IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 161

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Shopping has developed from a necessary activity to a kind of entertainment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, there are numerous people who has done shopping activity not just for fulfill their necessary goods but as a kind of entertainment . In my opinion, I agree with this statement because shopping will help us to relax after a long hour work. In this essay, I will examine all the relevant opinions based on factual premises.

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Some parents give their children everything that their children ask for or allow them to do whatever they want to do. Is this good for children? What could be consequences for these children when they grow up?

Some people hold a view that helping other countries is equal to helping ourselves, so many countries with high levels of wealth would love to donate funds to not rich countries. However, this behaviour does not bring advantages to sovle poverty. Personally, I agree with that developed countries should stop giving financial assistance to poor countries, in reverse, they need to take other measures. In this essay, it will expain personal view of this topic and give exmples.

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Some people believe that the best way to increase the road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the issues connected to driving like car crashes and others, people think it's cause of the drivers age. In some extend I agree, but I think it's not only reason to accidents, it's also due to others drawbacks of drivers such as having not enough experience or lack of knowledge.

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It is sad that life is becoming increasingly stressful for most people. What is the reason of this phenomenon and how could this problem be solved?

The past people were more relaxed and felt happier than now due to the modern lifestyle. The technology and science progress are very impressive but are the population be happy now? it is hard to answer that because a large number of the public is living the stressful life and this trend is quite increasing dramatically. Professional and personal life are the main causes and some possible solutions can be solved this trend. This essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Shopping is the favourite free time activity for many young people today. Why do you think this has happened? Should young people be encouraged to do different activities in their free time rather than shopping?

Owing to technology and advance development, young people became more awareness in fashion and how to be in a nice look therefore they spend more time in shopping rather than doing other benefits activities. This will will articulate the reason of this statement as well as other paremount activities than shopping.

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International tourism has bought enormous benifits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantage of international tourism outweigh the advantage.

Tourism plays a crucial role in the nation's economy and the infrasture development, as a result, over the last two or three decades, tourism sector has been improvised as compared to the past. However, the interntional travel brings more advantages to many locations in the world while there is another point of view that it affects on the local residence and the environment. I do not think the interntional trip has more drawbacks than benefits and this essay shall discuss it briefly in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Parents should encourage children to spend less time studying and more time doing physical activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Parents must give some motivation their children to learning something more which is related to their field and more time ought to be spent by doing physical acts. I strongly agree this idea, Because physical action is so crucial for infant's growth both mentally and physically. In this essay, it can explored clearly and fully.

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While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more people prefer to study in university for a higher degree of certificate rather than occupationall training, such as electricians and plumbers. In my opnion, I think the later also as important as the former in society, the following contents will list my reasons.

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Some people think an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air polution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this.

Air pollution is one of the severe problems that should be concerned as effective as possible. While some people believe that international car-free days are an effective approach to reduce the contamination of air polluted. In this essay, I side with those who feel that there are any sensible other measures to deal with that issue.

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Discuss the implications of the growing influence of artificial intelligence on the education system in 2023. Consider the potential advantages and disadvantages, and provide examples or evidence to support your points. Write at least 250 words.

The impact of the increasing influence of artificial intelligence (AI) on the educations system in 2023. The rapid evolvement of advance technology has been a primarily driven in the growing influence of AI our social culture, including education. In my opinion, AI will contribute positively on education in 2023, if we use it with the right way.

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many people think that to become a successful specialist, it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. Do you agree or disagree?

Our brain might not design to learn about all of knowledges in the world. Although someone has a high IQ test will mastery more than one subject, that is better if you have plan to select one of them. I believe that focused on a special subject will has a significant impact to reduce a time and get more changes to reach a success life.

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as well as making money, businesses also have responsibilites. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that businesses is crucial task to improve the responsibilities.

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. discuss both these views and give your own opinion

In spite of the fact that, some individuals prefer to endure in a hard and challenging situation, others are into change and transition. In my perspective, improvement and change could be life’s milestone, so I am up to second group and in this essay I will disscuse about both views and give my own opinion.

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School Children should choose the subjects they study from a young age and stop doing subjects they find uninteresting. How much do you agree with this opinion and why? Give reasons and examples to support your answer.

School children should stop studying those subjects which they have no interest instead they should choose those courses which they have an interest in and they are studying from a young age. I am totally in favour of this statement. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss my viewpoint.

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Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this

Nowadays, People always doing activities that unhealth, whereas the scientist tell that there are two kind of activities, good and bad for health, because many individuals are not believe in research about healthy until their sick, and people hard to change their habit.

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Some people believe that sending childern to boarding schools at a very tender age is good To what extent do you agree or disagree write in 250 words

Home is considered to be the first school of the kids . Few individuals assert that this is a novel idea to send them to residential schools at a very sensitive age . In my opinion they will not the love and the warmth that is required at this crucial age but if your child is a spiled brat then it can be boon for them

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Instead of revealing the truth, the mass media very often misguides people. What are the reasons behind this and the visible effects on the society at large?

Nowadays, as we can see media is playing a vital role in communication sector. Subsequently, it is being seen that, by using this media power they spread some news without investigation the true story they just telecast fake information to general the general folks which had so many bad impact on them. In this essay, i will shed some lights on the background causes and the impact on the community.

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It can be difficult for small local shops to compete with large supermarkets and with on-line shops. How does this affect local communities? What could be done to improve this situation?

The situation among small shops, supermarkets and on-line shops is due to improving technology quite interesting.

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The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The amount of traffic in all bigger cities is incredibly enormous today. The need of the extended need of transportation and necessary changes will be discussed in this essay.

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Topic 18: Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say that it is only useful for entertainment. Discuss both views and gives your own opinion.

Some people say that television is just useful for entertainment, but others say that is also benefical for education. I believe that television is used for education, but more and more television display entertainment program than education, because many television program think about their rating rather than to be educated, and movie or infotainment are the program which having many audiences that can increase their TV rating.

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