IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 22

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that no one should be allowed to continue working after the age of 65. However, others say there shouldn’t be a limitation on age, and anyone should be allowed to work regardless of their age. Discuss both views, give your opinion and include relevant examples.

In these days we have a old peole age of 65 and going up but this is our point for to day becuse i

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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? Is it a positive development?

In this modern time, vast amount of countries are focusing their tourist industry. if they have several fields mainly focus that industry. Day by day abroad individuals are being given priority by each country government. This essay crystal clearly depicts why each countries targeting their Tourism while I am going to discuss from my perspective and give relavent examples.

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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that what a person achieve in his life is mainly because of his luck. I completely disagree with this statement because what a person achieves in his life is only because of his hardwork and perseverance, not luck. This essay will provide the reasons for this believe and give examples.

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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this for ordinary people?

Nowadays small businesses are vanishing and being changed by large multinational companies. In this tendency, the impact on people has good sides but also bad sides for them. In this essay I bring some facts which these facts show us advantages and disadvantages of this tendency.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try to hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.Giving this message to them can produce several effects on each child.

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In the last decade, there has been a great increase in global air travel. What do you think are the reasons for this and do you think it is a good thing?

Recently, the willingness of people to use airplanes has been increased. Although transporting with planes has advantages such as fast speed and accesibilty, however, I believe this leads to severe environmental damages, including air pollution and global warming.

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Most high level positions in companies are filled by men eventhough the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50%female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain % of these positions to women. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that most high level postions in companies are held by men. This is despite the fact that workforce in most developed countries are 50 % female. There is a growing centiment among public that certain percentage of these high level management positions should be reserved for women. This essay will consider both sides of the argument to ultimately reach an effective conclusion.

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Some people believe that university students should be free to choose any courses they want to study, while others argue that they should only be allowed to study courses that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion

There are views pertinent the courses options that university student should choose, one said they are better only learn the courses that arguably beneficial for their endeavor, such as technology and science, while other encourage them to freely choose the courses they want to study. I believe both of these options are good depending on the situation and background of the student.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of older people. Do the advantage outweigh the disadvantage?

Contries with a high number of young adults compared to older people doesn't necisseraly mean its a disadvantage to the community. Young adults are known to be the people of the future. Younger adults are more capable and understanding than older people in many ways which make this and advantage.

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In aomw cultures, children are often told that they can achive anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

There are many sociaties in the world, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard accurately. Doing hard work, there are many advantages and disadvantages. I will describe my expecibe in more detail below. On the one hand, there are many advantages, to begin with, a good motivation might change children life and encourage them gradually. Thus help to increase physical activities to get a successful life.such as, sports person,doctor, scientists and so on. Secondly, in our society, such as Bangladesh is my country. There are many children, whom are very capabale to do hard work.By contrast, they have no risk taking abilities. A good motivation speach can grow up their risk abilities.Finally, a failure person thought they are gurb for nation. A supportive motivation could remove stressness. So they started try again and again and never give up. On the other hand, there are many drawbacks, To begin with, it is true that supportive speach boost the capabilit...

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

The ration of the number of older people towads yonger is plummiting. This trend has lots of bad outcomes as it can affect on overall global economy and amount of produced food. First and foremost, economies of modern countries mostly depend on amount of services their peopel can provide with. Yonger generations are more keen on working in productively in their working places as they have more life energy and time to accomplish tasks. As people get older their productivity lessens. As more productivity gets to lower point, more companies spend more money per amount of time to acomplish their working plan. By making each project more expensive to complete, averge salary will be lowered. After lowering average income level the overall economy will degenerate due to fact that people will be able to afford less products, services and various stuffs. Moreover, by increase in mediocre age food production will be the one affected mostly. Even in era of technologies when nearly all jobs are...

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps compare the layout between the current condition and the proposed development plan from Southwest Airport. Generally, the Southwest Airport will be expanded and there will be more facilities available after the development, such as a bag drop section, ATM, sky train, car hire, and new gates.

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Some people think the only purpose of prison is to punish crime. Others think it has other functions. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that crime rate will be diminished by sending criminals to prison while others say that there are other functions to reduce this. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons.

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Nowadays more and more people are using smartphones and computers to communicate, so they are losing the ability to communicate with each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In this modern world, a big part of the population in the world using their smartphones to communicate with friends, family and also, in their job. Likewise, we are not having a real human interaction. In my opinion, this is a true affirmation and in this essay I will axplain why.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days several individuals think that it is ordinary to receive the worst circumstances, for instance crisis of financial or work . However, others consider this view which is to attempt and make it better. This essay will debate both of these situations, and also give my possess opinion.

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Some people do not like changes and prefer to do things they are good at, while other people like taking risks and trying new things. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People are being more different in every aspects Some say that Stable mind and do not try new things are beneficials while others say that taking risks and trying new tasks are good. This essay discusses both View points and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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the plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given illustrations compare the plan of the harbour from the year 2000 to its current state.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

At the present time,anxiety has arises as a most common hurdle encountered by individual in recent time has sparked much debate.In this essay, I will analyze some relevant problem and suggest some solution as well.

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Today children are surrounded by electronic devices such as personal computers, tablet computers, and smart phones, and they learn to use them at a very early age. What are advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

It is an undeniable truth that technology has been a common feature of modern life and accessible in all ages. Even children begin to familiarize with many gadgets such as smartphones, tablets and personal computers. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I shall thoroughly explain both significant advantages and notable disadvantages.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rathe than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Many people suggest that teaching young students a second language is better to be from primary school rather than secondary school. In this essay, I will be mentioning the advantages and the disadvantages of this view.

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