IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 20

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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An increasing number of children are overweight which could result many problems when they grow older both in terms of their health and health care costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

In this contemporary world, it is argued that more and more children have excessive weight. This is achieved by there are lots of food available, especially fast food and sedentary lifestyle. To handle this issue, governments should promote public education and encourage people to move more.

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Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take actions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether individuals are the primary force in containing environmental problems has long been debated. In my opinion, individuals are essential in the solving of certain issues, while they play a minor or even non-existence role in others.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with thos statement?

Today’s swift developing world is foreshadowing inferior purchasing of printed news and books in years to come due to ubiquitous electronical devices people utilize in order to read. I am profoundly in favor for switching from outdated methods of reading to new ones because it will be more convenient in conjunction with the ability keeping many people in the loop way faster.

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#Essays #Task2 In some countries younger people are increasingly losing interest in teaching. Why is this happening? What can be done to improve the situation? Give reasons for your answers and include examples from your own experience.

It is becoming a trend of losing interest in teaching by the young individuals. This essay will explains the root and the key factors to remedy this suituation.

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In some countries, private cars are now banned from certain city centres. What are the advantages of such a system and do you feel that this is something that most cities should adopt?

With the increase in cars on the roads, it becomes increasingly difficult to organize urban order. while some countries banned vehicles from certain city centers, whereas others prefer to continue to offer effective ways for urbanization.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh disadvantages?

the population of the world is increasing rapidly because nowadays people are living longer than past. In many parts of the world, it is commonly argued that adults can cause issues for the governments whereas, other believe that they are benefical for the nation. In my onion, benefits a ageing population outweigh the drawbacks. and in this essay; I will give explanation for my view point

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People today are more concerned with owing material possession than with developing friendships and family relationship. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, while people feel that holding their material possessions is an issue for them to worry about, I, however, believe that the expaindment of both family and friendship is more important to concern.

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in recent years, many people small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or mall to do their shopping. Is this positive or negative development?

In many part of the world, many people are going to the mall for shopping. Meanwhile, it has negative impact for local shops and it has changed the way people shopping. This eassy believe shopping in the mall is more effective. For the following reasons. Is this the most effective ways?

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In a number of countries, some people think that it is necessary to spend large sumes of money on coustructing new raily lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on imprioving exsistiong public transport…… view point Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is always a debatable topic whether it is esstional to spend money on building new rails or upgrading existing public transportation. I believe both sides have valid arguments.

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Many people say that university education should only be offered to young students with the highest marks, while others say they should accept people with varying marks and all ages, even if they did not do well. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In recent times, people tend to travel more often. This is because travel expenditure decreased and the major benefit of this is that people can expand their language skills.

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The garaph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features

The given line graph compares how many shops stopped and started work in one country from 2011 to 2018.

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These days many kids spend a lot of their time playing computer games instead of doing sports. What is the cause of this? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In the Modern world, Many children are spending more time with online games,same time they lack interest in playing sports. here I describe the main cause of this trend along with my opinion.

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Despite a large of number of gym, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining populer in the contemporary world, what problems are associated with this? What the solution can you suggest?

There is widely help perception in many part of the world today that comparing a large of gym with sedentary lifestyle. In this following essay. I am to identify the sorces of this problem as well as some valuable solution to it

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Many people believe that used distance learning program to study at home but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending the college or university do you agree or disagree.

It is debated among the public that individuals who are taking online classes have the positive outcomes, while others are opposed to such an idea, thinking enrol at school in person are better. I strongly agree with students should go to school in terms of developing essential skills and knowledge.

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Humans have made a great technological process in the last hundred years. However, this progress has negative effects on people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over the last century, significant technological advances have been made. Such advancements has sparked a debate about whether this progress has negative effects on people's lives or not. While some claim that those improvements are not harmful, I completely believe that they have harmful impacts on individuals.

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Some people think it is a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it is important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people in work settings would treat their colleagues as their school friends, go out on the weekends and/or in the evenings with them, and ect. While that is a good way to be more social and gain popularity, to then gain trust from other people, some may see it as innapropriate and that it is important to keep a clear line between work life and social life.

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It is responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement. Governments have no obligation to provide this benefit. To what extend to you agree or disagree with these statements?

There is no denying the fact that It is the responsibility of individuals to save and provide for their own retirement

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Your grandparents are planning a family gathering. They want to have a fun weekend somewhere. You know a perfect place to have the event. Write them an email and include the following things: • Tell them about the place you have in mind. • Talk about your experiences at the place. • Describe what the family can do there

How are you? I hope you are doing well. How's grandmaa? Tell her that I am missing her so much. I just came to know about the family gatherning for Dad, that you and grandmaa are planning for next week. I am writing this email to suggest to a perfact place for get together, if you can consider it.

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Being a celebrity– such as a film star or singer – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Being a Famous person nowadays such is film star or Singer have alot of advantages and disadvantages. For my prospective view i think Star Get more benefits otherthen drawbacks. If you can see whose hard word,living standards and the most important is His well known Name. On the other hand Alot of problems they create for children to waste their time To watching movies,laziness,lack of interaction with family.

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Some people think that charity organizations should only offer help to people of their own country. But others believe that these organizations should give aid to people in great need wherever they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals think that charity organisation should support people of their domestic country. However, I strongly argue that the charity should provide financial aid across the world.

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