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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that humans are damaging seriously the evironment. What are the causes? What should people do to solve this problem?

Perhaps, there is no topic of controversy in this contemporary society worth debating as the matter of that the people are damaging seriously the evironment. Indeed, people's views differ greatly as to whether humans have a nagative impact on the nature. To inhand living quality, the People are destroyting progressively the habital, ecosystem, biodiversity resulting in environmental degracation. To the best of my knowledge, various factors are claimed to be the cause, yet, could be tackled by plausible solutions.
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Economic development always harms the environment. It is impossible for a country to both develop the economy and protect the environment at the same time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Economic advancement is the root of a rustic where all dwellers have right to enjoy amenities in a rustic. Nowadays habitat is defacts people's lives by increasing diseases, viruses and weather. I accord with the latter notion of discord.
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Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in a job?

It is often said that,social abilities are one of the more important factor of recruitment. Some employers think that, social skilled employees are more successful than others. I will discuss both sides in this essay below.
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Some people believe that zoos have no place in the modern society, while others claim zoos are good places which are often used for beneficial purposes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people argue that zoos are should be in touristic places and contrary to animal rights.
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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos while others say that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

The wild animals is crucial across the world. Some claim that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos while others say that there are good reasons for having zoos in nations. I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.
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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

All experimentation on animals are arguably bad, as some people believe it should be protected by law. On the other hand, some others are convinced that scientific research can be beneficial for the society. In order to find the best solution, I will cover both arguments through this essay.
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In many western countries there are an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What advantages and disadvantages to couples no children

There are a lot of couples in our life prefer to live with out kids and in the same time there are a lot of couples love to be famouse with their children .I strongly disagree this affirmation for two reasons , firstly the kids is a beautiful thing in the life and the secondly at the end the couples with out children will be face alot of challenges in their life
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Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be care about it?

Nowadays, getting a job is difficult and pupils are finding it hard to get the desire job in their stream of graduation. There are several factors to this trend and I will opine multiple solutions in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There are differing opinions on whether children should study a forein language in their elementary school rather than middle school. In my opinion, learning new language at the young age may cause these children forget their own language. However, the benefit from that is they would accelerated to be fluent. For that reason, I think the advantage far outweighs any possible disadvantages.
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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT IS BETTER TO WORK FOR A LARGE COMPANY THAN A SMALL ONE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

In my point of view, working in a small company is better than working in the big company. Because of that, I disagree with this statement. As a person who ever worked in one of bigger company in my town, it was the worst experience in my life. Some people just now that “Big Company” will give you “Big Sallary” but they don’t know that “The Big Company” will bring you to the dark whole. You will get more pressure than in a Small Company. Because some of big companies just give the sweet thing for the first meeting. But for the next meeting, they will show up their real self. Especially in Indonesia, some of big companies don’t give the overtime wages to the employee. Not only it, they haven’t provided wages equivalent to their work.
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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Individuals are not supposed to be valued based on social and wealth status. Otherwise, personality, trust, honesty, kindness, and other inner values are more important.
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Some people believe that watching big events like sports and the Olympics on TV encourage adults to exercise regularly. While others disagree that there are other effective ways of getting them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Sports brings more positive effects in people lives. However, some claim that watching sport events such as Olympics foster to doing physical exercise regularly while others say that there are some other ways to encourage adults to exercise. I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.
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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

It would not be wrong to state that the media holds a sway over the lives of the population. Although, there is the disadvantage of becoming subservient to the media platforms, yet the advantage of providing knowledge to masses at a fast pace is equally significant. I surmise that despite its pros and cons, it is advantageous to be a part of media-rich society.
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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

These days, the way of educational system has changed towards getting employment. In some nations a large number of individuals prefer to enrol in skilled training courses instead of university graduates. This trend has more benefits than drawbacks and this essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.
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IELTS 12 - Test 6 - At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays Ali over the wards common peoples is increasing more than a huge number of young peoples the previous time compared with the number of adults people. This outweigh is a There are pros and cons.In this essay I will discuss the cons and I totally disagree with this.
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Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays more and more people, cultures, countries are becoming similar to each other. Every small things can be highly popular in many countries at the same time. Let us understand is this globalization good or nor for general public and how is impact our lives.
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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Health is very important factor of human life. Now a day unhealthy food, less work life balance and bad habits could be the reasons behind the illness and other health problems. We can control these by eating healthy food, Avoiding bad habits and exercise but these works mostly as a pre requisites.
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Some people say that art is an essential subject and every child should learn it in school. Do you agree or disagree?

One of the conspicuous trends of today’s world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that art is an essential subject. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriad of concerns in one’s life. However, I do not entirely accept this and I will explain why in this essay.
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The only way to improve safety on our roads is to give much stricter punishments for driving offences. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It is quite common these days, that government should to use stricter punishments in order to reduce large number of accidents and protect the safety of drivers. From my perspective, this solution may sharply decrease the number of accidents, however there are several other methods to solve this issue.
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Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer an

It is quite common nowadays that business meetings, discussions, conversations and training are happening online. Although this phenomenon have in the same time benefits and disadvantages, from my point of view merits of this trend outweigh its negative effects.
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