IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

band

Social Media has helped us increase our virtual networks. This has isolated us physically, making us socially awkward in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

It is an undeniable fact that these days, online networking has become easier due to social media. There is another view about the given trend, that it leads to more virtual exsistance rather that physical. because of which, some feel nervous in public. I am mostly in favour of the aforementioned statement. This essay will delineate both aspects.

band

Some people think educated people more valuable than people who learned skills through experience. Do you think educated people are most valuable for society? What kind of skill can people learn through experience that can benefit society?

There is no denying the fact that education plays a crucial role in individuals' lives. Some people argue that educated people are more worthy than others who gain skills through experience, there is also an argument opposite to it.This essay will discuss this issue from both view of perspectives, and it demonstrates the type of skill individuals can learn from experience.

band

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers and books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

band

Some people think that health care should be free for everyone, while others believe that people should pay for their medical treatment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, whether citizens should pay for medical treatment has become a topic of heated debate. Some people believe that it is necessary to pay for medical services, while others argue that it should be free oto all people. This essay will discuss both views and present my own opinion.

band

Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Undoubtedly, with the development of technology, computers are invented as time goes by.Whereas some people look upon the computers as the most imperative invention ,others do not think so.As for my perspective , I am in favor of the former, and reasons will be elaborated thoroughly as follows.

band

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, office employers can achieve their work online at home by compmuters and routers. people argue that working at home are preferable. In my opinion, I absolutly agree with that, because workers would have more freedome and save alot of money.

band

In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In recent years, commercial products are often promoted with the emphasis on its innovations, claiming that those are new in some way. While this act has possiblities to attract more consumers, I strongly contend that it is not necessary, and might even bring negative effects such as blurring customers' attention and facilitating the growth in amount of fake news.

band

Air pollution is one of the largest problems the world is facing today. What are some causes of air pollution and what measures can be proposed to solve this problem?

Nowadays , air pollution has become incredibily a serious issue in many countries . This essay will examine the main cause associated with this natural phenomenon and propose practical solutions to address them .

band

Some people feel that we should protect all wild animals. Other people think that only some wild animals should be protected. Discuss both points of view and give your opinon.

People have different views whether we should preserve all wild animals , or protect only a particular species of them . While I understand the reasons for the second argument , I believe that the first perspective is more reasonable .

band

Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no special knowledge of the following topic. Many childhood diseases can now be prevented through the use of vaccines. Should parents be made by law to immunise their children against common diseases or should individuals have the right to choose not to immunise their children? You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Children cannot choose whether they have one disease or not. However, it is founded that some of them can be prevented by using vaccines. In this essay, I will argue from both sides, agree and disagree, with if parents should be forced to immunise their children fron diseases.

band

In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes than bying them. What are the advantage and disadvantages of renting a home?

In many nations, mostly people giving more preference to rent their homes rather than buy it. There are number of drawbacks and benefits are associated with the home renting. These will be discussed in details in the upcoming paragraphs.

band

Most people are undoubtedly influenced by heavy commercialization and advertising of products; consumers are buying out of desire more than necessity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In this age of time every one is using samart devices that show all type of advertisements all the day. In my opinion I believe this amount of exposure to advertisements made people think that they need the product or the idea they trying to sell in order to have a better life standers.

band

Social media is gradually replacing in-person face to face contact with many people worldwide. Do the benefits of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

Although there is no doubt that social media platforms are gradually replacing face to face contact globally , i believe that the advantages are greater , since the social media has played incredibily a crucial role in shourtened the distances of the world .

band

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore, every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there is a lot of things the humens need to life like education transport and even food and water. Some peoplebelieve it's role the humanity companies or even governments to supply to water while others think it's charge the people. In my point of view, i see it should charge free.

band

Some people think that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities, while others believe that this would have little effect and other measures are needed. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many argue that increasing the number of sport facilities are the best way to develop public health, while others believe that there are other significant measures. This essay will discuss both perspectives, but I believe that number of sports facilities play a vital role in public health.

band

Some people believe that schools are no longer necessary because students can study well at home through the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rapid advancement of digital technology has changed how we access information, leading some to question the continued importance of traditional schools. While it is true that thr internet offers a vast platform for self-direction learning, I firmly believe that schools are still essential. Educational institutions provide a crucial social environment, structured guidance and holistic development that online learning cannot replicate.

band

Many young children have unsupervised access to the Internet, and are using the Internet to socialize with others. this has can lead to a number of dangerous situation which can be threatening for children.what problem do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can this problem be solved?

In the modern era, the internet has become an essential part of children lives. While children use it without parental supervision, they are involving several serious issues that can affect their lifestyles. Although problem have raisen significantly because of this trend, there are various solutions.

band

Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to takle the issue?

Are you feeling hot in this summer? The temperature in recent years is rising and keep on having new record in the highest temperature year by year. It is because of the global warming, a serious and alarmed issue around the world. In this essay, we will discuss the causes of global warming and the measures.

band

With the help of the internet and television, many people are becoming famous. Is it a positive or negative trend? Include examples.

There is no denying the fact that a lot of individuals are coming under the lam light due to development of TV and internet. I believe it has many pros than cons. This essay will delineate the both aspects of aforementioned statement.

band

It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no denying the fact that taking risks can lead to a huge success or to failure, while it is a commonly held belief that it is important for individuals to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. There is also an argument that opposes it. From my perspective, I believe that the disadvantages of taking risks outweigh the advantages.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.