IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 113

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages.

In today's digital age, social media is used as the best way to the relationships. This writer believes the benefits of social media, including knowing carefully about other people, and easy contact surpass the drawbacks of not going outside, so follow this to see more information.

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In some countries, young people like to live on their own or live with their friends after finishing school. Some think it is a good idea. Do you agree or disagree?

Becomeing a self depences is an essential part of today gerentation so that they can takes responsibility of our discussion and know the world deeply . I too agress with this statment and in upcoming paragraphs I shall explain it briefly .

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The only way to reduce drug is to legalise the substances and bring them under control. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays , marjority of people died due to over dose of drugs ,however some say that if these substance come under control to legal authority then the rate to drugs must be overcome or reduces . I too agree with this statement and in further paragraphs I will deeply explain my point of view .

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Tourism has become one of the leading sources of revenue in many countries. Do the advantages of tourism outweigh the disadvantages?

A common trend frequently around the increase in tourism makes some countries much more developed than in the past which is handling the unemployment issue as well as reduced urbanization outweighed the snag is the cultural interference.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There has been a long standing debate on whether reading stories in books is more beneficial for children than watching TV or playing computer games. While it is tryue that all of these media offer children opportunities for learning and entertainment, I believe that reading stories in books is still the best option for children's development.

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Many people see animals as tools to be used by humans to better their lives. They believe animals should help feed us and keep us healthy by being subjects to experiments that will lead to new medications and medical processes. Others believe that animals should have the same rights to a good life as humans. Discuss both views and state your own.

Ketika binatang digunakan untuk membantu manusia dalam mendukung kehidupannya adalah suatu fakta yang tidak dapat ditolak apalagi sampai disebutkan binatang adalah sumber daya alami yang dapat memberikan kehidupan kepada manusia, akan tetapi bukan berarti bintang secara dieksploitasi tanpa batas hingga memberikan keburukan kepada mereka, pemikiran ini tentu saja salah dan tidak dapat dibenarkan. pemanfaatan binatang sebagai sumber pemenuhan kehidupan manusia harus dilakukan secara efesien mungkin tanpa mengeksploitasi mereka secara berlebihan. Di sisi lain binatang memiliki hak untuk hidup , akan tetapi tidaklah sama seperti manusia. Hewan dan manusia adalah makhluk hidup yang berbeda di banyak hal, ketika hewan dibiarkan hidup sebagaimana layaknya manusia maka kekhawatiran populasi hewan lebih banyak dari pada manusia akan terjadi dan hal ini akan berdampak pada ketidakseimbangan kehidupan. Bayangkan apabila suatu daerah memiliki populasi hewann lebih tinggi dari pada manusia yang ...

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Write about the following topic: In the past, everyone wore clothes according to their culture, but now people wear similar clothes all around the world. Is this a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

These days, it becomes less common to wear traditional clothes as they are considered to be irrelevant and outdated. Some people believe that this trend negatively affects society as individuals are losing their sense of identity. I truly agree with the latter opinion, and this essay will explain why.

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Some people think that the government should give money to creative people, such as artists and musicians. To what extent do you agree?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons? How can people research this?

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Some people say educational school is the only critical factor to the development of a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education is consider to be the key factor of sucess is someone's life. In today's era,it is believed that if a person want to achieve something great in life so he has to complete a certain level of education. A group of individuals believe that educational campus are the key element for development of a country. I partially agree with the above notion. According to me country's development also matter with the economy factor.

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An increasing number of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

it is known that the world has become small while devalopment transportion. a lot of besseness man or company work global and student can go to another country for complate their educatation. some person believe that it is so dencer about lose their valuable students, orhers are not. ı going to expline it's advantage and disadvantage in this essay.

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Littering in cities is an increasing problem which needs to be dealt with. Some people think that steeper fines is the best way to deal with the problem. To what extent do you agree?

Today the problem of littering in the urban areas is growing and forces authorities to find some decision for solving it. When numerous individuals think that the best solution to manage this problem is to increase the fines, I am convinced that the solution should be a complex one. In this essay, I am planning to spotlight some aspects of this.

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IN MANY PARTS OF THE WORLD, ILLITERACY RATES ARE STILL HIGH. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS? WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST?

Most parts around the world, stil have a low literacy rates. The reason behind this issue it is because they do not find topics that interesting for them to read yet. Also, people are too lazy to buy or rent books from the store. In order to solve this, it is by using media involvement which help to letting people now if reading is fun because there are variety of books that they can explore, not to mention they can find many types of readings on the internet.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. In some countries, only few young people go to classical music concerts or or play classical music. Why? Should young people be encouraged to attend and learn more? You should write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, classical music become unpopular in several countries for young people, where it can be seen by just few of them attending the classical music concert or playing classical music. This issue can happen because the youngers are most attracted by other genres of music, for instance, pop and rock styles and advanced technology makes this changing be faster. In my opinion, young people should attend and learn more about classical music to prevent this inheritance and be their soft skill.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: It will be better to have wide use of driverless cars for individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

Topic about animals in shelters is very much discussed and extremely essential . Many people often go to the shelters and see how animals suffer about being there . For example , I always cry when I see videos about it , I can’t see it without regrets. That’s why I would like to discuss this important topic in our life . I think we should raise this problem as many as possible so that people help to animals .

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person?

Socialisation can be conducted by meeting directly or by online. The research advise that some of teenagers nowdays more like socialising online than meeting other people in offline. This essay will discuss why young people prefer socialising online and provides options for encourage them to alocate their time meeting someone in person.

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IN MANY PARTS OF THE WORLD, ILLITERACY RATES ARE STILL HIGH. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE THE CAUSES OF THIS? WHAT SOLUTIONS CAN YOU SUGGEST?

Nowadays childrens sometime may have problems in a school. One of the most popular problem – they can not stay focused on a lesson. In this essay I will try to open this problem and solve it.

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Some people think that robots are very important for humans' future development. Others, however, think that robots are a dangerous invention that could have negative effects on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

I would contend that both views are valued to some extent, however the invented robots may do more good than harm.

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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university

The given maps illustrate the layouts of a one-student room and a two-student room at a specific university in Australia.

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Some people think that animals should be kept in men-made cells. What are the disadvantages of keeping animal in zoo?

In the modern world,the zoo is the most famous tourist attraction for many children. there have a lot of wild animal, For example lion, crocodile or snake.These animals are so dangerous.So it should kept in the cell.From my opinion, I support the idea that aniamls should kept in the cell.In this essay, I will explain about advantages and disadvantages of this topic.

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life was better when technology was simpler? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today's era technology has overtaken the whole world. The usage as well as the growth of technology has been increased from past few years. There is an argument regarding that, lifestyle was better when technology was not used as much as compared to today. I completely agree with this notion and this essay will discuss some points regarding to this case.

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