IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 2

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called peer pressure. Do the disadvantages of this issue outweigh advanages of it.

The teenager are most often motivated in their behaviours and situation by the others in the same age group, which is know as peer pressure. There are many drawbacks likewise, falling in bad habits, loss of academic success, nonetheless, some of the benefits would be motivation, can lead to personality building. If it is properly guided by parents and teacher, peer pressure is always overweigh the advantage.

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Health and leisure life has become much more stressful compared to our parent’s generation. As a result, stress related illnesses are increasing around the world. Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

Many folk think that travelling and maintaining good health is becoming more and more stressful nowadays, due to this , many crowd experience severe diseases such as heart attacks. The primary reason for this issue is social news. I think blindly following trends rather than following your heart is one of the main reasons for added burden.

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Today, many people do not know their neigbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In the today's busy world, many individuals are not even familiar with their neighbours, especially in the big urban cities. This problem can lead to multiple negative consequences which will be discussed in the below paragraphs alongwith the possible preventive measures.

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Some people say that schools should concentrate on teaching students academic subjets that will be useful for their future careers. Other people s

For some individuals’ point of view, academic subjects should be the center attention for students that will be beneficial in shaping their academic pursue while others assume, non core subjects such as music and sports also play a crucial role in.

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The pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to the present day. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The images provide key information on how the park changed from 1980 until the present day. These include five random items. The green plant, the chair , the red plant, the table and the activity. Both of them have significant points. The units are measured in years

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Many think that governments should limit the number of cars each household can own to protect the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that the government should limit the number of vehicles per family to solve some global problems. While I believe that if the government restricts the number of cars, pollution levels will decrease.There is another alternative which is also possible to use.

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Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happen, and what measures can betaken to tackle the problem?

Criminal reoffendence has become a pressing concern in mordern society. This essay will first analyze the reasons behind this phenomenom, and then put forward corresponding solutions.

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Some people think government should ban dangerous sports, such as sky diving and rock climbing. Do you agree or disagree?

It is said that sport with high risk should be banned by authorities. This essay disagrees that unsafe excersises like sky diving and rock climbing to be forbidden. Following paragraphs will present reasons for disagreement.

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A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the amount of violence in our society today. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce violence in our society today?

There is no denying the fact that films and videos on global platforms play a crucial role in forming society's behaviour, especially in new generations. This essay will discuss this trend and covers its side effects on the population.

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Traffic congestion is a serious problem in many countries around the world. Describe the situation in your home country and suggest some solutions.

The most crucial problem faced by the governments are the traffic congestion, it is one of the most serious issues in many nations around the globe. The countries are facing various crisis likewise, air pollution, increase use of private vechiles, the solution for it is the governments collaboration in developing excellent infrastructure, and public awareness to make use of public transportation. This essay sheds light on causes and solutions for traffic congestion in various cities.

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Topic: Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is reducing the amount of maximum speed of vehicles. Others think that other ways exist. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a fact that the numbers of vehicles such as cars, truck are increasing day by day around the globe. While some people argue that by reducing the maximum speed of vehicles can be a possible solution regarding the improvement of road safety, others think there are other ways to deal with this problem. The both views of the statement regarding this issue elaborated further with relevant examples.

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Some people think that being born into a poor country is bad luck while others believe that it only helps fuel one’s aspirations to succeed. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

While some people suggest that being born in a poor country predetermines a person's destiny, others think that it only makes a person more stubborn and resilient achieve their dreams. I support the first idea that a person's country defines one's future.

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Many of the products we buy nowadays break or wear out very quickly. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for manufacturers and the public?

Nowadays, the most people mention that¸ there are lot of lower items products in sales. In this essay, I will touch on both benefits and drawbacks of these goods producing, from different aspects, such as satisfaction, financial, economic and etc.

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Some people believe that schools should only teach childrens subject which are beneficial to their future career and therefore other subjects such as music and sports are not important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

It is undenieable fact that,education plays a significant role in children's life. Some people argue that, for future achievements school should focus on main subjects rather on subjects like music and sport. I totally disagree with statement and think it carry a lot of disadvantages for pupils in school.In my both academic and creative subjects is the most effective approach.

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

When it talks to the health of people, some people may opine that it is decreasing nowadays. Since people getting more and more weight, this may lead to a decline in people's health and fitness. In this essay, it is going to talk about the reason of this situation form and provide people with some suggestions.

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The way that people work today has changed significantly due to development of technology. Discuss the advantages and the disadvantages.

The mayority of the population belive that technology has been one of the biggest objects that have changed the way that people think, study, live, and work. This essay will discuss the both sides of the coin refering to the pros and cons of technology in the laboural aspect.

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the use of media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. Do you yhink the advantages outweight the disadvantages?

In this essay we will expain the potential effects of tecnology in the social interaction between people. I strongly believe that this aceveration it is false.

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Health experts say that obese women and women over the age of 40 should not be given free fertility treatment (IVF) because they are more likely to experience health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?

Older women should not be provided with free fertility treatments according to some health specialists as there are higher chances of medical issues. This essay will delineate the both aspects along with the reasons why I do not agree with the given statement.

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Throughout history, male leaders always lead us to violence and conflict. If a society is governed by female leaders, it will be more peaceful. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people said a peaceful society could only happen if a woman were in charge. That opinion is formed because history has shown us that warfare and conflict are mostly led by male leaders. In that regard, i would disagree with the statement.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some students believe, that focusing on qualification subjects is more valuable, than studying other in addition to their main course. They are also concentrate their full time and attention for their university subjects, but is it really better, or not?

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