nowadays, especially after the spread of Covid-19, a lot of students are used to studying online instead of going to school. As we are going to see in the next two paragraph this new form of school has many advantages but also many disadvantages. To be honest, as I was at university during the pandemic and so I lived that period as a student, I prefer to go to school or to university instead of staying at home in my bedroom without seeing anyone. In fact, during the pandemic for me staying at home was really bad, first of all because I was not used to it and second of all because I am a really sociable person and, of course I wanted and needed to see and chat with all my friends. At the same time, even if I disagree with them, I understand those people who prefer staying at home and doing everything with calm.
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Some schools are no longer teaching children how to write with a pen. Do you think children should learn handwriting skills?

There are some schools that do not teach children how to write in hands anymore. According to their perspective, this teaching method is convenient, creates less stressed situations for students, takes lessen time than traditional methods. However, based on my opinion I strongly disagree with it and I assume that schools must teach children handwriting.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Whether to share information online has raise to a controversial debate in recent years. Some argue that it is beneficial to share plenty information for research, enterprises and academic society which can benefit citizens in most nations, whilst some content that information is way too indispensable to be shared without charging as it proves to have negative impacts on both national security and human’s wellbeing. In my opinion, I firmly find that the later point is more convincing.
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Some people think that it is good for spending money on finding life on other planets, while others believe it is a waste and governments should focus on problems on the earth. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

There is no denying the fact that individuals can easily accessible to the other planets. While it is a commonly held belief that people should be focused on this trend to finding life on the space. There is also an argument believe that the governments have full responsibility among Earth issue.
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Some people beleive that culture will be runied if it is used to earn tourism revenue,but others consider that tourism is the only wsy of protecting culture.Discuss both side and give your opinion

Nowadays, as you probably know, tourism is very important for our economy. In fact, if you think about it, in every big city is full of touristic attractions, let's think about the Duomo of Milan, or about the Colosseum in Rome, or also about the Vatican's museums always in Rome. So as you can imagine tourism is very important, especially for an historical country as italy. Even if it is so important, not everybody appreciate tourism, in fact, as you can probably imagine, some people, with whom I disagree, think that tourism will ruin our culture. To be honest, as I have already said, I don't agree with this belief, in fact I think that tourism is a way to protect out culture and to give our best to protect our history.
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Older people often choose to spend their money on themselves (e.g., on holiday) rather than save money for their children after retirement. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a lot of people get mad with their parents because once the get old, instead of saving moneys for their children, they prefer to spend them all, to do what they want to do. So at the end of the day they don't have moneys for their children.
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In many countries, a small number of people have extremley high annual incomes. These people should be required to pay a much higher rate of income tax. To what extend do yo agree or disagree with this opinion?

In today`s fast paced world, in many nations, small amount of individuals earn extreamley higher yearly income, a higher rate of income tax should be paid by them annually. In my opinion, i am completely agree with the statement that rich people should pay higher rate of tax compared to medium class people.
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Nowadays, many children are overweight and unhealthy. This problem is becoming very serious in many countries. Give the reasons for this and give the solutions to fix this problem.

Nowadays, many children are overweight and unhealthy. This problem is becoming very serious in many countries. There are some reasons for this and also some solutions that can help.
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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does thistrend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Nowadays, due to the unstable economic development and undeniable working prospect, it is a normal phenomon that more and more students choosed to study abroad. In this essay would examine on both advantages and disadvantages towards students and countries.
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