IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 117

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Parents should spend more time with their children helping them with their homework. Do you agree or disagree?

It’s commonly believed that parents supposed to spend more time with their children to assist them doing their homework. I agree with the opinion, parents should take times to help their kids on academic assignment. Because this action will increase the intimacy between parents and children. The other reason is that it’s an economical way to improve kids’ performance without taking them to the after-school courses.

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People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently. Write about advantages and disadvantages of each view point?

There are different view of job expectations between people. While some consdire work for same job and same company is good, other choose to change jobs from company to other. This essay will discuss the advantage and disadvantage of both point views.

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Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages; therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the development of modern information technologies, the demand for computers is increasing.

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What are advantages and disadvantages of starting work at 16 or 18 after school?

Nowadays. people are working after finish the high school in this essay Iwill discuss both advantages and dis advantges

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discuss both view and give your opinion .student should be allowed to chose any course they like others says otherwise

Nowadays.students are important allowed to chose a course others says otherwise I will discuss both and Iwill give you my opinion

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Attending a live performance ( for example a play, concert, or sport event) is more enjoyable than watching the same event on television. To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are controversial perspective heating a debate over going to a performance live is more exciting watching the same ones online. From my point of view, I consider myself an advocate of this notion but it depends on the people’s feelings.

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To meet the growing need for food to support an increasing population, a country should make use of edible insects as a food source. However, some people believe that insects are not only unhealthy but harvesting them will also negatively affect nature. What are the benefits and drawbacks of eating insects? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Eating insects as a food source is a solution for a country to increase the population. However, many people believe that insects are not only dangerous but growing them will also making a bad effect to nature. I believe so many negative things of eating insects outweigh the positives. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own viewpoint in the impending paragraph.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

It has been observed that, nowdays a popular trend of taking a year off after completing high school and joining a university is rising. There are numerous of benefits as well as drawbacks regarding this new trend. Both the aspects are articulated in the upcoming paragraphs with valid explanations or examples.

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in their advertising, business nowedays usually emphasise that their products are new in some ways. why is this ? do you think it is a positive or ngative development?

Bolding uniquness and different aspects of products has become an inseparable part of each advertisment, demanding by manufacturers. In my opinion, there two main reasons for this phenomeneon and have its own brightsides and darksides.

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you and some friends ate meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you wre very pleased with the food and sevise.

I trust this finds you well. The last party in your restaurant was awesome. Additionally, we were so excited about the decorating skills of one of your waiters. From the moment we stepped in, the warm and welcoming service made us astonished. And while sitting in the woodland-colored chair, I felt something crazy like freezing.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food.It is therefore necessary for governments to imposw a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The percentage of people have accelerated who are suffering from various ailments like- high cholesterol, high blood pressure, diabetes, obesity and so on because of their choice of food.That’s why the government put a huge amount of taxes on the fast foods.But,I personally disagree about the higher tax system as it creates many problem especially for the poor people.

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Many people nowadays are concerned about the level of air pollution created by the number of people using air travel. They suggest it may be safer for people to use alternative forms of transportation such as road transport. To what extent do you agree that travel by road may be the safer option?

Nowadays, entertainment options have expanded massively, including TV shows, video games, and more. People, especially children, often spend their free time engaging with these forms of entertainment. However, many parents are increasingly concerned about the rising levels of violence in these mediums and its potential influence on their children's behavior. To address this issue, parents must actively monitor their children's leisure activities.

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Nowadays many young people deliberately damage public places. What are the causes and solutions

It is certainly true that l, Nowadays some young people deliberately damage public places and, By now, This event will be very popular in the world and I am going to give my opinion this essay.

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American film actor John Wayne said: "Tomorrow is the most important thing in life." How is it important for individuals and countries to think about the future rather than the present?

Lately, a plethora topics are being seriously talked about among various individuals and groups, and one prominent is present and future. there are even people who believe that the most important thing in our life is tomorrow. In the succeeding paragraphs, I am going to discuss the relations between future and present and give my personal perspective further.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

Currently, there is an increasing number of tourists in visiting some places which have difficult conditions such as Sahara desert or the antartic. I believe this activity provides advantages such as memorable and unique experince and educational opportunities. In contrast, it also gives a drawback especially in terms of health risks and limited accesibility.

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Do you think that place where the person grew has an influence on his accomplishments? Explain with example.

One of the most hot-buttoned topics in some fields of study is whether a childhood environment of a person can affect one's future achievements. The way I see it, a place where a person was brought up has definitely an influence on his accomplishments later in his life. I base this opinion on two major reasons.

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Childcare training courses should be mandatory for all parents. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your own opinion and include relevant examples.

Nowadays newborn children's courses should be necessary for all parents. Because they both are very busy and do not have time to spend with their children. I totally agree with this and I give my opinion.

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Some people think that sending criminals to prison is not effective. Education and job training should be used instead. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that a few individuals reckon that effective way to punish the criminals are sending them to jails. Whereas, some populations believe that offering them to learn and doing job tranings are benefial rather than in prison. Thus, I dissent from the notion which further leads to a logical conlcusion.

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Robots are popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of robots?

Nowadays, a lot of young individuals want to improve themselves. They may have different ways of devoloping themselves. While some of them prefers to explore the world on their own, others learn from seniors through their experiences and suggestions. I agree with the former. This essay will explain the reasons below.

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Overweight Children In many countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some people think that the government should be responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often considered that a few individuals reckon that in many nations, teenagers are becoming overweight and unhealthy. Some population believe that the government should play a vital role for solving this issue. Thus, I dissent from the notion which further leads to a logical conlcusion.

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