IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 131

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries, many people suffer from health problems due to eating too much fast food. It is, therefore, necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. Do you agree or disagree?

In some nations, the majority of people suffer from illness because of eating too much fast food. Therefore, some people believe that it is crucial for governments to get a higher tax on this type of food. Personally, I agree with this statement.

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Popular events like the football World Cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Promoting conflict among numerous nations worldwide has been one of the most fruitful approaches to penetrate among societies for exploiting. International recreational and sporting events namely Olympics and football World Cup possess the ability to bring about sweeping change for this political circumstance and nations will be tied together, and ultimately can settle the disputes. This essay aims to elaborate on and illustrate this perspective.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays it is asserted that children spend a plenty of time, working with contemporary gadgets.

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It has been suggested that primary school children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals questioning whether the adolscents will demonstrate better leadership skills than the older generation. While some may strongly disagree, I firmly believe that the youths have better skills in leading the companies than old people. From my perspective, this will not only facilitate the collaberative work between employees, but also they would use the technology to further invest in employees’ potential.

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Many educators believe that international exchange trips are beneficial for students. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give you opinion and include any relevent example

Educational materials play an important role in the progress of a country. In this regard, the usefulness of international exchange trips have been a matter of debate. I reckon they are beneficial for students and improving students' creativity as well as their responsibility regarding their society are some of their advantages for the students.

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There has been major advances in technology over the recent decades and this has led to significant improvements in people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this modern era too many improvments happend in knowlge, which had changed humans life for ever. As can be seen most of this changes were some kind of developments, which iproved peoples life and made living easier than past. In next two pragraphs I will write about the goodness of this action then I will show my final opinion as conclusion.

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Some people think that liking your job is more important than how much money you earn while others think that your salary is more important than how much you like your job. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

The increase of stressed people from job currently is strongly growing up, it causes a serious problem for everybody who working. For that reason, there's an idea about two crucial factors involving job: how people prefer their job and main purpose for work is about regular income. Which one is more necessary to improve a better work life? This idea give me both views, so i am going to explain my opinion in this essay.

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In several countries, there are number of young people has preferred to enroll the work-based study program rather than studying in university. The vocational program seems to be a realistic choice in order to be competitive in the job market, whereas the university education requires higher cost of attendance. Therefore, studying in work-based scheme would bring more advantages rather than disadvantages.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

World news has told us that fast food a common snacks is really popular and well-known to everyone at this present time. But it also gives us lots of informations of people's diseases which caused from that kind of foods: overweight, heart disease,... And an idea for "should goverments impose high tax for the junk food?" Now, I will give my own view about this case.

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Fresh water has always been a limited resources in some parts of the world. Today, however, growing worldwide demand has made this a global problem. What are the causes of the increased demand, and what measures can government and individuals take to respond to this problem.

Water resources that can be used as fresh water for day to day consumption is reducing in some parts of the globe due to the increasing number of demand which lead to a big issue. Reasons for escalating the world wide demand due to growth of the number of population and increase in fresh water wastage. We can resolve the problem by controlling the population growth by government intervenes and imposing some rules to reduce the wastage.

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Air pollution is the most important concern of many countries. What are the main causes and effects of this issue?

The alarming increase in the level of air pollution has become a severe issue in most nations. There are several reasons why air gets polluted and its effects will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries fast food restaurants and supermakets give money to schools to promote their products. do you think this is a positive or negative development ?

Many nations fast food restaurants and supermarket give advertising to nearly schools to promote their products. Overall, this essay will express the con about the impacts of fast food restaurants and supermarkets give discount to school such as expansion mental issue and reducing behaviour of saving.

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In many Western countries, there are an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to the couples having no children.

The world become unbelievable and that includes couples not to have kids. In many countries there is an increasing number of couples to have no kids. This essay will explain the advantages and disadvantages to couples chossing not to have kids.

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why people must be more sensetive about environment and sonsider pollution effects

In todays world environment getting polluted day by day and individuals are not aware of that pollution will bring varieties illness

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Some people say that computer skills should be added to primary subjects in elementary school such as reading, writing and math. For far do you agree or disagree?

It is thought by many people that computer skills need to be added to primary lessons in elementary school, starting with reading, writing and mathemathic. I highly disagree with this statement since it leads to a disadvantage for students.

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People feel that educational success is dependent on having a good teacher, others say it depends not the attitude of the student. Discuss both side and state your opinion*

Some people think that learning was basicaly affected by the tutor, while other part believe that it can be change by the student's hardwork. In my eyes, I also agree with the latter opinion. Educational success is depend on the student than the educating figure.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people’s salaries to pay for necessary public services, such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In today's world, with the high capacity of living costs, people tend to pay taxes from their salaries while some group of people assume paying high taxes is a disadvantage. I will be discussing both views before it comes to a conclusion.

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Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them.Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In this living period,friends play a important role in an individual's life.While few people recommend that it is better to have friends who alwaysagree with them.Others believe that they do not compromise for few decisions.This essay explains about two concerns including my opinion.

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Many feel that going to gym is the best way to stay fit. Other think there are more efective methods. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, staying fit is one goal people want to achieve. Many of them believe that going to the gym is the best procedure to remain healthy. On the other hand, there are more techniques which others think that it is more effective. I will explain my views in the following essay.

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Today people have unhealthy diets and do not exercise. What do you think why it is so. What are the reasons? Suggest some solutions for solving this situation.

Nowadays, people have sedentary lives and obesity has become more common among people. People are drawn to unhealthy food and they are not interested in doing exercise. This essay will consider the reasons for this issue and specify some solutions.

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