IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 196

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekends. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or you feel children have enough education at school?

In recent years popularity and importance extra classes are expanding. Many parents think that education in the school are not enough, and they consider that extra courses give their children more knowledge. In my point of view, teaching in schools are enough, if children fully understand material.

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Some people believe that countries should produce the food to feed their population themselves and import as little as possible. To what extend is a positive or negative phenomenom?

It is argued that states need to manufacture consuming items for their natives while getting a few foods from abroad. It is a positive situation because it will help to reduce starvation and maintain national wealth.

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Some people believe that the government should financially support retired people. Others think they should care for themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that retired people should be financially established by their government to continue their lives. Of course, this thought is arguable among people. Some think that it will be fine and others say it could be a problem to the country. In my view, we have to see what the job has done by them in the past, so we can consider whether it is suitable to get financially support from the government or not.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encourage. others belive that children who are thought to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for answers and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Competition and cooperation has always been a prime concern of every individual since time immemorial. Some communities assert that challenging is more crucial part among children, while others opine that collaboration between pupils can develop their behaviour into good. From my perceptive, both are significant role played by a society and l will discuss this matter in further paragraphs.

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Many people think that to become a successful specialist and never change it later . Agree or disagree ?

People have divergent opinions about become a prosperous specialist preferable to select a vacation in early life and don't alter it later . Although, I beleive it's a controversial objective and I will explain in this essay .

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Doctors in many countries say that people do not do enough physical exercises. What are the causes of this trend? How can the situation be improved?

Nowadays, most of the people are not doing any physical exersise in most of the country their were many resons behind this. Through out this eassy i will dicuss why prople are not willing to do exercise and what factors can motivate them to exercise in a regular basis.

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Some people believe that homework should not be given to school children. Others, however, say that homework is an important requirement for children to be able to develop appropriately. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that home work is important to children to develop their knowledge and others think students do not need to be given assignments. I personally believe that homework does not give much impact to students.

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In some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. What problems does this cause and what are some of the possible solutions?

In some parts of the world, the fact that young people are reluctant to vote in an election is still becoming an issue. I believe, there are many reasons that might lead to this problem, but the solutions has to be hand over to the government and the individuals in each countries.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are two types of views in every society. Some individuals think that only financial advancement is important for human and others do not accept the mentioned radical point of view. They believe that the prosperity of each community depends on all-round growth.

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Should young children be encouraged to follow strict rules based on their cultural traditions or allowed to behave freely? Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Is it is widely known that numeorus communities are based on cultural traditions. So that there is a debate about children from this specific groups, whether they should follow these strict rules or behave freely. This essay will depict both of these views. In my opinion, children should stand on their own ground.

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Some individuals say that mobile is unnecessary for a young group over other things that it's useful for young ones discuss both views and give your opinion

It is hard to imagine in the modern era a young person without a modern gadget in their hands. Although, such devices as mobile phones or tabs might give many usefull tools for an educational process as it may seem, but there are some hidden harmfull effects which can be given also, as I am going to explain further.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, the number of obese children are rising day by day. According to the western society survey there is an increase in the number of overweight children by almost 20%, in the past decade. This essay will look at the core reasons for this and propose some solid solutions.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, a vast majority of people want to change and enhance their fairness by cosmetic surgery. One of the main reason is that people want to be attractive and beautiful and it can negatively impacted on their health .

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Some people say that zoos have no useful purpose. Others believe that zoos are beneficial in many ways. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

A number of people believe that there is no potential benefit that can be received from zoos, whilst others consider that zoos have numerous vantages. This essay discusses virtue and drawback of the existence of zoos. Personally, i see eye to eye with the idea that states zoos is advantagous.

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Some people believe that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that raising gasoline prices is the most effective way to address environmental issues. This essay disagrees with this statement because it will lead to inflation and lower income level residents will suffer greatly. In addition, this policy will not change peoples’ habits instantly.

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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

Recently, there was a debate regarding the influence of experiences before school time and youth time. While some people believe that the experience a child before schooling is most influence, others think that it at school time is more influential especially for youth.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working live. Others think that it is better to work for different organization. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.

differnt envionmnet, build up diffent experience

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People live expectation increases at present day in which many people argue that it adds more problem, while others people think the opposite. I posit that the advantages unable surpass the merits.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Considering a lot of factors before making a decision for something can help people to be careful with their choices and ensure their future outcomes resulting from their decisions. However, the drawbacks it can yield far outweigh these benefits, the most noteworthy of these cons being that individuals might lose a chance to experience new challenges in their lives, and they can lose opportunities to get promotion in working.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays because of economic and job advancements tons of people are migrating to urban fields such as metropolises. However, it has downward sides as well as positive ones. Therefore, in this essay, I am going to debate both stances.

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