IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The plans below show a public park (Grange Park) when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the changes that have occurred to Grange Park today from 1920 when it first opened. Overall, there were several features that have been moved, but the main change is the development of the amphitheatre, water feature, children’s play area and the removal of the fountain.

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In the furure, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

ome people think that no one will purchase printed newspapers or books as they can get them for free online instead of paying for them, in my opinion completely i agree with that statement and I believe no more people buy hard copies for two reasons.

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Students from rural areas often find it difficult to access university education. Some people think that it should become easier for them to study at universities. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

There is no denying the fact that distance plenty of issues close or far . While it is a commonly held belief that educators from village areas stump up hard-to-access universities, there is also an argument that opposes that. In my opinion, I completely agree students' close areas help them arrive conveniently.

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working weeks should be shorter and workers should have longer weekends do you agree

have a longer weekend. While it is a commonly held to belief that employees must have fewer working days and they deserve an extra weekend. there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that employees definitely need a longer weekends.

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Every year several languages die out. Some think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion .

It is thought by some people that our life will be easier if a number of language in the world are decrease because many languages are disappear and they don't think that is nescessary. In my opinion, I believe there are a few languages are easier in communication to people around the world while, there are some drawbacks of language missing.

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some people think that the government should spend money on adult’s population who can’t read and write while other not. To what extend to you agree or disagree?

ome countries has people who dont know to read and write and goverment should help them ,its argued that government should spend money to teach them while other not , in this essay Im giving my opinion and discuss both views , even though i think its good step for teaching the illiterate .

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Some people believe charity organisations should only offer help to people of their own countries. Others against it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

there is no deyning the fact that charity orgnazions has become a huge part of helping people there is no deyning the fact that charity orgnazions has doing a huge part of helping people to thire countries , while otherr blelive they should help out side of their regoin , i will discuss both view and give my opinion

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Some people believe that students should be required to study a foreign language in school, while others think it should be optional. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

‏In today’s rapidly changing world, learning a new language plays a vital role in shaping individuals’ futures and supporting a successful society. While some people believe that students should be required to study a foreign language in school, others argue that it should be optional. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own opinion.

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Studies show that many criminals do not receive enough education. For this reason, some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate them rather than punish them. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, most of factors of the criminals refer to not enough education. There are opposite views how to reduce crime including both educating them and punishing them. I agree educating is the better way to decline criminals rather than punish them.

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In many countries, the number of animals and plants is declining. Why do you think it is happening? (causes) How to solve this issue? (solutions)

There is increasing in the number of disappearing of animals and herbage in a large number of countries.by the incorrect place for growth or the random killing

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortages of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that thinking about the future aspect of your choices is something that consider essential. While it is a commonly held belfie that accepting a situation that have lack of money and unstitfay job is good thing. There is also an argument that opposite this idea by saying we need to find ways to improve the situations. This essay will analyses this topic from both points of view and than I will express my opinion

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Some people think that being able to communicate online is breaking geographical barriers and enabling people, who would never have the chance to meet, communicate onlcine. What are the advantages of international communications? Are there any disadvantages too?

Few individuals opine that communicate online is removing international bonderies and make pupils able to digital communication , who would never have the chance to meet . I believe that it has pons and cons both . I will discuss my view points in subsequent paragarphs.

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The rise of social media platforms has made it easier for people to vent their frustrations and complaints publicly. What is the consequence of this trend? Is there any benefit to expressing complaints on social media? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people have chance vent their complaints publicly because social media made it easier for them. This essay I will discuss about disadvantages sharing frustrations. How this new trends poisons internet platforms. But, on other hand I will find benefits also which impact I can get from this rises trend.

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Climate change is the biggest threat facing humanity today and in order to survive as a species we need to act now. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Climate change is a big problem affecting many parts of our lives and the environment. Its main impacts are on our weather, how safe our food is, and even what the world map looks like.

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The given illustration displays various sources which emitted greenhouse gas in the UK between 1990 and 2010.

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Many people drive personal vehicles to school and work. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this type of transportation? Discuss both and give your own opinion.

Big amount of people use their own vehicles to go to school and work. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this kind of transportation ?

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It is a natural process that animal species such as dinosaurs become extinct. There is no reason for people to prevent this from happening. Do you agree or disagree?

The lost of animals variety like dinosaurs is a natural phenomenon. We as a human no chance to stop this incident. While, it is true that extinction can be natural part of evolution, many modern extiction caused by human actions rather than natural processes. This essay agrees that extinction of animal species is a natural process.

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The governments investment in art such as music and theatre is a waste of money, government must invest money on public service instead. Do you agree or disagree?

there is no doubt that these days governments are putting money in art like music and theatre is a waste of resources, the question is that government should spent more money on public services? In this essay I'm going to discuss my view and draw my personal conclusion.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

Nowadays, obesity is one of the biggest problems especially in western society. According to some researchers, the percentage of overweight children in western society has reached by almost 20% in the last ten years. This case threatens children’s lives, and it should be solved. This essay will discuss the causes and consequences of this case, and it will also try to find solutions.

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Some people believe that individuals have no power to improve the environment, and only governments and large companies can make a real difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

there is no denying the fact that, some believe that individuals have no power to improve the environment, and only goverment and large companies can make difference, i strongly disagree with this opinion and i will discuss both view.

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