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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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DOCTORS, NURSED AND TEACHERS MAKE A GREAT CONTRIBUTION TO SOCIETY AND SHOULD BE PAYER MORE THAN ENTERTAINMENT AND SPORTS CELEBRITIES. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE.

One of the burning issues of today's society is the huge gap between celebrities income and the salary of important jobs such as teachers and healthcare agents. I am totally convinced that they should be payed more than entertainers. there are many aspects that makes me agree with this statement.
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Some people believe that parents should teach their students to be good citizens, however believe that school should do this. Discuss both views and give your opinion

I agree that parents should teach their students must be a good citizens, as early as possible give lesson how to be a good citizen. The main teacher for the child from parents, because the parents are the role model for their children. The way teach them throught habituation in house, instead how to interaction with their parents, sibling and other families. The parents can begin teach them that we can make comfort and dont disturb the other people. it is same we keep safety environment. The child should respect the other people .
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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

people think and trust that accepting a worse condition is better than moving to other places for example about their jobs and money, but others argue who believe that moving on and getting the other situations are the best choices. First of all, human have their own arguments why they have to accept or ignore the conditions. There is no wrong or true about the data. For instance, a lot of them choose to accept their current jobs because of their families, if they choose to resign may bring bad consequences for their families and at the same time, they can not get the other tasks because apply of competition. Staying in their current professions is better although it is uncomformtable situation.
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91.In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the ocuntry side is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, many people throughout the world who live in the countryside tend to immigrate to the cities and the rural areas have become empty of individuals. I believe it is a negative change as it leads unemployment of people and lack of safety in the countryside.
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Information technology enable many people to do their chores outside their workplace (e.g at home or while travelling) do the benefits outweigh the disadvantages

Now a days information technology is playing a vital role in human life across the world and it leads a important role in the development of nation globally but every thing is having their own pros and cons which i will explain further how technology is helpful and also it has a negative concequences as well.
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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway line for very fast trains between cities. Other believes the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both themanyse views and give you own opinion

Over the last two or three decades, transportation has developed more tremendously than ever before. Some claim that the authority should allocate a plethora of money on building new fast railway lines between cities while others opine that money should be spent on improving the public transport. I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.
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Many people spend less time in their homes. What do you think are the reasons? what effects does it have on individuals and the society?

In various nation around the world, a lot of people are spending most of their time in different places out side their residence. This essay is discussing many reasons for this point as well as providing some effects.
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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices in everyday matters such as ( food , clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Others believe that it is important for children to make their own decision about matters that affect them

Allowing Children to make their own choices or not is a smoldering issue of today's social life and is extremely arguable due to its unquestionable insignificance .
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Information technology enable many people to do their chores outside their workplace (e.g at home or while travelling) do the benefits outweigh the disadvantages

There is no denying the fact that IT makes people’s lifes more flexible and much esiear. While it is commonly held belief that it helps them to do their work tasks from home or wherever they are, there is also an argument oposes it. In my opinion, I consider that the advantage of online work is more than the disadvantage.
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Some People believe that it is the responsibility of the individuals to take care of their own health.Others believe that government should make sure that their citizen are healthy. discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is commonly believed that,taking care of their health is masses a big responsibilities responsibility while others opine that authorities should ensure their natives are physically fit. I completely agree with the former one and discuss both views in further paragraphs.
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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

In modern era, Part of the people like to live where they were born. That provide many advantages and disadvantages. The following paragraph will discuss about this.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Language is the utmost important in people lives. However, some claim that offspring have to learn foreign language at primary school instead of high school. I think this trend has more benefits outweigh the drawbacks. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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Some people think that educated people are more valuable than people who have learned skills through experience. Do you think that educated people are the most valuable for society? What kinds of skills can people learn through experience that can benefit society?

It is an debatable issue whether educated people are more valuable or skilled person learned through experience. I think these both people are more valuable and they equally contribute to society. The multitask skill people learn through experience. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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High job demands, stress and sense of commitment are among the main reasons people go to work when they are ill. This way they accomplish important tasks, but may infect others or get some serious health problems themselves. In your opinion should people go to work if they are sick? Support your point of view with relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

People nowadays encourage to work more by their companies, however this condition leads to an employee tend to be not condiser about their body health and keep working while they are unwell. In this essay, i will explain why this issue happened and support it with several examples.
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Shopping is the favorite free time activity for many young people today. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time rather than shopping? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

These days, shopping is quite popular among the younger generation. As a result, these days, youngster's favourite spare time activity is shopping because they are being the shopaholic. The teens should learn new skill in their free time instead of doing shopping. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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The best for the government to solve the problem of traffic congestion is providing free public transport per day, 7 day a week. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Over the last two or three decades, traffic congestion has increased more tremendously than ever before due to increasing the ownership of own cars. However, some say that the traffic issuse can be solved by providing the free public transportation of the whole week. I strongly disagree with this notion and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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It has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

It has been stated that children at primary school level should be taught about the art of vegetable growing and taking care of animals. In this essay, I will discuss why the pros outweigh the cons for this notion and form a conclusion.
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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes(for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extend do you agree or disagree?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays it should be unpaid community service be a required part of secondary school. Now people are beginning to realize that for instance, working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children are necessary for adolescents school life. Personally ,I tend to think that it is right and in my point of view it should be stayed unpaid.
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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

At first, I need to clarify that I completely agree with all the informations should be shared to the others. From my point of view, all the scientific researches must be clear and honest with all the evidences and experiments.
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There is an increasing amount of advertising directed at children, encouraging them to buy toys and snacks. Many parents are worried that these advertisements put too much pressure on children, while some advertisements claim that they provide useful information to children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Advertising sectors are widely nowadays so that some advartisers are doing the target at children and sell the toys and snacks, though some advartisers are want to give useful informations to the children. Parents are worried about the advertisements and they want to give useful informations to their children via advertisements. In my opinion, some of children are provided about their social study via online advertisements so i think that's good ideas. On the other Hand, Selling toys and snacks for children on advertisements are supported to develop children's pleasure.
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