IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 8

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Nowadays, many people had more than one job to support their life than before and they think that only do one job has become old trend. In this essay I will explored my opinion both pros and corns also with some demonstrated.

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some people think that having a university degree is the best way to secure a good job. However, others believe skills and experience are more important. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is true to say that academics are important to secure a job in this competative time however, hand on experience is also a vital asset. chunk of people opine that getting a university qualification is the best method of getting a good job while others thinks that skills and hand on experince are more impertive. I will disscuss both the points in the following paragraph before giving any verdict.

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In some countries, young people have little leisure time and are under a lot of pressure to work hard on their studies. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent years , it has become apparent that adults have littile free time because they devote most of their time studying . This essay will examine the main causes of this issue and propse some possible solution to address it .

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Some people have decided to reduce the number of times they fly every year or to stop flying altogether. Do you think the environmental benefits of this development outweigh the disadvantages for individuals and businesses? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the contemporary era, scientists have invented various devices to improve people's lives. One of the important ones was an airplane. It is said that people try to decrease their trips with airplanes annually, or stop using these devices. What I believe is that flight system has a significant role in our lives, and I think drawbacks of lacking this system are more than environmental advantages, and I'm going to elaborate on this in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries the average worker is obliged to retire at the age of 50, while in others people can work until they are 65 or 70. Meanwhile, we see some politicians enjoying power well into their eighties. Clearly, there is little agreement on an appropriate retirement age. Until what age do you think people should be encouraged to remain in paid employment? Give reasons for your answer.

There is no denying the fact that the age of retire cause significant issues for countries. This essay will discuss the better age to support people to stay in paid employment and reasonss for that.

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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Can't say much about the gap between the rich and the poor and it's size, I believe that it's all relative. The one thing I'm certain of is that the advances in modern technology make it much more easier to make a profit even when your skills are rather lacking or you don't have the necessary education for a high paying job. We have all the tools that can help us make a considerable amount of money available to us in our smartphones, laptops, etc. The single most powerfull tool, in my opinion, is AI. Lets take AI generated cat videos for example, most people have seen them, some are even addicted to them. Just a few years ago to make such a video and make it profitable, the creator would have to be a decent animator, or a cartoonist, these days you just enter a prompt hit the "generate" button and voila a cat bartender on a cruise ship serving drinks.

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In many countries nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the modern era, in many countries, food products are used for import and export trading. In my opinion, this type of trading has more negative aspects. Likely, it can cause harmful environmental impacts, may worsen food safety issues, and can damage to local economies.

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many goverenments think that economic progress is their most important goal. some people, however, think that educational progress is equally important for a country. discuss both this views and give your oun opinion

Many people hold different opinions about this issue of what is the most important for country the economic improvement or education improvement .firstly, I agree with both opinion .on the one hand , in order to improve the economic it connected to higher level of education ,on the other hand , that level of highly education only exist wen the countries have good incomes.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Surgary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Recently, many processed food and drinks contains high level of sugar and will cases many health problems for individuals. Due to these situations, many governments should develop regulations to encourage their people to live with healthty lifestyles and put extra taxes for sugary products to mitigate undiserable moments in the future. I agree authorities should cover individuals life's and restricts sugary products immediately.

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There are many zoos around the world now. Some people think zoos are cruel and should be banned. What is your opinion?

Nowawadays, there are a lot of places someone may visit to see different animals. To some individuals, keeping animals locked up is cruelity and this must be illigalised. However, I think this is a good move as highlighted below.

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Young people are often influences in their behaviours and situations by others of the same age. This is called peer pressure. are the advantages outweigh disadvantage

Having a certain group of friendcircle is a common phenomenon for teenagers. While some people think that company of other people can influnce young generation people negatively, but other say that having a good circle can create positive impact in life. Through there are some debate but I think having peer or group provides more advantages compare to disadvantages.

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Young people are often influences in their behaviours and situations by others of the same age. This is called peer pressure. are the advantages outweigh disadvantage

It is often believed that mostly youngsters are affected in terms of behaviours from others people of their same age group. There are more downsides of this trend in case of young people than benefits that will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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More and more young children have mobile phones. Some people say it is good thing for them, while others say it is bad things. What is your own opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is becoming increasingly common for youngsters to have phone. Some people believe it will bring positive effects for children. In fact, I side with those who believe providing children with a phone can bring negative effects for two main reasons.

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If countries are serious about solving traffic problems, they should tax private cars very heavily and use the money to provide free or very cheap rail travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the prevailing era, traffic congestion has become a grimmer problem around the world. It is an argued issue whether the government should impose levy tax on private vehicles to alleviate the issue and this money should be invested in providing free and less costly rail travel. Although having tax on private cars can help to mitigate the traffic jams, I contemplate that this phenomenon will create some major problems in every corner of the world.

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Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health on education to keep people well. To what to extend do you agreed or disagree with this opinion

There is no denying the fact that advanced technology plays a vital role in treatment procedures in the last decades. While it is a commonly held belief that the majority of countries disburse a large amount of money on this technology, there is also an argument that this fund may have beneficial effects when spend it on the education to maintain people's' knowledge.

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Some people think that starting to studying a foreign language in primary schools is better than starting in secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some individuals say that learning a new language in primary school is better than starting in secondary school. The main benefit of starting to study a foreign language at a much younger age is that they can have an important skill in communication from an early age. Meanwhile, the main drawback is that the children will most likely struggle in their mother language. I agree that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages.

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Most people are worried about young children playing video games, what problems might these games cause as a whole to society and individuals? What solutions can you suggest to reduce these problems.

NOWADAYS, PLENTY OF CHILDREN SPEND A LONG TIME PLAYING THE PC, WHICH GENERATE VARIOUS PROBLEMS FOR BOTH THE COMMUNITY AND INDIVIDUALS. IN THIS ESSAY, I TEND TO DISCUSS THESE PROBLEMS. ADDITIONALLY, TO THE SOLUTIONS TO DIMINISH THEM.

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The key to solving environmental problems is simple: present generations must have a less comfortable life for the sake of future generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

THERE IS NO DENYING THE FACT THAT WHEATHER CLIMATES HAS CHANGED A LOT COMPARED TO THE LAST 10 YEARS, WHICH IS A COSEQUENCEOF OUR HAUMAN BEHAVIOUR. WHILE IT IS A COMMONLY HELD BELIEF THAT THE KEY TO SOLVE THIS ENVIROMENTAL ISSUE IS STRAIGHTFORWARD, THERE IS ALSO AN ARGUMENT THAT OPPOSES IT. IN MY OPINION, I CONSIDER THAT SACRIFICE OF THE CURRENT CREATION WOULD BE THE CORRECT CHOICE TO DO.

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Access to clean water is a basic human right. Therefore every home should have a water supply that is provided free of charge. Do you agree or disagree?

Getting the pure water is basic thing for people , in order to every houses should have water connection that give to without payment . I strongly agree statement due to when people get the poor waters it contain the many consequences such as drinking the unhealthy water is lead to the several diseases. and other point is like When public get the free charge of water , people can get more financial advantage especially people who come form the middle class they can easy to adobe instead buying the water .

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of helth and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

In a few nations, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is getting worse. Let's discuss the probable causes of this effect in the following paragraphs.

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