IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 152

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. “Parents should not pressure their children to choose a particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose a career path they like. To what extent do you agree or disagree?” You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

Nowadays, a career is important for our children's future, when they have to choose a career means their preparation for that. A career can be called a job, or profession which on patterns of work-related experiences that stretch throughout work experienced by each individual/employee and can be broadly detailed into objective events furthermore, a career is very important for anybody, especially young people.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

In today’s society, there is a progressively often-discussed belief that most of job will reinstate by artificially intelligent robots. While it is possible that difficult and danger jobs will eventually be taken over by robots, but it is improbable that jobs which indispensable without human help will be taken by AI. This essay will discuss the reason why ultimately, there some processes that yet need human participation, and cannot be requiring by robots.

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In many countries, traditional foods are being replaced by fast food. This has negative impact on families, individuals, society. What extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, fast foods are being popular, and it is replaced from traditional food. This has more negative impact on families, individuals and society. Moreover, it can develop disease, also it is a costly food, and the factories of foods pollute air. However, this has also some possitive view for few people, who lives in a hostel and can not cooking.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The important scientific discoveries are made on the basis of an experiments done on the animals. It is said an I njustice to them, however without the experiment on them there is no way scientists can discover new things.

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nowadays, a growing number of people with health problem are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Health problems suffered by many individuals are of great concern nowadays. With the increase in population, number of people facing health related issues are also increasing day by day. To compensate with this, the demand of doctors also rose to cope up with the patients.

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More and more fathers are taking break from their careers so that they can stay home and take care of their children while their wives work. This is better for the family than having both parents work full time. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

Being a family, it is extremely crucial for the kids to have a role model to copy and learn from. If both parents work, this would not satisfy these need. If, however, the father stay at home to take care of the child, it does solve the problem of lacking of role model that the children suffers, but I believe there is a better aproach.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative situation?

In some countries, there is rising question that having own house is more crucial for people rather than renting it. There are many possible reasons for this dilemma, which varies one to another. Even though this situation might have some negative side, probably positive ones overweight them.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It Certainly Cannot be denied that changes are important to live a life. The bunch of individuals think doing a same activities regularly in their whole life and stay away from changes is more convenient. while an opinion has been put forward that my changes is always better.In my opinion, this argument Surely true. Before recching a conclusion, let us discuss both views.

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Many elderly people are no longer looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend and what is your opinion?

Nowadays, retirements cannot looked after for themselves, for this reason they have to go to the nursing homes or care homes. While there are some benefits of this, I believe that we should not ignore the drawbacks.

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Although more and more people read the news on the Internet, newspaper will remain the most important source of news for the majority of people. Do you agree or disagree with that statement?

At the present the people are being more familiar with digitalization and read the news with the help of the internet. But the majority of people believe that the most valuable and authentic source for news is newspaper. I completely disagree with this statement, I believe we are living in 21st century ,where everything has been digitalized as people are more convenient and comfortable reading the news on internet rather than buying newspaper and wasting both money as well as paper

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Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern era, it is debatable topic that many famous personality become a part of controversy all over the time because of money and fame. That is why they present a wrong example for youth. I strongly agree with this statement nowadays, social media opens lots of gates to become famous these days, it may ruins the life of youngster.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career , while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after graduating from high school . Dicuss both views and give your opinion .

some indviduals thinks that optaning a college dgree would improve your chances for better employee states , which i do believe as well because its rais your oppertionties to get a desant income in future mean while othere group thinks starting a job after finishing secondary school is more benifishal this essay will explor both prespective

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There are people who belive all academic students have to Loam and study everything they like to know. In opposite. There are some one who have oppinion that they should. work on subjects which have many benefits for their future live, for example everything-related to science and -technology. In my view students should learn their favorits even though studing subjects that are useful. 1 for future, is not a bad idea.

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To some people studying the past is the best way to help young people function well in the modern world. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures could be effective in helping young people to function well in the modern world?

Nowadays, There are two groups of people that face this issue in two different ways. The first group believes that studying the past is the best way to help young people, On the other hand, the second group does not agree with this statement.

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Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough excerise? What can be done about this problem?

Nowadays with rush in working hours a number of employees lack exercises action, even in their spare time leading to a adverse impact on their health. This essay will shed light on the reasons of why workers do not get abundance of it and how tackle this issue.

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Studies have shown that in many countries the income gap between the rich and poor is ever increasing. What problems can arise from this situation and what could be done to address this situation?

The difference in income between the affluent and impoverished is always prevelant in many countries and it is always growing, this crack in remuneration creates certain issues in society.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others,however,say other measures are required.

The sports are not only vital for an overall enhancement of our body but also indispensable for economy of one nation as they are world wide played such as cricket,football, basketball Badminton. It is true that sport center such as,gym,athletic club and many more will help individuals to keep fit and elated.

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Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying to much on technology?

Modern technology is rapidly accelerating, it is clear that in jobs it helps make working simple. Although this development presents some threats, I will display the dark side of the widespread use of it such as, a laptop, however, it present many benefit.

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Some people feel that the legal age at which People Can marzy should be least 21

Marriage is an important event of human life . Two individuals engage with their own pleasure.

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Modern technology is now very common in most work places. How do you think this has changed the way we work? Do you think there are disadvantages to relying to much on technology? In today'

The modern technology is rapidly accelerating, it is clear that in job it helps make working simple. Although this development presents some threats, I will display the dark side of widespread use it such as, laptop, however it present mach benefit.

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