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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

There has been much discussions regarding around the role of guardians some consider females achieve better parenting and as a result,they have an intrinsict value in bring out the youngsters in society,while others consider fathers can perform the same duties as well as mothers.These essay will delve into the details of my opinion around this topic in addition to some elucidations in order to corporate my point of view.
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With growing population in cities, more and more people live in a home with small or no outdoor areas. Is it a positive or negative development?

As the growing population, it has become common to live in small places with no outdoor areas. Some people argue that living in small areas is a negative development. I believe that it has health problems and there is no privacy. in the following paragraphs, I will explain more about it.
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Some people think that they can be fit by going to gym, while others think there are other better way to remain fit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

One of the most discussed issues nowadays is the appearance of people. In order to solve this major recommend going to the gym, while others think that even without a gym people can remain fit. There is no absolute agreement on whether becoming fit should be done by the gym or in another way.
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Sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

For the survival in this world, a person needs house,food and shelter and in all of them, significant role is played by job. One handful of people believe that it is a helpful way of collecting the information related to any employee who is selected for the job because it helps the employer to know that person abilities and strength in their field. Another set of people think that it is an irrelevant to take any personal information may be such data may be inaccurate provided by the employee just for the sake of work. In my opinion, it is right to have it in the employee's record.
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Some groups, such as poor people or people from rural area find it is difficult to access the university education. Universities should make it especially easy for the students come from the rural areas get an access to the university. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In modern era, it is believed by many that students who come from different rural areas must have easier route leading to university campuses while others opine that it should be the authority of university members to make a track that are accessible for every students. This essay will discuss the reasons why i completely agree with this statement
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In some countries,owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people.Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a possitive or negative situation?

It is stated that some nations, in spite of live in a rent house house ownership is uttermost important factor for individuals. Due to the high inflation house prices are increasing tremendorously. Accordingly, they believe that it will be a great investment. In my opinion I believe that it is a favourable trend for whole community.
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Studying abroad can be highly motivational for students and also inspire their dreams. However, whilst studying abroad can have a number of positive effects on students, there are also many difficulties that they may meet along the way. With this in mind, it is more advantageous to study at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer.

Some people argue that despite of benefits students can get when studying abroad, it also has the opposite effects along with their journeys there so that it is better to study at home. Based on this perspective, my notion is contrary to this issue due to two related things: learning new things and wider the mind.
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Alternative energy sources that use the natural power of the wind, waves and sun are too expensive and complicated to replace the coal, oil and gas that we use to power our cities and transport. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The global warming and a climate change always warns to limit the use of fossil fuels. However, to replace them with the renewable energy becomes a challenging as it is way far expensive than the fossils. That is why I feel renewable energy would probably take time to substitute fossil fuels.
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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

Technology has played an important role in todays world. It has played a vital role in all the sectors.
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One of your friends recently had birthday celebration but you missed it and you forgot to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. *apologise for missing the birthday celebration *explain why you missed it and why you didn't tell your friend *and say what you would like to do show that you are sorry

How can I say, except I'm sorry that I was not able to attend your birthday party I hope you are not mad at me. I am so happy to see the photos on Instagram.
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Instructions: You have 40 minutes to write your answer. Discuss the implications of the growing influence of artificial intelligence on the education system in 2023. Consider the potential advantages and disadvantages, and provide examples or evidence to support your points. Write at least 250 words.

Today, with the growth of internet accessibility to us, more and more society grab attention to the current innovation named Artificial Intelligence (AI). The increasing intelligence of technology should bring some benefits, including in educational system and help student to learn more in their school.
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Some people suggest that children do not understand the world of work and schools should make all teenagers spend a short time working as well as studying academic subjects. To what extent do you agree?

In early days most dependent on their parents behind children are not well equiped with skills to do men's job although, school should encourage them to do part-time jobs while attending classes. This essay will discuss the reasons why i completely disagree with pushing children to work at young age despite getting quality education
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Nowadays a large amount of advertising aimed at children should be banned because of the negative effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A large number of companies have been promoting their brands through advertising. It is believe that the bad ads are being effected by youngster. However, the ads are given the information by public. I partly agree, publish wrong content is given by the advertiser. Hence, many children have been effected through bad content. These types of advertisements should be banned so that youngsters have not effected.
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Success is often measured by wealth and material belongings. Do you think wealth is the best measure of success? What makes a successful person

Some societies think that getting an achievement is about having much money and various materials. Even though, many aspects of people are honoured as a successful person. I ensure that there is other way to be regarded as successful.
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The cities and towns all over the world the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what action can be taken to solve this problem.

No doubt, nowadays, individuals are facing traffic problems in the both modern cities as well as in town. Therefore, there are a number of causes and solutions behind this tendency which I will hash out in the further paragraphs.
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Some think newspapers are the best method for reading the news while others think other media is better. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

People have different views about reading newspapers is the best way for knowing news. Others say that social media’s information are better than it. In my following essay, I will discuss both sides and give my own opinion.
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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

It is common for most countires to have a developed contemporary medicine that provide an excellent level of health care. Access to a variety of good medical servicies leads to increase of life expectancy. These days a majority of development societies consists of citizens in an age over fifty. Authorites worry about an ageing populace and see in this situation a reason for future troubles. On the other hand, some individuals find more advantages having eldery residents.
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Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Many believe that women are the best for raising children as compred to men in most societies whereas others say that men's parenting is better as much as women do. I agree that the former opinion because women sacrifice their life to grow up their kids than men do. This essay shall discuss it briefly.
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Some people think that the best way to succeed in life is to get a university education, while others disagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

People claim that someone graduated from university is successful in every moment of life, while others disagree and feel that this situation is not valid at any time .This essay agrees that getting A university education and diploma cannot refer achievement of individuals whatever they want to do.This essay agrees that having tertiary education always does not bring success.
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There are those who claim that big cities are much suitable places for adolescence to live in. Do you agree or disagree?

Teenager period is considered the golden period of life while all the prosperous and amenities should be needed. Some claim that Cities are better choice for adolescence to grow up instead of the rural places. I strongly agree with this statement. This essay shall discuss why I agree this.
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