IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 164

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole.Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

THE DEVELOPMENT OF TECHNOLOGY HAS A BIG IMPACT ON RELATIONSHIPS AND LIFE BETWEEN PEOPLE TO OTHERS.THE AUTHOR SEE THAT IT HAS A LOT OF BENEFITS LIKE EASY TO CONTACT AND EASY TO ADD FRIENDS WHILE THE DRAWBACK IS MAKES PEOPLE GET AWAY FROM SOCIETY.THE WRITER WILL MAKE IT CLEAR IN THE NEXT PASSAGE.

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New technologies present children with new possibilities and potential danger. Discuss the advantage and disadvantage of technology on children in todays society.

In the 4.0 era, the internet has grown rapidly and it is applied in every field in human society. One of the things belongs to the internet is social media, which is being used much by people. This status brings bold advantages and disadvantages for a sense of communication among humans. This essay agrees with the ideas it have a great effect on people's live

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the family values are deteriorating ,what are the positive and negative changes? what is your opinion

The values of the family are been carried out for centuries from generations to generations and these values have originated from the ancient ancestral time period. However, these values has its own pros and cons and have taken a toll in todays generation. In this essay, I will provide reasons for both merits and demerits of following the values of the family.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do that advantages of using social media for communication outweight the disadvantages

At 4.0 era, internet are grown up rapidly and it was applied in every fields in human society. One of the things belong to internet are social media, which are being used much by people. This status bring bold advantages and disadvantages for sense of communicate of human. This essay agree with the ideas it have a great effect to people live

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationsips and societ as a whole. Do the ad vatages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

The growing number of social media has a big impact on social relationships. This writer believes that better connectivity in communicating can not outweigh the drawbacks less quality time and fuels functional impairments.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using sociak media for commucation outweigh the disadvantages?

The social media rising has social and personal relationships affect as a whole. This writer argues that the advantage of getting in touch easily is overshadowed by the drawbacks of lack face-to-ace communication and get distraction.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

In the digital ages, the increasing of using social media to contact has affected their relationships. This writer agrees that the disadvantages of using social media for interaction outweigh the advantages.

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The rise of social media has affected personal relationships and society as a whole. Do the advantages of using social media for communication outweigh the disadvantages?

The development of social media has a big affected on connections's people and society as a whole. This writer believes that the benefits of keeping in touch with others and the convenience of social media outweigh the drawback of lacking experience.

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Topic: Spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Communication through speak directly whether encounter face-to-face or by phone, is better than written. Having taken other solutions into consideration, I agree that spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

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A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets plenty of exercises and avoids stress. what should people do to stay healthy in your country? give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, most people have started to realise the importance of mantaining healt. They should to has healthy food, gets plenty of exercises and avoids stress. This essay will explain how a few people gets healthy and give some reasons include any relevant examples.

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It is better to buy just a few expensive clothes, rather than lots of cheaper clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, people have a lot of choices about clothes, some of them buy lots of cheap clothes, but some of them rather a few expensive clothes. From my point of view I would rather lots of clothes with minimum price. Because I will get more assortment and I can save money. Because it is not brand.

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some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that purpose of museums is the educate. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In this modern era a number of kinds of exhibitions are occurring and have become a trend. So some people think that museums should be meaningful sectors for family, couples and friends etc. However, other individuals think that the usage of museums is to provide for academic sectors. In my opinion I strongly agree that museums should be places which are more fun.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Due to the rapid developments of sciences and technology, we are currently living in the digital era. Technology has been embedded in our daily lives, as it has the ability to accommodate to various kinds of one's needs. Surely, this includes our necessity to gain information about the world. Thus, different kinds of digital newspapers and books emerge, making it much simpler for us to read nowadays. However, I believe that despite its simplicity, old-school methods of reading is still a must to exist.

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people have some questions about the the charge for admission is necessary or not. In my opinion, paying admission for the museums and artists is a suscessful bahavior of supporting them, which is also a form of allowing them to create high quailty articles for the human beings and the society.

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Some people think history has nothing or little to tell us, but others think that studying the past history can help us better understand the present. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

History has so many stories to tell and by study it can help us better to understand what actions we will take for the present and future. Meanwhile, certain people doesn’t agree with that statement. There are some valid reasons for both sides which I will consider now.

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many people think that to become a successful specialist, it is better to choose a career early in life and never change it later. Do you agree or disagree?

To be successful in life is to have a well settled career. People who plan their career at early age have achieved more in life rather than the ones who have no future plans. In this eassy I will provide reasons for the agreement of having a planned future and being consistant plays a vital role to become successful.

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Some people say that t is necessary to use animals for testing medicines intended for human use. Others, however, think it is cruel and uncessary. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Since a couple of years ago, many cosmetic industries and medical institutes started to use animals with the aim of testing the quality and side effects of their products, sparking many debates. While some believe it is definitely necessary, others consider it as animal abusing. To my mind, although it is vital to examine a product completely, but it could be done by other way instead of using animals.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many believe that science’s main purpose is to make people’s lives better. I strongly agree with this statement since indeed, science is the gate to many facts that we know today and the fact that scientists nowadays continue to do their research based on scientific evidences.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

While university students have been increasingly seen to have the desire of studying more subjects on top of their main ones, the objectors including their parents would like them to contribute their time and effort to only things that are parts of a qualification. Both sides have their own direction of looking at the phenomenom because this is the matter of individual priorities and preferences. As someone thinking it is better to let people have their chances to explore the world from studying different things they are interested in, I advocate the students' wish in this case.

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society is experiencing an increase in many problems such as crime and drug abuse due to urbanization. Give some suggestions to control this trend?

Urbanisation is a development for countries. However, it also leads to hurdles such as increase crimes like thefts, rapes, and murders as well as young people are addicted to drugs. This is a topic of concern. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss few steps to tackle this problem.

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