IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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globalisation has highlighted the need international communication. it is often argued that english should be a compulsory subjecte for all school children around the world. others argue that this would do more harm than good. discuss both of view and give your opinion.

Nowadays the world is getting conected for business, travels, and the main language is english, and because this evolution some people are discussing about the english be mandatory in the schools while some people argue this can be worse than good. In this essay I will discuss these both views and give my own opinion.

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Some people believe that parents should pay their children for doing household chores such as cleaning or washing dishes, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is a good practice for the children to perform household chores; therefore, many people believe that they should be paid for their work at home such as cleaning, mopping the floor, and for many other tasks. Nevertheless, others contradict them, saying that paying many may bring adverse outcomes for the parents as well as for youngsters. Both of the ideas would be captivated in the forthcoming paragraphs along with the conclusion.

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Access to computers has increased rapidly today, so the number of children playing computer games has risen too. This essay will discuss the main issue associated with this situation and propose some possible solutions to avoid them.

Video games nowadays are exciting for children, even for young people. In my opinion, allowing children to play video games without parental control can lead to serious problems. Therefore, a lot of negative effects have appeared for parents, like obesity, and poor academic performance.

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Family members and friends caring for elderly people find it hard to spend enough time looking after them. What are the causes of this problem? What solutions can you suggest?

It is an undeniable fact that old-adulthood is considered as childhood where it required surveilliance. In this era, it becomes strenous to devote sufficient time for caring to the elder people because of the responsibilities and hectic schedule. But it can be countered by some methods which I will be discussed in the paragraphs.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Fame is a result of a lot of difficult work. Some people dance, some sing, others make videos or blogs on different websites, not everyone becomes famous, but most of them have problems with hate and bullying in social media. People's opinions are different. One part thinks that persons with a lot of followers need more privacy. Another part says that an invasion into their private life is the price of fame.

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ome people think that working long hours is beneficial for companies and individuals. Others believe that overworking has more negative effects. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Overworking is a current underlying issue in the modern world which affects a wide variety of individuals. In my outlook, this is something negative as overusing your brain may lead to long-term health problems and overall reduced productivity hurting the economical results of a company.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future any kinds of cars, buses and trucks on the roads will be driverless because of still developing self driving systems. With this improving system, driving to any where in any time won’t require a driver. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some people believe that university students should focus on the skills of employment for the future. Others think they should focus on acadamic study only. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Student are not easy to find a jo nowadays , therefore , they might also want to study skil of employment for the future which can help them to find a work easily . However , focus on skills to work can provide a future that stusent can get a work of their subject , they hace less knowlage to learn. Therefore , people is better to foucus on acadamic study on class .

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Studying art in school improves students’ performance in other subjects because it is easier for multi-skilled students to learn new things. That’s why art should be obligatory in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a lot of benefits of art education.It helps to develop different qualities and provide scope of learning new things for school going students, and that is why art should be considered as a compolsary subject in school. I agree with this statement and this essay will discuss the reason behind my aggreement with that statement.

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it is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statment ?

The given proposal asks if individuals should save money for the future, for me in this a totally agree with the question.

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Some people believe that international organizations like the United Nations have more power than individual governments. Do you agree or disagree?

The debate surrounding whether people should believe international organizations or individual governments has been a contentious issue, with opinions diverging significantly. Another compelling argument on both sides, I firmly align with the view that people should trust international organizations instead of the government, for several reasons.

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The chats below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts compare the average proportions of three nutrients in typical American meals: sodium, saturated fat, and added sugar. Overall, dinner contributes the largest shares of sodium and saturated fat, while snacks are the main source of added sugar. Breakfast consistently accounts for the smallest proportions across all three nutrients.

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The chats below show the average percentahes in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

These three pie charts are showing the average unhealthy nutrients in food such as sodium, saturated fat and added sugar in the diferent meals (breakfast, snack, luch and dinner) consumed in the USA.

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In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it?

In our fast-pace modern world, some people are suffering from stress or stress related physical or mental problems. From my perpective, many people are struggling in the hustle-bustle of city life, so this is the solid truth of modernization or the urban life. Every problem has its own circumstances and consequencess, so we will attempt to find the possible causes and solutions of these problems.

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Overfishing of the world's oceans threatens many species with extinction and is putting the livelihood of millions of people around the world at risk. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?

In recent years , Overfishing of the world threteans several species with extinction . Consequently , it has become a serious issue to the people who are in charge . This essay will examine the main causes and propose some practical solutions .

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Online education and training is becoming increasing popular in business world. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage

I today's contemporary world, the delivery of education through online become the most popular. On the other hand, the students could not concentrate in detail on the lectures when it is online. Online trainings could not be much more effective compates phsical classes. In this essay will discuss the pros and cons in detail.

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Question: In order to alive traffic problems, government should tax private car owners heavily and use the money to improve public transportlong. What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a solution? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Due to increasing traffic problems, some people things that government should put some healty amount of tax on car owners and authorities can improved public transport system by using that money. There are few pros and cons of this system such as reducing burden on government's budgets and reduction in air and noise pollution, on the other hands, this is bad idea for individuals'income .

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Some species of animals are almost extinct; and many others seem to be fast approaching a similar risk. What are the reasons for this? What should be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The some animal species already abolished and some of them very close the totaly disappearing. In particular, until the 19th century, the animal extinction is solid truth and scientics have conducted many scientific researchs to reveal this. From my perspective, man-made environmental pollution and it's main two consuquences fuel the global warming and climate change. These are seems like the pave the way of animal extiontion.

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How important is homework in improving student performance

In today’s world technology play’s a major role and a one that can not be neglected. For many years, individuals have suffered from various issues resulting in their health. Therefore, it isolates people from reality leaving numerous detrimental effects. The line chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person in four countries — the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy, and Portugal — between 1967 and 2007.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One of the most debated question for the people about sport sphere is the importance of physical and mental strength. This essay is more likely to agree on mental advantages, however discussing and analyzing both of the opinions.

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