IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 201

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

Nowaday, a lot of museums and historical sites seem attract tourists, rather than locals. This is a problem which greatly impacts the local tourism industry. There are several reasons leading to this and solutions should be adopted to solve this issue.

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Would you live with your parents after getting married? Why or why not?

Getting married can change our lives. We will take responsibility for taking care of the person we love. Many people think especially in Indonesia you should get your own house before you getting married. But unfortunately, many people aren't ready to get their own house. That's way, before married you should be to discuss with your partner for choosing living after married. However, it depends on your needs and how to begin for new life.

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The health benefits of physical exercises are well known. Despite this, many people do not exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this? What could be done to encourage them to exercise regularly?

The significance of physical well-being is substantial. People do variety of procedures to stay healthy. However, working 6 days a week, from 9 to 5 leaves most of the people with little to no time to exercising. Opening more and popularising affordable and comfortable gym centres around the city would solve this problem.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have advantages or more disadvantages?

Ay the present time, many people spend more their time work and they are leaving very little time for leisure activities.

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Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid change. Others however think that change is always good discussion both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays some individuals like better spent their lives as usual they live and avoid change. however others believe that switch is also better. In this essay I will discuss both view's in the upcoming paragraphs.

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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In modern society, communication between individuals is really important. The internet is one tool that helps us to stay in each other even though when we are in distance. However, it also brings some impacts to our social life where it feels like isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. Personally, I agree with the internet which brings us to advantages.

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Some children spent hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a possitive or a negative development?

Nowadays , More young people have got phone and they are spenting more time for smartphones because Phone has got more games and Their parents do not spent for children. if children will use from phone for aducation, it is good but They will play game, it is not good

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Topic: Without capital punishment our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people claim that capital punishment is crucial to people's lives to provide control under violence. In addition they believe if it get rid of, their lives would be more dangerous and rate of violence grow. I completely disagree with this assertion, there are controversal reasons in terms of this punishment's effect on the society and its' inadequate aspects.

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Now it is possible for tourists to travel into any remote locations Identify advantages and disadvantages of this

People have different views regarding the possiblity of making journey by tourists to foreign countries. While many insists that tourism and traveling around the universe offers of benefits, I think the minimal benefits they bring pale in comparison to disadvantegeous of probable habitat distruction maked by stranger visitors.

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Individual actions have little or no effect on climate change .For this reason , worthwhile change can only be made at governmental level.To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Not only the media is presenting evidence of climate change. Here in Hungary we can feel the change. There are longer and longer time periods without rain mostly in summer, but winter as well. Finally, when the rain comes, the quantity of water is enormous. So dry seasons and floods are alternating in Hungary. The winters are so much warmer than in my youth, thus snow is a rare thing nowadays. Our oleanders are outside all the year. They could not have been there in a few years ago, but now they can be left in the garden wintertime. The storms are stronger and stronger every year, the wind speed is increasing too.

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Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In recent number jem, there has been a incensing ne mall bilt, leading of small shops. In my opiniod, this essay change bring both positive Tempoet, though they have and negative, have more negative impact in long term..

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Some people think that an international car-free day is an effective way to reduce air pollution. Others think there are more effective ways to do this. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion

Many people argued that international car-prohibiting days are an efficient method to diminish air pollution. While there might be some reasons to support their existence, I am of the opinion that there are plenty of possible remedies to address the problem.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The debate surrounding to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age of driving is an ongoing process from past so many years. Some people things after 18 one should opt the driving licence while other disagree with the same. In my opinion I agree with the idea and will outline several compelling reasons in this essay.

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Some people think that children who spend alot of time reading children's story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is commonly believed that some individuals think that children who spend alot of time reading children story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. This essay will describe about it. I agree with this statment

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More and more people today are drinking sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for this? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

It is true that having sugar-based drinks is a rising trend nowadays. This can be attributed to various factors, which calls for possible solutions to be adopted.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones

Most of juverniles engage most of the time everyday on using digital phones. This common phenomenon also has both advantages and disadvantage which able to impact on individuals. This essay will discuss the drawback outweight the benefit of this tendency.

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Some people think that international car-free day will help in reducing fuel usage and air pollution. Others believe there is an effective alternative to this. To what extent do you agree with this opinion?

Some people think that international car-free day will help in reducing fuel usage and air pollution. Others believe there is an effective alternative to this. Every peoples can demonstrate their idea without any facts or with some facts. In the 21st century this air pollution is the most presented topic in the world among environment specialist.

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Some people say that television is useful for educated, while other say it is useful only for entertainment?,discuss both views and give your opinion?

Television is one of the Few Inventions that has massively changed the world. Many people say that television is helpful for education, while others believe It is used only for entertainment. I think the device can be weed as a source of knowledge in the upcoming Paragraphs, I will discuss my thoughts about this topic.

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Some people think that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is believed that children should be encouraged to take part in team activities by their parents since it gives opportunity to interact with others even though others think that this might create difficulties for both parents and children because of fixed training schedules.

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Universities and colleges are now offering qualifications through distance learning from the Internet rather than teachers in the classroom. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Online leasons are replaceed to transation teachers in the classroom. However, there are some drawbasks. Personally, I beveile that the benfits of distance learning surpass the drawbcaks of the development.

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