IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many of the products we buy nowadays break or wear out very quickly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for manufacturers and the public?

Nowadays, the most people mention that¸ there are lot of lower items products in sales. In this essay, I will touch on both benefits and drawbacks of these goods producing, from different aspects, such as satisfaction, financial, economic and etc.

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Some people believe that schools should only teach childrens subject which are beneficial to their future career and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is undenieable fact that,education plays a significant role in children's life. Some people argue that, for future achievements school should focus on main subjects rather on subjects like music and sport. I totally disagree with statement and think it carry a lot of disadvantages for pupils in school.In my both academic and creative subjects is the most effective approach.

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

When it talks to the health of people, some people may opine that it is decreasing nowadays. Since people getting more and more weight, this may lead to a decline in people's health and fitness. In this essay, it is going to talk about the reason of this situation form and provide people with some suggestions.

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The way that people work today has changed significantly due to development of technology. Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages.

The mayority of the population belive that technology has been one of the biggest objects that have changed the way that people think, study, live, and work. This essay will discuss the both sides of the coin refering to the pros and cons of technology in the laboural aspect.

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the use of media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you yhink the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

In this essay we will expain the potential effects of tecnology in the social interaction between people. I strongly believe that this aceveration it is false.

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Health experts say that obese women and women over the age of 40 should not be given free fertility treatment (IVF) because they are more likely to experience health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Older women should not be provided with free fertility treatments according to some health specialists as there are higher chances of medical issues. This essay will delineate the both aspects along with the reasons why I do not agree with the given statement.

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Throughout history, male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders, it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people said a peaceful society could only happen if a woman were in charge. That opinion is formed because history has shown us that warfare and conflict are mostly led by male leaders. In that regard, i would disagree with the statement.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some students believe, that focusing on qualification subjects is more valuable, than studying other in addition to their main course. They are also concentrate their full time and attention for their university subjects, but is it really better, or not?

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to thair main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

University students strugle to understand how to use their knowledge and time before trying to qualify somewhere. They swing between learning about other areas. In addition to their main subjects and giving all of their time and ambitions on studying for a selected course.

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Shopping is becoming more and more popular as a leisure activity.However,somepeople feel that this has both positive and negative effects. Why is shopping so popular? What effects does its increase in popularity have on individuals and on society?

Nowadays, people are more fond of shopping than ever before and shopping has became a from of leisure activity. There have been profound impact on both individuals and society. This passage will focus on the reason of the phenomenon and the influence it bring out.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think this is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some of the people who are going to university take a break before starting university because of pleasure.Many people believe that it is excellent idea while others thinks it is a waste of time. In my opinion taking a break is really good idea for me .

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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Other argue that teenagers shouldn’t sacrifice their rest and after-school activities to work. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. While some of them argue that teenagers shoud rest more by joining after-school activites instead of having an extra job outside school. I would lke to discuss on both views.

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Some people think that there will be decrease in international travel in future. Do you think the less amount of international travel is a positive or a negative development?

Some people make predication that in the upcoming future, people will visit different countries less. I believe that, this is a positive trend because, it will promotes organizations to grow within the Nation, and be stress-free travel.

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Health experts say that obese women and women over the age of 40 should not be given free fertility treatment (IVF) because they are more likely to experience health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

It is contend by health specialist that fertility treatment should not be practised by women, who are overweight, and above the age of 40, since it creates complexity during pregancies. Nevertheless, in my opinion, I totally agree with the viewpoints, due to the reduce abilities of natural birth after cross certain age limits, and malnutrition of an infant through innovation tools. This essay will shed lights on my position with reasons and examples.

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More and more people are using mobile phones and the internet to communicate. Therefore, people are losing their ability to communicate face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Cell phones and the internet are used as the medium of communication by many a number of individuals and this trend is being popular more than anything now a days. Consequently, people are being incapable in direct, real world face to face interactaion. In my opinion, I strongly agree that people are more invested in virtual connection rather than physical one in this internet dominated digital era.

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The two plans show how a farm has changed between 1950 and today. Overall, it is clear that the site has been significantly developed, with several new facilities added, while some original features have remained in the same place.

The two maps illustrate how a farm has changed between 1950 and today.

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In the future, nobody will by printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read eveything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The future of printed media is a topic to disscuss in many countries resently. I strongly agree withe the idea that printed news papers and books will become obsolite.

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In some countries in Europe, some children from the age of 11 or 13 go to schools to learn more practical skills that will help them get a job. Other children stay in schools which provide a more general academic education. What should schools do to prepare students for the world of work? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In most of nations in Europe, fewer pupils from the age of 11 or 13 are send to schools to aquire excellent technical skills , which will promote them to aquire future employment, while other students remain in the institutions , which aids in gaining more academic studies. In my opinion, the schools should prepare both education in a balance way to support the learners for the employment for the world. This essay sheds light on both aspect of education with its examples.

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Some people think students should not leave universities without good understanding of how to manage their money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that financial management plays a vital role in improvement the economic condition of individuals. While it is a commonly held belief that students in a high stage should focus on this concept to enhance their life, there is also an argument that opposes it. From my perspective, I tend to believe that we should educate scholars about that in the early age.

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Some people belive that robots are very important to human’s future development, while others believe they are dangerous and negatively affect society. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is usually believed that technology has a strong influence on people’s lives nowadays. In my opinion, I agree with this statement, but some people may disagree. In this essay, I am going to discuss this question from both points of view and give reasons for my opinion.

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