IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 134

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Governments around the world spend too much money on treating illnesses and diseases and not enough on health education and prevention. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Govrnments spend a huge amount of money to therapy some diseases in the whole world and not enogh on health edgucation and prevention. I agree is to some extent and in this assay will discuss this topic from my point of view.

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With the widespread use of interent , more and more peolpe choose to work from home. Do the advantage of this trend outwight the disadvantage?

The Internet makes peoples` life more easy than in the previous centuries. However, such as all other things, internet has its advantages, as well as disadvantages, which are discussed in this essay.

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some people say history is one of the most important School subjects.other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my opinion I think every subjects is important for us. We have to learn everything through our past, present and future. some people say that History is one of the most important School subjects it's true but it has to go along with today's world which is science and technology. How can we move without our history, the people behind us ''The ancient people'' is the most powerful people who pushes us to move forward. The taught us how to fire a light, how to find a food, how to lives with other and animals, how to survive and others. Of course we wouldn’t know that without them. Science and technology are important too. They give us a chance to move forward with them. without science and technology we are just normal human being. we spend our daily life with no useful. Without them we have no light we have no food, we have no comfortable stuff and things.

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using translation is good or bad. both view and your opinion

using translation is good or bad. both view and your opinion?

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Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.

Today, society have improved poor eating habits and do not take balanced diet on their daily intake.

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SOME SAY THAT IN ALL LEVELS OF EDUCATION TOO MUCH TIME IS SPENT LEARNING FACTS AND NOT ENOUGH ON LEARNING PRACTICAL SKILLS. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

It is an irrefutable fact that, people are expendituring more time to learn something, but they cannot manage their time to get an experience on the practical skills. In my opinion, I agree that all education degrees which spend more time and do not teach the population any experience are a waste of time.

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«Some modern artists receive huge sums of money for the things they create, while others struggle to survive. Governments should take steps to resolve this unfair situation» To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many artists receive lot of money by their own talent they make themselves unique, while others struggle to lives. I believe that these popular artists has stand up by their hardwork and focus in life. I disagree with the statement of government should take steps to resolve this unfair situation. It is a logical conclusion.

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Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?

The discovery and production tobacco dates back many years.At that time,tobacconists production was traditional and limited in quantity and for that reason it was not known among the people.In this essay, we want to examine the reasons the plenty of welcome people from harmful substances. In the following, I will give examples of the problems caused by smoking and also my suggestions for lack of using these addictive substances.

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Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, some people become vegetarian and do not eat meat and animal meat in general. Most

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The picture shows the process of making wool. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of making spinning balls of yarn.

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Discuss your academic achievements, including the process and skills involved in your previous or current degree program!

Since junior high school, my parents have always provided guidance on the importance of achieving high grades through ethical means, without resorting to cheating, such as copying. They believe that a good process is a crucial step toward success, especially in achieving perfect grades.

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Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that now-a-days, most of the individuals prefer online platforms to connect with their friends. While few assert that friendship with face-to-face meetings has stronger bonding than friends who become through online. Though, traditional friendship has depth bonding, I firmly believe that online friendship can be equally meaningful.

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Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion

In general, sports are introduced to keep everyone healthy and it also involves some cultural traditions. There are certain dangerous sports and some think this should be banned and others believe it is people's choice. In my opinion, I would say we should not ban any sports as every sport has its own good and bad.

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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. discuss both views and give your opinion.

some people are of the opinion that, the most essential school subjects is history. But other people believe that, nowadays some other subjects such as science and technology are more important than history. This assey will discuss two aspects of this topic in my personal view.

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Living in the country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

One of the most controvercial issues today relates to being a citizen of foreign country and speaking its national language as it can lead to a number of significant problems as well as practical problems. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and explain why I believe that it is better to try to speak as native in the host country.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some citizens believe Advertising as a best route can affect on people and persuading them to buy things while others say this way don't answer and we no longer pay attention to it because of common. Overall, when advisitor want to advert some people, probably they forget to be honest and care about money more while some people definitely need to this advertising because they are'nt aware about variety of new products. In this essay, both aspects of this subject will be explored.

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Many people think that students should be allowed to choose the subjects that they study in school, whereas others feel that they should study a set curriculum. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed that students should have permission to choose the subject that they study in school, while others think that the curriculum should be chosen. In my opinion, I agree that students need to have a right to pick the lessons.

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Some people believe that the government should not support arts and other activities. However, others believe that the arts and other activities should be funded. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People partially feel that the government shouldn't focus finance's on arts but rather on improving residential areas. On the other hand, personages believe that art and culture are staples in society, I also agree with this ideology. In this essay I will be discussing both points of view.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely.

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The tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on positive development is harm to the individuals and the society as a whole.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I agree to a greater extent with the statement that the tendency of news reports in the media to focus more on problems and emergencies than on a positive development because it leads to society and resources to diminish also it can lead to a ppor nation. However ww must not forget the problems because we have to curb them.

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