IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 150

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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There is no denying the fact that computers have positive impact on children. Learning from an early age is an initiative step so it is a good step to use computers, but its time should not proceed so long.This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of using computers

The charts show the results of research on adult education. The bar chart provides the causes why matures decide to study while the pie chart gives the information about costs of education.

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The illustrations below show how coffee is sometimes produced. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.

The process demonstrates the way in which coffee is manufactured. Overall, there are twelve stages in the process, beginning with categorizing beans and culminating in coffee package.

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Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

Cinema enjoyers have a debate about whether people need to bring cellphones or tablets into the room since it can ruin the wtaching experience. We could explain it from both point of views and being symphatize to everyone. In this essay, I will discuss the difference from these opinions.

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In spite of many advances women have made in education and employment, they continue to be at a disadvantage when it comes to pay and promotion. In your view, what should be done to promote equality of opportunity for men and women in the workplace.

Although, many benefits effort women have performed in their education and work, they are still detrimental in terms of income and job promotion. This Is because people have different outlooks about women roles in their live especially in the work place.

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Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. Is this trend a positive or a negative development?

In this contemporary global conversation, the appearance of reusable energy has surgerd as a pivotal topic, eliciting varied viewpoints. A notable segment advocates this phenomeon is negative, while a substanial group counters that it is benefical for human bieng. It is my firm belief that the agreenment for this argument in favor of supporting alternative sources of power are not only persuavie but also grounded in robust and logical foundations.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

All of the things in this world should control for bear something good. It is necessary children to know what is the difference between wrong and right in their young age. penalty is important to health the ucrab this barier.I strongly agree with this because punishment leads them to a right way, they will be get fear, mature in short time and curiecity to analycis.

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Some people say free time activities for children should be organized by parents. Others say that children should be free to choose what they do in their free time. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, most of the parents want to observe the improvement of their children and they provide many opportunities for their kids. Some people consider the free time activities should be educational or effective whereas other individual think about this regard children can choose the activities for themselves because that is their leisure time. I strongly agree with first idea and I will explain my opinion with some example.

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Some high schools require all students to wear school uniforms. Other high schools permit students to decide what to wear to school. Which of these two school policies do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

I think that the issue about whether all students must be required to wear school uniform is the one that is open for debate. Some people think that all students must wear the school uniform. However, others think that students should decide what to wear to school themselves. Personally, I believe that students should wear what they like. For several reasons, which I will mention bellow, I think that school uniforms should not be required to wear at high school.

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People from cities go to university more often than those who live in the country. Some people think that the government should make it easier to enter universities for people who live outside of cities and towns by setting lower entry requirements and tuition fees.

The education is essential in the life for individual. Some argue say that, the developed countries have greater opportunity to go university rather than who live in countryside. Although financial demand, the most organisation interesting to provide education also for outside countries.

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Most of the people in older time used to stay in the same place. Now many people keep changing places and move to various places during their life time. What Are the reasons for this? Do u think that it is a positive or a negative development?

In the past,our ancestors used to live in same places but many people move todifferent type of places in modern society.This two statements have some negative and positive development.Then this esaay will further explore the reasons and relevant this matter.

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Companies engage in acquisitions and mergers because that is one of the easiest ways to secure fast and diversify their investment portfolios. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, in order to achieve rapid growth and diversified investment portfolios, enterprises are increasingly participating in mergers and acquisitions. I totally agree with this view.

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Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are become more isolated. Discuss both sides and give you opinion.

People have different views about whether the internet's effects are useful or not. While some people think that the internet is useful for people's interaction, other people and i believe that people and societies are become more isolated.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this?

In time gone by , residents become intrested in finding out about the history of house or building they live in .This essay will examine the main causes of living in historical places and possible solutions to this problem .

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Athers believes that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most discussed issues nowadays is keeping animals in zoos. It is undeniable that animals become essential part of our life including pets and zoo parks. But there is not absolute agreement on whether good idea that animals kept in zoos or not. I think this essay will lead to the logical deduction.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In current period, young people’s population number correlatively majority, compared with the older people amount. According to this information, although a minority older people account is a disadvantage for a nation, a vast number of young adults amount can play a significant role a country’s development.

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Celebrities are famous for their weath and glamorous lifestyle instead of their achievements. This sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Now a days, Celebrities are booming all around the world via different things such as youtube, instagram, movies and television shows. Due to this scenario, lot of interested people get inspiring every day and try their best to achieve the level of people who get inspired. I completly disagreeing the statement that Celebrities are more familar due to their luxurious life style. I explain you much detail of how much difficulties which hide behind their life story of all.

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Some University students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

According to some University pupils who show interest to learn additional subject apart from major subject. Others argue that is more relaible to devote all their time and focus to studying for become a good job houlder.In my opinion i believe that additional study is more benificial for every student because a student can gain knowledge about other parts as well as they can get lots of other opportunities in the job market.

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financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is widely intended that financial education should be integrated as mandatory subject in school curriculum to equip students with necessary skills related to budgeting and expense management. This essay will examine why Fianacial education should be mandated and why it may not be suitable.

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news media has become more infulential in peoples lives. some believe it is a negative development. to what extent do you agree or disagree.

In the contemporary era, the social media has become more flexible and more infulential in individuals life. the majority of pupils think that it is a negative development. In this evidence i am partically disagree.

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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to reed everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The availability of reading online books with no cost, In the future, may lead to demise of traditional ones, such as newspapers and paper books. As far as I am concerned, I do not concur this occurrence cannot be feasible in all over the world due to economic situation in societies and familes.

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