IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 200

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

When it comes to a children's developmen, opinions differ among viewers. Some people hold the angle that the perfect time children experience is before they go to school. Other people show their view that experiences should be gained when they are adolesents because it will have bigger impact on them. In my point of view, i agree with both of argurement and i will give an explanation for that.

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Under British and Australian laws a jury in a criminal case has no access to information about the defendant's past criminal record. This protects the person who is being accused of the crime. Some lawyers have suggested that this practice should be changed and that a jury should be given all the past facts before they reach their decision about the case. Do you agree or disagree

It is believed that a jury ought to be provided all the information about the past facts of offender. While this may work to a certain extent, I would argue that this issue also has dark sides.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some nations, the number of people who interested about the history of their accommodations increases. This essay will explain about the reason why people get curious about the places they live in and deliver the explanations about how they can find the answers.

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With increasing populations and ever growing urban centre, many countries are losing their natural beauty spots. What benefits are there to protecting places of natural beauty? How can this be solved?

Nowadays, many countries are losing their natural because of the rapid population in the urban areas. By protecting these attraction points the country can boost up their economy and also a clean and fresh environment. This problem can be solved by a strict lookup to these areas.

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When employers choose the best person for a job they should consider personal qualities, rather than qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this developed world the corporation opt to hire a person who involves personal qualities instead of a diploma and work experience. Personally, I agree that employers have the right to choose a problem solver and quality person. this essay will discuss that I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

Many people go througth life doing work that they hate or have no talent for their work because they do not have experience for life when they are starting to work.

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The best way to solve the world's environmental problem is to increase the prices of the fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The environmental problem is always been a serious question around the world. Because the environment is becoming more and more severe, the public and world leaders are more concerned about environment. In order to reduce the environmental pollution, some people point out that increase the price of the fuel can be a effective way. I do not really agree with that. Fuel is a basic daily necessity. However, it has a huge impact on the environment. Fueling burning can release carbon dioxide into the atmosphere which strengthen the global warming. In this situation, some people believed that if the price of fuel increases, then there might be less people drive private cars and alleviate the stress of the environment since fuel burning has occupied a great proportion of environmental pollution. Nevertheless, fuel pollution is not the only pollutant. Increasing the price of fuel cannot solve the problem. I think the most integral part is the awareness of the public. There are also ...

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Some people think that access to internet is necessary to live a full life? Do you agree or disagree?

In recent days, usage of internet is becoming populer in the world due to the advance of technology. Some people believe that using internet is essential for their daily needs. I strongly believe, internet delivers so many benefits for human in their life and it is becoming a primary one at that moment.

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Public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free for the people who use it. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is good for the poorer, if the state ought to pay for them public transport, however, government also need capital to repair and reconstruct roads and railways.Therefore, personally, I agree that mass transit should be free to the users.

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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?

Nowadays, there are many people who prefer to be self-employed, or starting their own business instead of working for another company or organization. Personally, I think that either of it has its own advantages and disadvantages that also depends on someone’s preferences and their circumstances.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages

It is essential to comprehend that taking action out of comfort zone is beneficial to human beings to reach new levels of life achievement including in professional and personal contexts. I personally think there are more positive chances to be exposed to those who are continuously practicing to take risks for the greater good.

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As a global trade increase, many goods including those we use on a daily basis are producing in another country and have to be transported long distances. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages?

Globalisation in this year's increased and we have many thoughts regarding a wide range of goods that people use in their daily life,Nevertheless the biggest part of the products are manufactured in other countries. In my opinion, there are many disdvantages than positive effects, this essay will argue that I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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The following is a line graph showing the increase and decrease in wildlife population especially animals like bears, dolphins and whales through the years 2017 to 2022.

The line graph gives detailed information about how many wildlife populations developed in the space of six years.(2017-2022)

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture,many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Technological knowhow in agricultural section still unable to cater food supply in most parts of the world leading to starving condition for majority of poor people. This essay will explain the causes leading of this notion such as over poplulation,and more food grain demand as well as less supply, also explain problems like import form developed contires and improvisation of cultivated land.

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Children should go school or teach at home. Discuss both aspects and give your opinion.

Since past schooling is the one and only method of education. But now it seems to getting change as teaching at home is increasing popularity among present society. Schooling is facilitate to improve a plethora of life skills while parents are able to establish a proper secure environment in home base education. However, I strongly believe that school education is most suitable for students as it opens the variouse oppertunities to interact with human.

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The best way to sole the environmental problem is to increase the price of fuel .To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays, globally is a big issues environmental problem. However, this issues pop- up day by day. Thus, I argued that, the affecting main this situation people are using lots of vehicles. Nevertheless, I totally agree with the above statement. Due to, one thing is within short period time can sole this issues. On the other hand, when fuel price increased society will move alternative source of energy. In this my opinion, I am going to explain with relevant examples further paragraphs.

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Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. Why do they think so? Solutions for this negative attitude

A number of people seeing the tourism from global has negative impact to their nation. This essay believes that the bad feeling is caused by culture shocking and development limitation of local business while education to the citizen and well planning of the tourism area could be solutions of this negative attitude.

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Nowadays a lot of buildings such as offices and schools are being built an open plan design. Why is that? Do you see this as a positive or negative development?

Modern workspaces were created in order to meet people’s wants and need. It is clear that easier to make discoveries in a group of people with constant discussions. That is why many companies and schools try to create such places where all people would sit in the same big room, so let us understand all pros and cons of this type of place and why it is so popular.

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Foreign visitors should pay more than local visitors for historical and cultural attractions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that the tourists from afar should pay more money than the local residents to visit the important sites and heritages. In my opinion, I concur with the idea that paying more because the foreign come from developed countries and the maintenance expenses are costly, while remains a valid concern that requiring higher payments for the overseas could result a hazard damages to the economy.

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Some say that music is as important as other subjects at schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

There are different opinions regarding the significant of music subject in helping youngers' studies. With some people claiming that music weights the same as the other fields of studies, some believed that music could not enhance childrens' learning as the other subjects do in their life. I personally stand for the former, having a view that music is also importance for children in terms of enhancing their learning. I would talk about the reasons behind that in the following paragraphs.

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