IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 165

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. Discussion both sides and give your opinion

There is no doubt environmental issues are detrimental to the earth. While some people believe that it should be solved globally, others argue that it is better to deal within each country. In this essay, I will explain my support for the latter view.

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Some people think that developing countries need financial help from international organization. Others think that it is practical aid and advice that is needed. Discuss these views and give your own opinion.

It is commonly believed that global oranization should assist financially and practically to developing countries. Many person claimed they should get help only commercially ,wheras others argued advise and practial cooperation are more important for the country. I am convinced financial aid are main ingridiants of a nation in hard time to develop every section of the country.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the contemporary era, the internet has been becoming very popular day by day. Although, some people want to have news in paper, but it more concerns feelings, which can be given by reading a classical sort of paper. It is widely agreed that, it is the only a matter of time, when newspapers will become an occasion in people's life, which I am going to explain further.

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Some people think that the increasingly flexible working environment nowadays, such as working at home, has a positive impact on workers' lives. Others, however, feel this development is just a means for organisations such as private companies to exploit workers for profit. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Recently, most individuals believe that the increasing proportion of adaptable working place as well as working offline at homes, has a good impact on employees' lives. Others, however, consider that this improvements just a means for organisations such as private companies to exploit workers for their own advantage. In my point of view, I truly side on offline job at the office because is more efficient and benefit also safe to the worker.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Most of museums consider fees for entering and visiting whereas the others are free. There are some pros and crons for this issue but overall, in my perspective the benefits are more than the drawbacks.The following essay will discuss the statement.

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These days the fashion in clothing are constantly changing. Is this affecting Individuals and the environment in a positive or a negative way

Nowadays, Fashion is one of the greatest trends and at present the fashion is canging constantly and this trend is an emotional impact on human being as well as environment. It is a hot potato, in this following essay, I will shade some lights on both good and bad side.

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Nowadays, young people are admiring media and sport stars, even though they do not set a good example. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In these moderen era, public has been started to be fans of artists or popular athlets, although they do not show a commendable action. this phenomenon happen based on the fact that, every person has been used smartphones and now information is easy to obtain for the whole world. I personally think that this is a positive development.

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It so important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age . Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion. What sort of punishment should be parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relavant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Children are must educated by teacher and parents to learn about right and wrong in the early age in the school or in the houses. By that, they can differentate about truth and lie in their lives and how to give punishment. In my opinon this is a good to lead children become responsibilty and have broad mind.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As we consider , There is a significant change in how different countries make money and lead the power by their economy situation and it causes money problems and poverty to the countries which they have less to say in this major. So, in order to solve poverty in these countries , rich countries have startet to give money to poorer countries which is not enough and i agree with this statement because money can't solve every problem. So, you are going to read about this agreement which I discussed in this essay.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free timeDiscuss both views and state your opinion.s

people advocates that a person should have upstands , funds and less free time , other thinks opposed.in my opinions , having enough wealth and spending quality time loved ones is worth it. This essay will discuss both views and will also Elaborate on my view in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people think that reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many of them think that reading stories in books is better than modified education.

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in some countries ,it is illegal for company to reject job applicants for their age. Is this a positive or negotive development ?

In a few countries, it is unlawful for employers to depend on their age to take employees. In this essay, I will discuss the positive and negative sides.

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some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their first training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer.

What we should do after graduation ceremony is it better to stay in our mother country or leaving to achieve our goals. It is uncommon . That in some countries after gratudation day Professions leave there country and begin a new life in others countries this action has several reasons but mainly the most important reason is money .therefore, many people become opponents of this action. on the other side,many others become coponent of this action because they had financial problems .in this essay , we review both views and i give my personal belief in conclusion .

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is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles,and so on are involved in a child upbringing,rather than just their parents.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The importance of repairing offspring which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people climbing that is beneficial While others,s reject this notion.The substantial influence of this trend has sparked controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the above-stated proposition is undoubtedly irrational.I strongly agree with that for many reasons.

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is better for children if the whole family including aunts, uncles, and so on are involved in a child’s upbringing, rather than just their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The important of repairing children which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people climing that is benefeicial while other,s reject this nothion .The substantial infulence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in resent years. In my opinion, the above stated proposition is undoubtedle unrational.I strongly agree with that for many reasons.

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succesfull sports professional can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions.some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is notion of myriad number of people that sportsperson should earn more than other professionals. They argued that they work harder than scientist, researchers and other professional. Whereas another section of society believes that professional should earn more as they sometimes risk their lives while performing their duties. I am of opinion that other professional should earn more than sports professional.

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The costs of international travel are decreasing and tourism is growing. Do you believe that the advantages of increasing tourism outweigh its disadvantages?

Over the last two or three decades, tourism industry has been improvised to around the world. As a result, travel expenses are affordable and this industry also increases. I think this phenomenon has more benefits than drawbacks. This essay will discuss it briefly for the subsequent paragraphs.

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Leaders and directors in an organization are normally older people. Some people think younger leader would be better. Do you agree or disagree?

It’s obvious that the leader of an organisation will usually be an experienced elder people. Sticking on such trend, some people argue that even young people can take a lead of an organisation. I certainly disagree with the statement.

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In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule?

Nowadays We jave so many types of music around the world A lot of people listen more foreign musics than traditional songs In my opinion we need musics that are when we heart somewhere we enjoy

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Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is undeniable that advertising Plays an earth-shaking role For businesses around the world to sell their products and services. However, while Some People believe that marketing impacts negatively everyone's life, I could agree with those who deem that It is advantageous for us.

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