IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 196

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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ln some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

There are several people who support advantages of giving idea to offsprings who are can achieve anything if they try hard enough. Although it has advantages, this has some harmfull impacts on childrens such as unrealistic expectations and potential failure.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In the contemporary society, there has a trendceny that people who live in countryside start moving to cities, cause the average of population in different areas became significantly changed recent. In the following essay, I will explain why I think this situation is more negative in several perspative, and give the conslution in the end.

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These days, many students or teenagers rely on AI-powered tools for study or work, which loses their creativity and autonomy. To what extent, do you agree or disagree with this statement? Write an essay of about 250 words to answer the above question. Give reasons and include any relevant examples to support your answer.

In this day and age, modern technologies are used widely in every country, especially for education and work purpose. More students and employees are prone to consult their assignments on website rather than trying to solve the problems by themselves which causes lack of autonomy and creativity. Personally, I disagree with this assertion for two reasons

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Nowadays the media should include more good news in their publications. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Currently, impossible to refuse that printing media has extremely significant for various individuals. Since in modern has technology to help for every people can access about other news that essential to has wonderful description news. This essay will examine behind the reasoning why I agree with this statement.

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Many young children are spending large amount of time in front of screens. What are the causes of this and what other problems does it lead to?

Many young teens have been spending long periods of time in front of screens. This might be cause some parents who do not set time limit to play, and parents who have two jobs during the day and they are not at home. Some problems that these might lead are that these young children might sufffer from hyperactivity issues and isolation because they avoid to talk to people.

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The health benefits of physical exercise are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. what are the reason for this? What could be done to encourage them to exercise regularly?

Regular physical exercise has been recognized as an essential component of a healthy lifestyle due to its variable health benefits. However, despite people know the advantages very much, they are fail to implement an regular exercise plan in their daily. This essay aims to discuss about the reasons why and propose several ideas to improve the phenomenon.

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In recent years, online education is becoming more and more popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon? Use specific details and examples to explain your opinion.

Having online classes is widespread and famous in the past several years which became more noticeable during the pandemic of Covid-19. Granted that having classes is becoming more convenient or less complex due to online, it still has bad impact on people in many ways as well. There are reasons to support the claim. In my perspective, adapting the uses of mobile phone in education would benefit the teenagers who are still in school; however, this should be limited as it also have disadvantages which is harmful to the susceptible young people.

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In some countries, the government promotes public transport as the primary means of transportation and discourages private vehicle ownership. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation

Now a days,The People is using their own vehicle instead of using a share ride or public transportation because private vehicle is now affordable and it's no more the Luxiours amenities. It's called now mandatory things for most of families. Using a public transportation has some upward and downward.

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Many employers are employing people with good social skills as well as good qualifications. Do you agree or did agree that good social skills are as important as a good qualification to succeed in jobs

There is no doubt that these days surely we should on employers employing they show people they have experience and multiple skills in a job . The question is, are the skills required for employees at work or not, or is a good qualified person sufficient ? In this essay , I am going to clarifying ideas and what is most appropriate .

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Governments should spend money on rail/ways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

I believe the good developing countries can see from the infrastructures, the statement says the government needs spare money for railways rather than roads. I fully not really agree with this statement because the government also needs to spend money on other subjects such as roads not only on railways. In my opinion, two aspects are the most important for the transportation sector because it can be helpful to make people quickly arrive at their purpose.

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In the past most working people had only one job. however, nowaday is more and more people have more than one job at the same time. what are the reasons for this development? what are the advantages and disadvantages of having done one job?

Having single job was popular for people in previously years, theas days, being multi jobs is increase among people a lot,. There are some results in it, that are related to people's lifestyle, so I would argued both its benefits and harmful aspects.

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In many countries people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays life expectancy is very high, elderly people are able to live a long life. It is often argued that senior citizens cause challenges to the local governments whilst others believe that it is an advantage to have many older people in the community. I opine that the negativities overpowers the positivites, this essay will consider some reasons below.

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it is important for people to take risks,both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages؟

At present modern and competitive world, one should take higher risk either into their professional or personal lives to be successful in careers or achieve higher goal into personal lives. In my perspective, the benefits of taking risks and deny the disadvantages is outweigh more than doing nothing and lives in comfort zones. In this essay, I will illustrate both the merits and demerits of taking one step ahead into professional and personal lives and give my opinion. To commence with the benefits of taking risks or put ourselves out of comfort zones. Firstly, as a human beings, we are obsessed and passionate about doing something adventurous and innovative to build our life more peaceful and comfortable since many years by taking various risks. Secondly, nowadays, with the technology explosion and globalization, people are competing with each other in every fields.T...

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Some peoplebelieve that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is an opinion that the salary range of maximumly and minimum paid professions need to be decreased. Although I acknowledge that the highest wage difference is negatively affect to the fairness of society as a whole, I mostly believe that in the period of contemporary economic relationships, the value of worker should be determined naturally without any intervention.

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Many regions in the world rely on tourism for the revenue it generates. However, some people complain about the problems that come with tourism. What are some of these problems and how can they be solved?

It is true that many countries consider tourism as the best source of revenue however, other opine that it is tourism who bring alot of issue with it. in this essay, we will explore the main causes of problems along side with some effective and practical solutions

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what is homelessness? what are the reasons for the homeless people

The term 'homeless' refers to the people who lost loss their homes, whatever the reason was. Most people become homeless due to the bad gathering of friends. Some lost their homes because of lost their job or due to lost of everything in gamble whether their home, assets and even wife as well . Homeless people 's lifestyles vary country to country . In poor countries they do rigorous struggle to get food as compared to rich countries . I've seen many homeless people who depend on government shelters also they start begging to fulfill their will of drugs. Developed countries provide them food for entire month along with some cash on monthly basis in order to control robbery and unemployment. Furthermore , homeless people directly impact on country's economy . As they do not work for their livelihood and also do not contribute in the government 's economy even they live in country but not include in the country's official counting ofthe population. That'...

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have dissapeared or are disappearing. What problem is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this solution?

It is true that many individuals are forgetting their traditional method of celebrating in many parts of the world. There are various reasons why it is vanishing. In this essay, we look at the different causes of this issue and provide effective and practical solutions.

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Governments should spend money on rai/ways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In several years, Indonesian government was focused on building public infrastructure like water irrigations, dams, bridges, roads, housing areas, and the newest public transportasion high speed train (KCJB). In my opinion it was good idea to built more railways station because of some reasons like:

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Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Discuss hoth these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for vour answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Prominent professional athletes earn a large sum of paycheck compared to other important occupations, which led to the discourse of the fairness of this issue. While some may feel that the unattainable level of money is quite unfair, I feel that the important thing to highlight is how a lot of effort and risk is needed to be a prominent athlete, justifying their level of paycheck.

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Crime rate,in most countries ,is often higer in urban areas than in rural areas .why do you think that is?what can be done to reduce the problem.

In the present era, in city areas, the percentage of criminals is calculated more in comparison to in village areas in most of the regions. Well, there are various reasons behind this scenario along with this there are certain preventive measures needed to be taken to cope with this mense. I will explicate both of these in upcoming paragraphs with relevant examples.

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