IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish, causing pollution on land and in water, so people think that they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or dis-agree?

Many believe that plastic bags are the primary cause of waste, polluting land, and water, so they should be banned. I completely agree with the statement.

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In many cities, crime is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? what can government do to help reduce crime levels?

It is true that crime is increasing in many cities these days. In my opinion, there are three reasons why crime is increasing such as poverty and unimployment, drug addtion, and new technology developments.

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In many countries governments are investing in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? Do you think this is an appropriate use of government money?

Thesedays, government are investing in modern technology to cope with the public due to the increasing demand for public services such as digital health records, e-learning platforms. With the purpose to enhance delivery and reduce waiting times. I think it is a good solution to the public.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problem can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

At the present, almost all people have some problems but nowadays, they have difficulties sleep and also they are not enough sleep. This essay is about sleep problems and solution to this problem. As the child, some young people spend a lot of time to phone and electronic game this situation bring disturb people's sleep. If people doesn't spend to network their time, they will not a chronic disease to sleeping-sicknees. Besides that,sleeping-sicknees has many different kind of problems and solutions.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is factual that income plays essential part in selection a job. While agree that this may fit to many individuals, which I believe there are many people choosing career baes on other proposes.

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The line hraph shows the Number of tourists visiting a Caribbean island (2010-2017)

The given line graph illustrates information about the number of people coming to a specific Caribbean island over a seven-year period from 2010 to 2017.

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Some people think it’s always better to live in the rented accommodation. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of it.

The majority of people believe that always well to live in a home apartment. In this essay, I will discuss the pros and cons of home apartments.

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students at school and universities learn far more from lessons with teachers than from other sources( such as internet and television). to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is a powerful asset for a person . Education is known as a tool to shape personal as well as social life . Due to the rapid growth of technology, the world has come a long way . One of the most conspicuous trends of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people who believe pupils learn important lessons from educational institutes rather than other platforms such as television , the internet and all . There is a range of conflicting arguments related to the assertion. I vehemently discord with the notion . In my point internet as well as television has a great impact on children's development. In the succeeding monograph , I intend to delve into the rationale for both sides as well as proffer examples to justify my notion.

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More money should be spent on hiring and training the police force in order to reduce crime in big cities. What is your opinion?

Many people are of the opinion that more funds should be invested in educating the police force so that there is reduction in the criminal activities in large metros.I fully agree that more money is essential for improving the police force to bring down crime rates

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The advantages brought by the spread of English as “a global language” will outweigh the disadvantages. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is commonly known that learning foreign languages such as English and others, is important to the future of our country.But we must protect our national languages.

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Many believe that to be successful in a particular sport, having a natural ability is more important than training and hardwork. Discuss both views n give your opinion.

Most people believe that having a natural ability in terms of a particular sport is better than those people who are in training and hardwork. I belive that having a natural gift when it comes to a particular sport and those who are in training and hardwork are both important factor to be successful.

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Some people think that advertising may have positive economic effects. Others think it has negative social effects because advertising makes individuals less satisfied with what they are and have. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Advertising sparks debate, some see it as the boon of economy, while others fear its social downsides. This essay explores both perspectives, ultimately suggesting that advertising can be a valuable economic tool, but responsible use is a key.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health amd that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is well known that it needs to get good quality both physical side and psychology side for the health of people. Some people believe that increasing the number of sports facilities can solve that problem. I do not agree with that because the health of people is not the only sport. It needs sport other things. I going to explain some reasons in that essay.

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In search of jobs, many countryside residents are moving to urban areas for better job opportunities. This essay will discuss the main consequences of migrating to city ares and propose some solutions to this problem.

The main consequences caused by farmers relocating to different city spaces are a decrease in aglicultural products and an increased risk of overpopulation. Farmers are the backbone of a country because they provide food to people. Less production leads to scarity of food and it is hurting the country’s economy. Additionaly, dependency on other countries also increases. Morever, as city areas are already crowded by large numbers of people when humanity move these places it becomes overpopulated and unmanged. Air pollutuion, noise pollution, and finding suitable jobs are the major rising challenge in downtown areas.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The legislation of several nations believe that economic growth is essential than any other goal; Alternatively, other part of a world contend that, alternative growth is as required as the economical progress. This essay will discuss both the viewpoints and argue in favour of latter one.

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Many people believe that social networking sites ike Facebook have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree. sive reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience Write at least 250 words

In this era, networking sites has become essential in this modern world. Using social networking has both positive and negative aspects. I will discuss both in coming paragraphs and will give my opinion.

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The pictures illustrate the changes in Shipsmouth between 1995 and 2010.

The maps show how Shipsmouth developed over a 20-year period from 1995 to 2010.

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The older people who need employment have to compete with younger ones. What problems can this create? What are some solutions?

The elderly people that requirement service have to vie with younger ones but this issue create a problem for aged people that they don’t how can solve this subject because society need to fresh workforce.There are a lot of cause that retired people do not ability of services to society however they have to work because they cant earn enough money so they want keep social position and they don’t leave their work that this subject so important because the world is changing every day and create a new vision for the future . so we can say they cant promote with new world and if the people don’t leave their job and don’t give their position to younger men , our society will never progress. really so hard to find jobs for the older person . anyway if jobs are created for them, how can younger human find a good job for themselves.On the other hand , there are a lot of young workforce with high capacity that they have a update information with innovative thoughts and they know ab...

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is commontly though that all most invention of science and target of technology was supported to create and improve was original from promoting people's live. I completely agree with this thinking for the reasons provided below.

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Computers and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, high-tech devices and AI technology are increasingly being used for online education.

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