IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 8

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In the developed countries, consumers can go to supermarket buy food all over the world. What do you think it is positive or negative development

Nowadays, locals from countryside are migrating to cities because of facilities such as, for education and best hospitals to aid. Despite this fact some still prefer to live in backward areas. From my perception, developed sides can be more beneficial for us. I discussed both views below.

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Many students graduate high school and wish to continue their studies overseas. Outline the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.

On one hand, many students today are willing to continue their studies overseas. First, one of the advantages of studying abroad is reviving industrial projects. For example, having a strong communication skills between companies in order to produce a product. Also, students and specifically designers must understand the culture to earn the qualified degree in their certificate. Secondly, culture and life experience is another factor that creates sensitivity and positiveness while studying outside. Such as, learning the tradition of the culture and how people live peacefully. As well as, facing experience by learning something new that benefit the society too! Although, some students might face obstacles but they will be honored to deserve what they achieved. Finally, earning a high quality education is a fabulous thing to benefit both countries. For example, China has different methods of living and teaching, they depend on their mentality by reading a lot and work in handcrafting....

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The increasing reliance on the Internet and digital technology is having a detrimental effect on people’s ability to focus and think critically. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is a view that the growing dependence on online resources and modern technologies is harming individuals’ ability to maintain attention and think analytically. While some oppose this notion, I personally agree in favor.

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The increasing reliance on the Internet and digital technology is having a detrimental effects on people’s ability to focus and think critically. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There is a view that the number of increasing the trust ness on the internet systems is having a great effect on an individual's thinking critically abilities while others say that it can bring harm, I personally believe that it can have the best impact on their life.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In recent many people experience that the distance between them is closer due to the advancement of technology, still some of them feel they are isolated from others with the same caution. It is commonly thought that the development of internet raises the speed of interacting between individuals, which lead the world to network. On the other hand, the addiction of phones also took the chance from them to talk each other. This essay will discuss about both perspectives before presenting my opinion.

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Many people today buy ready-made food rather than spending time cooking. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages of this development outwiegh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays people purchase prepared meals rather than taking the time to cook it themselves. Moreover, this can be based on the lifestyle they have. I believe that this benefits a lot of spontaneous people, however this may also impact negatively some aspects of life.

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Do you agree or disagree that Reading fiction is more enjoyable than watching movies?

I disagree that reading fiction is more entertaining and fun than watching movies, while reading could be a great way to learn new things, but movies can trigger the visual and auditory sensations in the body, enabling one to feel the story, and blend with the characters.

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Some people think that parents have an powerful influence in child's life, while the influence from outside the home plays a bigger part of child's development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals believe that the household pays a great part of a kid prespictive of life. However, there is a bigger part that affects a child, which is the activities he might face outside the house. I fully agree with this statement. Mainly because the way he will deal with his future is how he will learn from the encounters he had from other people during his childhood. also, how he saw his parents deal with difficult situations could have a large impact one a child.

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These days, many films and pieces of music are free online. Is this a positive or negative development? Write your reasons and use examples from your experience.

Nowadays, many films and pieces of music are free online. In my opinions, it is a negative development in the society. I will use two reason to explain.

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Nowadays, more and more people choose to do their shopping onlineinstead of going to physical stores. Why is this so? What are the disadvantages of this trend?

It is possible these days, due to technology , people can buy almost everything online using E-commerce platforms. A large number of people prefer shopping online rather than going to physical store. In this essay, we will discuss some causes and downsides of this trend.

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Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is to increase the number of sports facilities. Others, however, believe that this money should be spent on educating people about a healthy lifestyle. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

nowadayes a lot of people think the best way to develop public health is to create sports facilities. While others argue this idea and think we should spent the money on guiding people about a healthy life.

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In some countries, many children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people say it is the responsibility of governments to solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no denying the fact that obesity becomes as a global issue. While there is commonly held belief that government should pay attention to tackle this trend, there is an argument that parents should spend immense effort to improve their children's' health. In my opinion, I tend to consider that governments and families should engage the responsibility together.

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Some feel that schools should be mixed with both girls and boys attending while others feel the genders ought to be separated.

There is a debate over how pupils should study , with some saying that both sides of gender should study together, and others arguing that they should study separately. In my opinion, schools should be mixed with both girls and boys as it helps them to be communicative.

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More and more people are using the internet to do their tasks rather than doing in person. Does the advantage of this trend outweigh the disadvantege?

There has been a noticiable rise in the number of people using the internet to perform various of tasks instead of completing them in person. Although, online services certeainly provide convinience and less effortless for everything and save time, I believe disadvantage - particularly the decline critical thinking and reduced personal effort, technology take power over the society

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In some countries many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

In some countries, numerous school leavers choose to work or travel for a year before entering higher education. Although there are some disadvantages, I believe that taking a gap year has more advantages, and this essay will discuss both sides.

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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, as important to child's development as other subjects, so it shopuld be compulsory in high school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that in high schools, students should have to study art classes because it helps a child’s development. While some people oppose this notion, I strongly argue in favor of it, as it not only benefits a child’s development but also has many advantages.

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Some people believe that governments should provide free healthcare for all citizens. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate surrounding the cost of healthcare has been a contentious issue, with opinions diverging significantly. Although there are compelling arguments on both sides,I firmly align with the view that providing free healthcare can reduce inequality and the spread of diseases, for several reasons.

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Motor vehicle crashes are one of the leading causes of teen deaths. To prevent such road accidents, the government should ban people under 24 to drive motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagr

In society, life has changed a great deal, especially in driving motorcycles. This includes how people derive the motorcycle. Moreover, I believe that driving motorcycles is the most significant point. This assay provides key information to support the idea of both views. r

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one i s very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive o r negative situation?

Owning a property instead of renting houses is very crucial to society. Having a personal home gives people a sense of stability and peace. I truly believe it is a positive situation because it is providing long-term stability and family relaxation.

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globalisation has highlighted the need international communication. it is often argued that english should be a compulsory subjecte for all school children around the world. others argue that this would do more harm than good. discuss both of view and give your opinion.

Nowadays the world is getting conected for business, travels, and the main language is english, and because this evolution some people are discussing about the english be mandatory in the schools while some people argue this can be worse than good. In this essay I will discuss these both views and give my own opinion.

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