IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 157

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern life , it's a big controversary that young people facing some pressure to succeed academically .while some people believe that if they remove non academic subjects from the school syllabus ,students may concentrate on their major subjects .I, totally agree with this statement and explore some views in below .

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An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

The cutting-edge technology in the shooping lifestyle becomes popular for numerous people around the world. The upward's tendency to afford stuff on daily basis is online. This increase trend trough this online-based shooping's lifestyle has brought both benefits and shortcomings up during its development.

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Development in technology causes environmental problems. Some people believe the solution to these problems is everyone accepts a simpler way of life, while others say that technology can solve these problems. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowadays, environmental problems are burgeoning day by day because of using modern technology. Some people think that individuals should lead their lives in normal way for solution. While others opine that decreasing these problems everyone should use technology. In this essay I will discuss both views. I, personally side with the latter view.

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Many people believe that zoos have no purpose in today’s world and should be closed. What problems do zoos bring? What are the alternatives to zoos if they are closed?

Nowadays some individuals argue about zoo existence, as that entertainment type holds lot of cons for both, animals and spectators. In my esaay I talk about possible issues that zoos can make and their alternatives if they obliterate.

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Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Undoubtedly people’s characteristics are God gifted Even some experts have proven that inherited traits are more powerful in developing our personality. However, I believe that experience is more powerful in character building at different phases of life than the traits from our ancestors.In this essay, I will discuss the major impact of experience for developing our personality.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Absolutely, I agree the most rich country should give the poor country what ever condition they are. Beside those step did not works or does not solve poverty. The poor countries should ellaborated about the country helping them because was try to developed their country.

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Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?

Society would pay to some organizations for those who need help. these charities are willing to cooperate with natural resources, Hospitals and many more. I probably do not participate in this, because they do not have clearance with the public and it is hard to trust how they struggle.

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In future, robots may do more of the work that is done by humans today. would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The world mainly depends on human resource even though, robots predicted to be the dominate do ever asking, ignoring the emotional or creativity. In this assay I will explain the positivity also side effect consideration.

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Living in a country where you must speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is obvious that's numerous societal issues will occur when you are a foreigner who has to use a foreign language. I tend to agree with this nation and my reasons will be illustrated my opinion with some relevant illustrations.

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Some people believe that to give opportunuties to the new generation, companies should encourage high level employees who are older than 55 to retire. Do you agree or disagree?

Serten individual person thinks that to a good time to new age groups, companies should motivate huge companies workers who are older than 55 to exit. I totally agree with this. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and my opinion.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

it is widely believed that some people want to improve not only their health but also the world as a whole by eating no meat or fish. I totally concur with this viewpoint with some following reasons.

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Some think that it is better to live in city while others prefer countryside life. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your opinion?

It is a debatable issue whether the city is the best or rural area for people lives. some claim that urban place is best because it has all the amenities whereas others prefer to village because this venue has all the natural resources and unpolluted air. This essay shall discuss both viewpoints, and I will give my opinion in the conclusion part.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people's skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effects they have in terms of health and society. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

It is true that nowadays people pay more attention to their self-regulation, in particular, they put emphasis on the color of skin.Towards this issue, people stand on different ground will give completely different views. Whereas, I will analyze this situation from many aspects as follows.

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many today feel that attention spans are becoming shorter due to the prevalence of social media to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s changing world, I think social media is making harder for many people to concentrate for a long time. Some people get distraction anytime when use social media a lot. Imagine, you are watching a video content on your social media account. Then you get a message. So, you quickly check it. After that other notification pop-up and you are ready to check it well. It’s like never-ending cycle that keeps breaking your focus.

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Most people are not interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it costs. To what extent to you agree or disagree?

In order to choose food, i strongly agree about that statement. The price tag of the product give more impact for some people. People who have middle to low economical stage still count and give more attention about how his own money's flow.

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Increase the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Iran and Iraq is the number 1 supplier of crude oil to India.Petrol segregates and separates from crude oil.It's a lengthy process.The government is determining the price of petrol on a daily basis and also determining the price of diesel.

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Nowadays, a growing number ofpeople with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The Advancement of medicine has been a really important element in humankind. Health problems always have been an issue since the dawn of time. It could temporarily cripple our abbility to carry out everyday tasks and it can even be fatal and kill us. Our knowledge of our own body and biology has grown over the century thus, making the understandment of medicine to help our body fight those health problems better. There has always been a debate about which is better, Alternative medicine or modern medicine. In this topic we will discuss about the both of them.

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More people today preferred to live alone in comparison to the past do you think it is a positive or negative development give your opinion and a relevant examples to support your view

Society nowadays are more likely to be independent while they want to be dependent in the past, such as in the ancient world. This special situation is discussed in this essay.

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Nowaways, more teenagers want to become famous actors or singers. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or negative development?

Over the years, teenagers wanted to become in famous actors or singers instead of become in professionals. It is originate by different factors such social media, traditions and culture that could be a negative development because they are involving young people into an easy life, where the talent cover all needs and the person only needs to think in how to enjoy the life.

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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, some people belive that students need to do practical working as well as studying from the school. I disagree with this statement as I believe students should focus on academic subject and exploring hobbies rather than trying to do some jobs.

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