IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 3

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skill such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays, A teenage has a lot of chance to choose what the job , dream and futher is.In Hong Kong, the typical parenting style is to let their child to fousing on their studies, to became a doctor? became a lawyer?those profestional or expert in the society. But for those kid who has poor academic result , what they can presue for their whole life?

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1.In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

With the advance of technology, the future where adoption of driverless vehicles that only carry passengers would have realized is getting closer to us. Meanwhile the pros and cons of the advent of driverless cars have sparked widespread discussion. While there are some challenges to overcome, I firmly believe that the advantages of driverless vehicles far outweigh their disadvantages.

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Many people believe that social networking sites like Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a view that mass media networking sites such as Facebook have affect negatively on both people and society. while some oppose this notion, I personally argue as they have negative impact for all individuals.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others belleve it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Focusing on a single main subject or learning futher more subjects has always a contrversal topic between students. Some people think that learning more subjects can boarden students' horizons while other argue that students should pay full attention on one main subject in order to achieve more in that area. In my opinion, students should be given a chance to explore more instead of being limited to study only one subject. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of studying more subjects at a time.

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Some people think that the modern technology is having a negative effect on social relationships. To what extent doyou agree or disagree?

It is believed that the advanced technology has bad effects on social relationships; i lean towards this view that the negative effectst will be stronger if we overuse it, but tech can help us stay in touch.

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More people are choosing to work remotely instead of in traditional offices. Do the advantages of remote work outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, the majority of people are working from home rather than coming to the physical workplace. Although working remotely can disrupt the social connection between colleagues, I believe there are more advantages because it increases the productivity.

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the most important aim science should be to improve peoples lives. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment?

People from all around the world should be in favour of scientific power. In addition, science should also be used for this exact target, so citizens could use the most from it. But societies do not always follow this mindset, and some have even decided to go against it.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Many research found that employees have more productivity when working days are shorter in a week. I am also a firm believer of this view.

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Many students graduate high school and wish to continue their studies in another country. What is the right answer for students? Give the advantages and disadvantages of studying overseas.

The issue of studying in another country has been widely debated, with strong opinions on both sides. While some believe that it provides with students self - reliant and independent and to know new cultures, others argue that it homesickness. In fact education has both advantages and disadvantages.

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In many western countries, an increasing number of couples are choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to the couples who decide to have no children.

The world is very dierent today. Also, society has changed a great deal from the past. Many couples choose to have no children. This is happening in many western countries. This is essay will examine what are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children.

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Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

Nowadays, some students want to getan education in foreign countries. They applied in schools and universities sectors according to their qualification. While, studying abroad offers benefits, it also poses significant challenges.

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Around the world, large cities face the task of dealing with rapid population increase. What problems foes urban growth cause? What are some possible solutions to these problems?

The robust population development becomes a problem in large cities around the globe. The main problem absolutely as a result of uncontrolled birth number that has been increasing along the time. Moreover, to force that aim, the government must address strict regulations, in the form of rewards and punishments, regarding the number of children in a family.

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Some people believe there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime.Others ,however ,argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and motivation for committing it,should always be taken into account account when deciding on the punishment .Discuss the both these view and give your opinion. Give reason for your answer and include any relevent experiences from your own knowledge or experience.

The discourse about criminal sentences has been a debate in law, whether the punishment rely on the crime type or consider to a personal condition and motivation of the perpetrators. Some experts argue that punishment must be fixed due to cimes that have been done. Meanwhile, some academes and human right activists assert that crime does not stand alone and must be an interference from personal background. However, I agree with the latter which consider individual reasons to punish a criminal.

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Some students choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad?

Studying abroad is popular nowadays, especially going to the western countries like United Kingdom. Why were the student choose to study in another country for a time during high school or university? Most of the student are not used the teaching mode and the strong competitive stress in Hong Kong. To discuess whether it is a good decision, let's compare the advantages and disadvanatges of studying abroad.

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These days is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In this modern era, it's become easy for individuals travelling to another nations as compared to past.

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The pictures illustrate a number of important changes which took place in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

The two maps illustrate the changes in a town after building a hydroelectric power dam in 1990 and 2010.

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Some people think that government should be held responsible when problem of homelessness snd unemployment arise.Do you agree or disagree

It is often argued by some people, higher authorities should take care of citizens when they are facing challenges ,such as sleeping on roads because they do not have accommodation to live and another major problem , unemployment. According to my perception, I agree with the statement. They should announce free accommodations for needy people. They might provide them with government jobs in many sectors ,such as, education, security department and health.

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More and more fathers are taking a break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the famnily than having both parents work fiull time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, many fathers from around the world are resigning from jobs because they want to stay home and to take care of their children. According to my perception, strongly, I do not agree because this step will impact on daily life of families ,such as may be fathers might be not happy to staying at home. Moreover, most descoveries of science are introduced by men also stronger than wonen. Furthermore, it is possible that money is not enough for expensives.

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Nowadays, children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time doing sports. Why is this happening? Is this a positive or negative development ?

These days, allocation of substantial amount of time has become a daily routine of majority of teenagers around the world and the term of sport is forgotten almost entirely for them. I strongly believe that it is the influence of the development in the terms of gadgets which changed the lifestyles of human-beings to 180 degrees. Obviously, it is adversive for them, since, it replaced the fruitful habits and interests including sports.

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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, many people are of the opinion that studying through the internet has wide-spread appeal, whereas some believe that offline classes are more advantageous compared to online ones. I firmly disagree that traditional education is more effective because online education provides greater flexibility and accessiblility for learners.

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