IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 116

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, much of our routine depends on technology. Moreover, People got that as benefit to connect with world. While, others found life became harder. On my point of view, world became easier with modern technology, however there are some negative of that developing.

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Food travels thousands of miles from farmers to consumers. Some people think that it would be better for our environment and economy if people consumed locally produced foods. To what extent do the advantages of this would outweigh the disadvantages?

The fact that food is an inseparable part of our life is obvious to all. In the contemporary era, large amount of time and energy must be considered to transport foods from farmland to customers. It is thought that one of the best ways to tackle this problem is that people consume foods produced by local farmers which is good for both economy and environment. In my perspective, it is not a good idea.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

In the modern world,financial is an affeted to many people life or increase significant the number of credit card per person.Some people suggest that purchase items that they don't need by use credit cardis better than buy items from cash. Personally I am stongly with the later viewpoint.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

While some museums are free to vistit, many others charge visitors for enterance. taking funds for entery is alleged to be unnecessary however, it has many privilleges for museums. I, personally consider this fee essential.

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ACADEMIC WRITING TASK 2 Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem? WRITE AT LEAST 250 WORDS

Many people are buying a high-price things by debting because they can not afford it. This bad habbit need to be solve since there are a lot of people that have no ability to finish it in a period. The following paragraph will give an explanation of the people’s mindset of minimalist life and how the government’s law about online-debting can solve the problem.

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2.Some high school leavers tent to travel or work while before going to university directly. What do you think are the advantages more than disadvantages?

Experiencing that study is quite challenging for them predominantly, graduates from high school inclined to make holiday before come into university. While many argue that it has drawback of wasting time, I do believe that going to beautiful places is beneficial to youngster's mental health and their intellegencies growth.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

In modern society, it is common to see children using telephones all day long. For better or worse, this trend has already begun to affect them in certain aspects of life.

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Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in today's society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. What's your opinion?

Language is a very special thing that we humans have incredibly develop and cultivate so exoticly that it is the single thing that differentiate us than non-intellegent beings back then. However, the same can not be said today as technological advancement have been getting through impecable developments that it now could do languages as we human does it, and with it, rose an argument that since machines could store and exctract basically any information from any language, we, especially our younger ones, don't need to shed a sweat learning a new language as the machine could do it for us. But, I do not agree to such notion, as it puts our human most advance feature aside and disrespectfully refute our ability on learning new things.

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The internet has dramatically altered ourlives over the past few decades. Although someof these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What is your opinion on this?

As the advancement of the Internet, a human's life have been changed dramatically in many ways. There are pros and cons of the transformation that the Internet has brought, however, I think advantages of these changes outshadow disadvantages of them. This essay will dicuss my opinion with relevant examples.

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Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while others believe a bicycle is a better way to commute. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, many people think that car is the best option to travel in cities but some people believe that bicycle is the best way of going anywhere in the city. Traveling through cars can cause pollution whereas bicycles are a pollution free source of traveling and also contain benefits in daily life.

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More and more children are becoming obese. What are the causes of this and what are the solutions?

Being over weight is the hot topic in the recent times and it is widespread mostly in young children. There are several reasons contributing to this problem as well as drastic long term effects.

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Some people argue that social media platforms are essential for communication and staying connected, while others believe that they pose a threat to personal privacy. On which position do you stand? Discuss the supporting ideas for your chosen position.

In the era of advanced communication technology, the role of social media has become a subject of debate. Advocates argue that these platforms serve as indispensable tools for fostering connections and maintaining relationships. Social media facilitates instant communication, allowing individuals to share life updates, engage in discussions, and bridge geographical gaps.

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Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, is normally conceived for people, specifically family members that time spent in various broadcasting media such as television, YouTube videos and PC gaming have strongly bonds with the well-growth of theirs children. In opposite, there are people who claims that these kind of resources limits its integral health and intelligence and in consequence, deserve legal regulation or prohibition. In this essay, this positions are showed out and an personal opinion will be given.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the acedemic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valueable to be shared freely Discuss both these view points and give your own opinion.

It certainly can not be denied that good information is the key to research on the purpose of any business as well as for the academics. The benefits of such informative discussion are obvious, as life has become easier and more convenient. However, some people feel that it should be shared with each other while others believe that some pieces of information is too private to be shared freely. It surely is debatable and both views seem to hold water. But before coming to a reasoned conclusion, let us discuss both views.

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In many countries, it is now illegal to advertise alcohol. Do you agree or disagree?

Alcoholic beverages are banned at the present. This essay completely agree with this initiative because alcohol can cause serious health conditions and it's promotion leads to buying, & consuming more.

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Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffice congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Unquestionably, every coin has two sides so are the people. Society's people are divided into two groups and therefore, the traffic congestion has become a topic of debate among individuals. This essay will compare and contrast both of opinions along with mine which is in the favor of the former view will be discussed in a sensible conclusion.

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Some people like to travel to somewhere new and different when they go on holiday, while others prefer familiar places? Do you think there are more advantages or disadvantages to visiting new places ?

Some people prefer to go on trip to somewhere new or place that has been changed, at the same time some others choose to go on same holiday trip. People with lack of communication skill should go on vacations around new places and new cultures.

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Governments investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Government should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement.

There are some arguments both for and against investing government. I personally strongly agree with developing various field of arts. In this essay, I will discuss more.

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In today's world, it is private companies rather than government who pay for and carry out most on scientific research. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

As the time goes by, there is a shift in research funding trend where private corporations tend to overtake public sectors role. I believe the benefit is likely more prominent than the drawback itself.

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Nowadays as a part of education process students work at our company for short period of time without pay do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

In the modern world, the internship program is crucial method for many university students.This method can encourage students learn new things.However,some people suggest that trainees should get wage from companies. This choice has a number of benefits and drawbacks, which will be discussed in this essay.

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