IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 163

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Online education is becoming increasingly popular. many students are choosing to study online instead of face-to-face education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this new approach?

Over the one decade, virtual learning has been popularised across the globe due to innovation of the technology. As a result, plenty of pupils prefer to learn online mode of learning method rather than traditional classroom method. Flexibility time and cost-effectiveness are the benefits of stuying in online whereas isolation and technical issues are the drawbacks. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There are a variety of athletes who openly endorse fitness products. In this essay, I will discuss why there are more pros than cons to this notion and form a conclusion.

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Some think that all entertaining TV programmes should educate people about the importance of social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Today, modern man is striving hard to maintain himself in the midst of plethora of evil practices in the society. his physical and mental strenghts are touching detrimental lows in the wake of social curses prevalent around him and talking of social issues, it has become quite a problem in the ,modern time. At the same time TV is main source the entainment so education via TV can play vital role in the betterment of society but I am not in favour of the given context is all TV programmes should educate people.

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In the future, it seems more difficult to live on Earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching another planet to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Technology has taken over our lives and it provides teremendous opportunites for people and it might offer livinig in another planet, in future. It is argued that institutes have to spend large chunks of money to research to live in another planet. this trend is considered to be negative compared with negligible positive aspects. this essay will support our opinion with examples.

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All cars that burn fossil fuels should be banned and electric cars should replace them. Do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that vehicles that consume natural gas must be forbidden, and instead, the applied alternative is supposed to be depending on electricity. I agree that the world needs to use gas-free transportation, because it saves the environment and looks more sophisticated.

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People today are surrounded by advertisement. This both affects what they think is important to them and is negative in their lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertisement is a marketing strategy where all companies selling their products and services to the humans and advertisement crucial for life because people's aware of new products and information according to their interests. According to perspective advert important for people because it will reduce our problems by seen advertisement. I accord with agree notion discord.

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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?

In a number of nations, a growing number of junior generations are committing crimes. This essay analyzes the exact incentives and the most effective punishments for this phenomenon.

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Some people believe that humans are damaging seriously the evironment. What are the causes? What should people do to solve this problem?

Perhaps, there is no topic of controversy in this contemporary society worth debating as the matter of that the people are damaging seriously the evironment. Indeed, people's views differ greatly as to whether humans have a nagative impact on the nature. To inhand living quality, the People are destroyting progressively the habital, ecosystem, biodiversity resulting in environmental degracation. To the best of my knowledge, various factors are claimed to be the cause, yet, could be tackled by plausible solutions.

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Economic development always harms the environment. It is impossible for a country to both develop the economy and protect the environment at the same time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Economic advancement is the root of a rustic where all dwellers have right to enjoy amenities in a rustic. Nowadays habitat is defacts people's lives by increasing diseases, viruses and weather. I accord with the latter notion of discord.

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Some employers are giving increased importance to employing people with good social skills in addition to good qualifications. Do you agree or disagree that social skills are as important as good qualifications for success in a job?

It is often said that,social abilities are one of the more important factor of recruitment. Some employers think that, social skilled employees are more successful than others. I will discuss both sides in this essay below.

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Some people believe that zoos have no place in the modern society, while others claim zoos are good places which are often used for beneficial purposes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, people argue that zoos are should be in touristic places and contrary to animal rights.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos while others say that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

The wild animals is crucial across the world. Some claim that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos while others say that there are good reasons for having zoos in nations. I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

All experimentation on animals are arguably bad, as some people believe it should be protected by law. On the other hand, some others are convinced that scientific research can be beneficial for the society. In order to find the best solution, I will cover both arguments through this essay.

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In many western countries there are an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What advantages and disadvantages to couples no children

There are a lot of couples in our life prefer to live with out kids and in the same time there are a lot of couples love to be famouse with their children .I strongly disagree this affirmation for two reasons , firstly the kids is a beautiful thing in the life and the secondly at the end the couples with out children will be face alot of challenges in their life

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Many universities graduates cannot find a job in their chosen profession what factors may have caused this situation and what in your opinion should be care about it?

Nowadays, getting a job is difficult and pupils are finding it hard to get the desire job in their stream of graduation. There are several factors to this trend and I will opine multiple solutions in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

There are differing opinions on whether children should study a forein language in their elementary school rather than middle school. In my opinion, learning new language at the young age may cause these children forget their own language. However, the benefit from that is they would accelerated to be fluent. For that reason, I think the advantage far outweighs any possible disadvantages.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT IT IS BETTER TO WORK FOR A LARGE COMPANY THAN A SMALL ONE. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

In my point of view, working in a small company is better than working in the big company. Because of that, I disagree with this statement. As a person who ever worked in one of bigger company in my town, it was the worst experience in my life. Some people just now that “Big Company” will give you “Big Sallary” but they don’t know that “The Big Company” will bring you to the dark whole. You will get more pressure than in a Small Company. Because some of big companies just give the sweet thing for the first meeting. But for the next meeting, they will show up their real self. Especially in Indonesia, some of big companies don’t give the overtime wages to the employee. Not only it, they haven’t provided wages equivalent to their work.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Individuals are not supposed to be valued based on social and wealth status. Otherwise, personality, trust, honesty, kindness, and other inner values are more important.

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Some people believe that watching big events like sports and the Olympics on TV encourage adults to exercise regularly. While others disagree that there are other effective ways of getting them to exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Sports brings more positive effects in people lives. However, some claim that watching sport events such as Olympics foster to doing physical exercise regularly while others say that there are some other ways to encourage adults to exercise. I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

It would not be wrong to state that the media holds a sway over the lives of the population. Although, there is the disadvantage of becoming subservient to the media platforms, yet the advantage of providing knowledge to masses at a fast pace is equally significant. I surmise that despite its pros and cons, it is advantageous to be a part of media-rich society.

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