IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 135

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays, individuals fitness is decreasing due to weight increase. In this essay, this topic is discussed and the measures to solve this issue is provided.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Most nations across the globe have experienced a trend where more people from rural areas are moving to the cities which means there is a decrease in terms of population living in the countryside. This essay strongly argues that this phenomenon is bad for the development of many countries due to two main reasons.

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school children are using computers in school more than ever. Discuss the advantages and disadvantage of this and give your own opinions

In this modern era, an increasing number of time by student for using computer to help them with school task and daily activity. In this essay, i will explain the potential benefits and drawbacks regarding this issue with supporting opinions.

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The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is commonly argued that, people in future may experience less well being in comparison with current time agree with such point of view since the rate of people's engaging with technology will reach it's peak in future plan and it will leads to several difficulties and fatal disease for humans 'health and I will assert my compelling reasons in following paragraghs.

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some people belive that universities can help university graduates get a better offer, while others believe that college not jsut get a job.

When talk about universities functionality, some people belive that universities can help university graduates get a better offer, while others believe that college not jsut get a job. Universities can make people become more whole people. While it is undeniable that univertsity paly a crucial role in graduates job options. At the some time, college do make the lives of college students become more whole people, thus I belive both view is university important functionality.

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Many people think cheap air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people freedom to travel further. However, other think this leads to environmental problem, so air travel should be more expensive in order to discourage people from having it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that flight tickets should be dropped to give everyone an equal chance to travel anywhere. On the other hand, expensive tickets are the way to minimize other problems like environment. This essay will shed the light on which condition is better in both views.

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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children.

Nowadays lots of parents do jobs and work in their day-to-day life. Do some parents use childcare centres to keep their children till they work and some parents keep their children with their grandfather or grandmother. From these two things, some parents think that keeping their child in a childcare centre is the best option. But some of the other parents think that keeping their children with grandparents is the best option. I will discuss both of these views and then illustrate my opinion.

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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays lots of parents doin jobs and working on their day to day life. So soem parents using childcare centers to keep their childs till they work and some parents keep their child with grandfather or grandmother. From these two things, some parents think that keepimg their child's in childcare center is the best option. But some of the other parents think that keeping their child's with grandparents in the best option. I will discuss both of these views and then illustrate my opinion.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many healthy problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.

Many companies produce consumeable items with high levels of sugar which disturb public health.To counter this situation,these products should be made costly.

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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immifartion? To what consequenes can it lead?

In this new modern era of humanity a new problem has risen which is question of immigration. This new question made too many big and small effects in countries and peoples lives. In the next paragraph, I will discuss about the main reasons of why do people leave their places, to start new life some where else then after that, I will write about this decisions results finally at the end I am going to give my final conclusion.

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Many young people regularly change their jobs over the years. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Lots of people switching their careers over the years. It gives some benefits to them to find more good places to work and also to improve their skills and experience too.

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The topic of this: Currently, most students are studying only mathematics and the world language, English. What do you think its advantages more than its disadvantages?

Nowadays lots of student in the world started to studying manily two subjectes, which in Mathematics and world main language which is english. Students having lots of advantages and disadvantages when students Studying these two subjects.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is certainly true that the number of people who are struggling of obesity has been raising day by day in the world. Some people say that doubleing the price of such carbohydrated food can be solution of this problem. in my opinion, i do believe that it is undeniable true and some measures should be taken to address this isuue.

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In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at young age. Do you agree or disagree?

In today’s society, adults must be economically stable. Some people argue that financial management must be taught in a young age , while other disagree with the idea. In this essay, I will explain why I agree with the statement and provide some examples to support my position.

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Many teenagers by encourage their parents to get a part-time job What are the advantages and the advantages of teenagers working part time?

A large number of parents are motivated by their young people to occupation during their leisure time. Although an after-school job like Excellent pounces on the use of free time. This motivates some cons impact.In this i will discuss both side of getting a part- time job after scoole hours.

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Information technology enable many people to do their chores outside their workplace (e.g at home or while travelling) do the benefits outweigh the disadvantages?

In this modern era with computer and internet technology, many company globally implement work from anywhere (WFA) working arrangement to give flexibility to their employees. In this essay, i will explain why the advantage of this working method overshadow the potential drawbacks.

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In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many parents in Vietnam choose to teach their kids at home instead of sending them to school. Some children feel sad because they miss playing with friends, while others are happy to skip homework. I'll explain my thoughts on this topic.

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Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There is no denying the fact that sports are crucial for healthy life.

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Most people take interviews to select preson for a job what are the other ways what do u think is the best way to recruiot new people

In this contemporary era, this practice had been become so prevalent to hire new people for a job .As per my notion, there are other multiple ways , which should be considerded while giving a job to someone instead of having a verbal interview. So , in the upcoming paragraphs , i am going to discuss the factors which are important.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

There is no denying the fact that the sport is defined the countries by participate in olympic beside its contributed to balanced healthy life. While it is a commonly held belief that some countries focusing on building specially facilitated to train top athletes for the purpose of international sports success, there is also an argument that the limitation using of sports for everyone . This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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