IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 201

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some say that music is as important as other subjects at schools to promote learning in children life. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

There are different opinions regarding the significant of music subject in helping youngers' studies. With some people claiming that music weights the same as the other fields of studies, some believed that music could not enhance childrens' learning as the other subjects do in their life. I personally stand for the former, having a view that music is also importance for children in terms of enhancing their learning. I would talk about the reasons behind that in the following paragraphs.

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Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. What do you think is the reason? Discuss possible solutions and provide examples.

Global life nowadays, is not been easy for anyone, specially when it discuss the topic work and career. This two words could meaning a huge significance to many people. In twenty first century a job and carrer has a great significant specially to women. Feminists movements from tewnty century enteraing in twenty first century gave to women many rights that now they can practice those rights such as vote for a political party, could be divorce and working, of course it depends of the country even so western contries shows a progress access of women rights. Because of this movements the sociaty can feel it even today, many articles has said the women are postponing to have a baby or a family and the work are predominantly the big choice of their lives. They achieve first to have a career instead to have a baby or a family, this both two are in the fine line. Consequently beacause of women's choice men is having a family late. Couple nowadays have to do a truthful conversation...

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In some countries, there is not enough recycling of waste materials(e.g.. paper, glass, and cans). What are the reasons, and what can be done to solve this problem?

Over the decades , society has undergone a significant transition in the realm of recycling. As it plays a crucial role in everyone's life., It has been proven extremly productive for many nations to reduce waste material's through recycling items such as plastic , papers and glass. However, some undeveloped countries are struggling to address the issue of recycling. In my perspective, there exit multiple factors and potential solution that i will explore with pertinent examples and a clear conclusive summary.

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These days many people have their own computers and telephones, so it is quite easy for them to do their job at home. Does working at home have more advantageous or more advantageous?

With the advent of technology, nowadays a lot of folk have phones and laptops at home so They can choose remote job for work while having a remote Job Would accelerate task accomplishment and increase the efficiency rate, there might be some drawbacks including lack of communication with colleagues and also sometimes we get tired.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Selecting a place and location to live is a big decision for many people. In different part of the world, human value for their own accommodation and huge part of them prefer that, they should have their own house rather than renting one. Because, they sense which could save money in interval long term. From my perspective, house ownership is a natural human desire.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Infrastructure development plays a crucial role in a nation's progress and economic growth. I strongly agree with this point of view which government should prioritize invest more budget on railways because they environmentally friendly.

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Some people say that physical education classes are an important part of a child's education. Others believe that it is more important to focus on academics during school time. Discuss both views, and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed topics nowadays is giving a quality education. It is undeniable that education become essential part of our life. But, there is no absolute agreement on whether education should be only academic or physical activities.

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Many students choose to study at colleges and universities that are far away from the places where they grew up. Do benefits of this outweigh the drawbackss?

Nowadays, there is a debate whether students may choose a local colleges and universities or prefer to far away from their birthplaceplace for higher study. However, some students decide to get an education from a college/university which is away from where they were brought up. I agree with the statement because of getting a quality education and expanding my social circle.

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Many companies and Organisation required employees to wear uniform at work what are advantages and disadvantages of wearing a uniform?

wearing the unique formal outfits of each government organisation,

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion You should write at least 250 words.

Protests everywhere - even in sports, People are calling upon the government to ban some sports which are harmful for both humans and environment. But, Some are considering it as an opression of freedom. I will be briefing about these issues in forthcoming paragraphs.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this messege?

In some nations,children usually believe that they are able to get everything if they effort a lot.Following this i will check advantages and disadvantages of this issue. Firstly,Work for children is an opposite point.Because they can achieve anything they want in future.For example,if a child does not work,he should ask his parents for help to get something.While a kid who can earn money will be more success. Furthermore,children will accustom with some problems at work.For instance,he will know that how people behave and what will be their action.Thirdly,the money make children more happy.Namely, when a child get cash himself, it will be pleasant for him.Also,it is a good way to have a great future.As an example,if they save money from age eight to ten, are able to purchase an expensive thing like car or mobile for themselves.In addition,by working they are one step ahead of their peers.Both mat...

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A large emphasis is given to the education in young generation.Government covers all of the free educational activities to what extent do you agree or disagree

Education is the foremost important feature in the country.The government is accountable for the expenses in this field.Nowadays, the main emphasis is given to the younger generation. Proponents of this idea claim that it is essential for the nation's reputation and tourism.

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Communication technology has become so prevalent nowadays. What are the causes of this popularity? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the past few years, the world has witnessed the radical impact of communication technology and the way people interact with one other. This rapid alteration can be explained by numerous factors which feed it in the first place and cause both positive and negative effects which will be discussed in this essay.

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In many countries around the world young people decide to leave their parents’ home once they finish school. They start living on their own or share a home with friends. Some people think it is a positive thing. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, in many nations, teenagers decide to leave their birth place after they complete school and begin to live on their own or in a shared home with colleagues . I agree with the statement because of freedom and autonomy , and develop personal growth and exploration. Firstly , teenagers living on their own can give them freedom and autonomy. This can make them take decisions or risks on their own, and by doing this can improve their skills and gain success in life . Recent studies say that , over 75% of adults make decisions or take risks when leave their parents' home in their teenage . Another reason why I agree is personal growth and exploration. Living life independently can make you think about the future , so a young person who is not dependent on parents or others can grow, make and save money before entering adult age. A recent survey says that around 70% of old people who live a quality life are those who have started growing when they were teen...

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Public health is a very important theme to discuss in our society. Start from ministers and government workers, and end with simple civilians arguing on health question. This essay will try to figure out the best way to increase peoples' strength and take care of them.

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Today in many countries people are living in a throwaway society where things are used for a short time and then throw away. What do you think is the cause and what problems will it lead to ?

In recent times, people have argued that a lifestyle like throwaway society is modern and ordinary without the awareness that it brings several drawbacks. I will show reasons and consequences of throwaway society in this essay.

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Some children find mathematics and philosophy difficult. Some people think these subjects should be optional. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Is it true that optional subjects is a matter of concern in schools in many countries nowadays? As a matter of fact it can be said that having optional subjects in the school curriculum gives the opportunity to choose the interesting subjects which can be studied without any hardship. I firmly agree with this statement due to its flexibility. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on this fact with supporting arguments.

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Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A number of students are faced with new found problems when taking on higher level degree education. Whether it is stress due to knowledge changes, or study-work balance mismanagement, undergraduates need to clearly identify these aspects and take much needed courses of actions in order to achieve better education results and an improved student life.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. While many people go to university for academic study, more people should be encouraged to do vocational training because there is a lack of qualified workers such as electricians and plumbers. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

Many are always chasing towards getting a degree from a reputed university or valuving a piece of paper as an important degree of measuring person's knowledge. This may be due to the societal pressure which most of us facing. Vocational jobs such as plumbing,pottery,gardening etc less relevant nowadays. This may be due to the lack of skilled labour available. I strongly agree on the fact that formal education is important but some cases vocational education seems prevalant.

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Some countries focus on health care and education benefits while other on infrastructure and employment. Which do you think would be more beneficial for the population? Give specific details and examples to support your opinion.

Some people argue that health care and educations is the most crucial think in people life, while others believe that great facilities and occupation more beneficial for population. whereas I totally believe within achieve fit body and good level of education is paramount for people life also it will give big improvement for people in the future. This essay will examine some details reasons and provide example which is relate with this topic.

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