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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation.

It has been widely claimed that more people prefer to be self-employed in this century than to work for corporation or organisation. While it could be considered that freelance working has more advantages. This essay will firstly discuss the reason for the claim before elaborating why I consider the situation to be positive circumstance.
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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Other believe it is important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification.

It has been widely claimed that some students in university would like to learn additional subjects apart from their main subjects. While it is argued by some that it is crucial to spend all time and concentration for learning for the degree. This essay will firstly discuss both perspectives before elaborating why I consider that learning subjects beside from major subjects to be positive circumstance.
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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.

In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for government. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people.
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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

n modern era, some countries are trying to built a legacy by successfully participating in different tournaments with good practice and other countries are focusing on providing sports facilities that each one can take advantage, and I agree with this approach to developing sustainable and stable training methods.
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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside us decreasing.

It has been widely claimed that the reason causing residents in countryside in the number of states be falling is people living outside the city centre trend to move to live in the city. While it argued by some that the situation could be considered as positive development. This essay discusses with the perspectives why I consider that the declining of the number of people in rural areas to be negative circumstance.
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Living in a different nation where individuals have to speak and learn a foreign language can sometime be challenging and can bring some social setbacks and cultural shock to them, as well as practical issues. I strongly agree with the statement as it can contribute to deterioration of mental health as well as leading to miscommunication among the native speakers and the foreigners.
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More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city? How can government make urban life better for everyone?

In recent days, I consider that the cities are like a place of opportunity. As well as earning a living has become much more difficult. Although there are some drawbacks of migrating to cities, the government could do to ensure the urban condition for citizens.
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Some workers must work at night. What are the advantages and disadvantages of night-shift work? Give reasons and examples to support your opinion.

These days, midnight shift is famous around the world due to the financial crisis. However, some employess do not have thr chance to ignore the night job, therefore, they must be worked. There some advantages and disadvantages are in these phenomenon and I will discuss it briefly for the foregoing paragraphs.
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Some educationalists argue that non-exam, arts-based subjects, such as music, drama, art and craft, should be compulsory in the secondary-school curriculum. They believe that activities such as these can improve overall academic performance. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A major theme that is being discussed by several experts in the field of art turns to have contradictions and various points of view. A certain part of specialists hold the opinion that it is obligatory to include in the school program topics based on creativity. This essay will shed light on the reason why such disciplines should be promoted and how they can develop students' results, according to my personal experience and belief.
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Some people think that purchasing imported agricultural products has a positive effect. Others think consuming domestic products is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Technology has flourished by leaps and bouds in multifarious fields, especially agricultural, and as a result, food products are imported enormously as compared to the past. Some believe that buying other countrie's agricultural goods providing more benefits, while others opine that people should support their local farmer's goods instead of imported. I agree with a latter opinion and this essay shall discuss it briefly for the following reasons.
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According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourists in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happens? How was tourism different in the past?

An international magazine shows that nowadays many travelers book plane tickets to fly straight to their destination and do not almost go out during their vacation. On the contrary, in the 1960s and ‘70s, travelers often experienced and explored a lot of things so they had memorial memories. In my opinion, I think that we can do anything as long as we feel comfortable and chill out during a trip.
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These days consumers are faced with an increasing amount of advertising from various companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertising? What measures should be taken to protect them?

The advertisement play a crucial role in people's live which it stimulates enormously to buy products even If does not requires. I think consumers are influenced by advert and some tackle measure should be implemented to eliminate this adverse trend. This essay shall discuss it briefly for the following reasons.
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Univwersities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The acceptance rate of students in an university should be equally taken in each subject. I agree with the statement that accepting students equally from opposite genders in each subject is very important because it motivates the students to compete eitherit is in academics or sports. The below essay depicts the reasons for the statement.
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In many countries around the world rural people are moving to cities so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There were a time people are started leaving their own land and migrated to the central part of the city side, and this was the trend happened in and around the world, due to which the population in the village has started reducing. We will discuss in detail on this essay about the impact on this movement and with the examples. I am against on this point, and it is a negative development.
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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Recently, a growining issue regarding health problems has taken sharp curve. people are trying to use medicines and tablets which they think as a alternative source for their health problem instead contacting medical professional. This essay will discuss some of the reasons why i completely think its negative developemnt
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People who do not use social media networks* will always fall behind in career development opportunities. To what extent do you feel that this is an accurate and important prediction?

Nowadas by expanding the Internet, individuals are facing many newborn social media. Using these facilities has benefits and drawbacks.
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Some people think that tha government is wasting money on tha art and that this money could be better spend elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Government has a widerange of responsibility in order to create a better life for the people. One of their duties is to regulate state finances based on each sectors. Many sectors in the state need to be arranged precisely, such as economy, infrastructure, education, culture and art development, and so on. However, since the state finances were limited, there should be lists of priority in terms of what sector might need to be funded primarily.
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Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

One of the most discussed issues nowadays is education of new generations. It is undeniable that knowledge become essential part of our life. However, there is not absolute agreement on whether children should attend extra classes after school in order to study hardly.
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The average age for individuals to give birth is increasing. Some people think that it will have negative impact on family and country. What is your opinion about this?

this essay strongly agree that experinceing a pearanthood in lateages has a some negative aspeacts on familes and contry is in some cases its linked to higher number on children born with health condition among old age mothers also been physically fit to provide the nasassary care for them
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With the development of online communication,people will neber be alone and will always be able to new friends. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Somt people claim that Online platforms have revolutionized the way we connect, allowing people to have more friends despite the distance.We can talk with everyone in the whole world and we can find like-minded individuals to be friends.I strongly believe that social has changed the way of chatting.In the forthcoming paragraphs,I shall expound my thoughts in detail.
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