IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, there is viral idea about the weekdays and weekend for the worker . Some people find short working week better than short weekend and others argue this idea. From my prospective, I have balanced opinion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this question. Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for children, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There are many types of sports, which are played by athletes at the national and international levels. However, some believe plays are crucial for learners throughout their studies, while some do not like the choice for students. I appreciate both views , but i consider that sports are more important for the mental health of students.

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Should rich nations help poor nations, if so in what ways?

In this era, two kinds of nation in the world, developed countries have more facilities for their people, so most of people are wealthy. In contrast, poor countries don't have enough baughet to give enough facility to their poor people. In my perception, digitalized countries can help poor nations by providing charity for hospitals. In additional, they can help them in education moreover, also by giving them subcity on agriculture machines and road making instrument.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during their working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

Most of the office workers don’t get exercise during the daytime when they are in the working place and they don’t get exercise during leisure time. So, they tend to get serious health problems. The main reason is sedentary life style. We can introduce different short-term and long-term plans to overcome this problem such as, organizing sports events and mass health education programs.

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Many people aim to achieve a balance between work and other parts of lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of the problem? How to overcome it?

Work-life balance is becoming more and more widespread in many parts of the world, yet many individuals are not able to achieve it. There are several reasons that lead to this outcome , and there indubitably are various elucidations for this matter.

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Nowadays,shopping has become an unavoidable activity among youngsterswhich has suppressed many essential exercises needed for individuals. Do the merits of the given trend outweighs the demerits?

Of late, shopping has grown progresssively as an integral element in the life of the younger generation, for which they are even willing to compromise their health. Considering the deleterious effects of consumerism, I strongly believe that the negative impacts of this lifestyle require genuine attention.

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Rich countries often give financial aid to poor countries, but it does not solve the poverty. So rich countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than the financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First-world countries usually make money donations to third-world countries, however, it does not solve poverty. Thus, they should assist the poorer nations by different kinds of aid. Personally, I tend to strongly agree with this statement.

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People should work a fixed number of hours per week and employers should not ask anybody to work extra hours. discuss both of views and give your opinion.

In modern workplaces, there is an ongoing debate about whether employes should work a fixed number of hours per week or be required work overtime when necessary. Personally, I believe that working limits with occasional overtime with fair compensation, ensuring both worker well-being and organizational efficiency.

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Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is causing damage to the environment and should be stopped now.

The effect of economic growth has been debated over the last few decades. Many people argued that the only way to terminate famine and make people wealthier is economic growth, where others believed that economic climb can cause negative impact to the nature and should be ended immediately.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? (nv)

There is no denying the fact that the social medic applications play a vital role in improving many sectors in the nation. While it is a commonly held belief that these digital programs have many pros to keep contact with others, there is an argument that opposes it. In this essay, both pros and cons will be discussed, following by my own opinion.

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Nowadays, many people had more than one job to support their life than before and they think that only do one job has become old trend. In this essay I will explored my opinion both pros and corns also with some demonstrated.

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some people think that having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe skills and experience are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is true to say that academics are important to secure a job in this competative time however, hand on experience is also a vital asset. chunk of people opine that getting a university qualification is the best method of getting a good job while others thinks that skills and hand on experince are more impertive. I will disscuss both the points in the following paragraph before giving any verdict.

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In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years , it has become apparent that adults have littile free time because they devote most of their time studying . This essay will examine the main causes of this issue and propse some possible solution to address it .

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Some people have decided to reduce the number of times they fly every year or to stop flying altogether. Do you think the environmental benefits of this development outweigh the disadvantages for individuals and businesses? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, scientists have invented various devices to improve people's lives. One of the important ones was an airplane. It is said that people try to decrease their trips with airplanes annually, or stop using these devices. What I believe is that flight system has a significant role in our lives, and I think drawbacks of lacking this system are more than environmental advantages, and I'm going to elaborate on this in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politicians enjoying power well into their eighties. Clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment? Give reasons for your answer.

There is no denying the fact that the age of retire cause significant issues for countries. This essay will discuss the better age to support people to stay in paid employment and reasonss for that.

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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Can't say much about the gap between the rich and the poor and it's size, I believe that it's all relative. The one thing I'm certain of is that the advances in modern technology make it much more easier to make a profit even when your skills are rather lacking or you don't have the necessary education for a high paying job. We have all the tools that can help us make a considerable amount of money available to us in our smartphones, laptops, etc. The single most powerfull tool, in my opinion, is AI. Lets take AI generated cat videos for example, most people have seen them, some are even addicted to them. Just a few years ago to make such a video and make it profitable, the creator would have to be a decent animator, or a cartoonist, these days you just enter a prompt hit the "generate" button and voila a cat bartender on a cruise ship serving drinks.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, in many countries, food products are used for import and export trading. In my opinion, this type of trading has more negative aspects. Likely, it can cause harmful environmental impacts, may worsen food safety issues, and can damage to local economies.

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many goverenments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that educational progress is equally important for a country. discuss both this views and give your oun opinion

Many people hold different opinions about this issue of what is the most important for country the economic improvement or education improvement .firstly, I agree with both opinion .on the one hand , in order to improve the economic it connected to higher level of education ,on the other hand , that level of highly education only exist wen the countries have good incomes.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Surgary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, many processed food and drinks contains high level of sugar and will cases many health problems for individuals. Due to these situations, many governments should develop regulations to encourage their people to live with healthty lifestyles and put extra taxes for sugary products to mitigate undiserable moments in the future. I agree authorities should cover individuals life's and restricts sugary products immediately.

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There are many zoos around the world now. Some people think zoos are cruel and should be banned. What is your opinion?

Nowawadays, there are a lot of places someone may visit to see different animals. To some individuals, keeping animals locked up is cruelity and this must be illigalised. However, I think this is a good move as highlighted below.

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