IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 22

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people think that as long as professional sportsmen and sportswomen are good players, their behavior on and off the paying fields is not important. Do you agree or disagree?

There are some people who believe that the bad conduct of sportsmen and sportswomen can be neglected, if they are skillful. This essay will explain that if players have good behavior in their professional or private life, they can increase their worth amongest clubs and motivation.

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Some people think that social networking site have a huge negative impact on both individual and society to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many believe that social networking sites exert a significant detrimental influence on both individuals and society as a whole. I personally disagree with that notion due to several reasons.

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Many employees may work at home with modern technology. Some people claim that it benefits only the workers, but not the employers. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, technologic improvements allow individuals to work remotely. According to many, this development is positive for only employees, yet not for the bosses. I totally disagree with this view on the grounds that working at home decreases office expendatures and as employers also go to work, they benefit the same advantages with workers.

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Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and training are better. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Imprisonment is a more efficacious way of fighting certain types of crimes than education and training. In cases where criminals can pose a critical danger to society such as child molestation or mass shooting, imprisoning them can play a crucial role in deterring their malicious intent and preventing them from harming others. While rehabilitation programs can be effective in reducing recidivism rates, they are not always viable options for those who may suffer from chronic mental illnesses. For example, some research suggests that criminals suffering from impulse control disorder, a type of condition that makes it difficult to control their actions, can impose violence as an automatic response to problems despite taking psychological therapy in prison. Consequently, contrary to the arguments for education and training programs, I believe that incarceration should be the most appropriate course of action given the threats posed by serious crimes.

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The diamgram shows the life cycle of the honey bee.

The diagram shows the honey bee life cycle. Overall this cycle takes around 34 -36 days from egg to adult honey bee. It can be divided into 4 stages which are egg , Nymph , young adult , and adult.

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In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around.?

In most metropolitan cities, it is growing numerous people who are not know their bordering residents and then the feeling of community is lost. The two main factors are lifestyle and busy times. To overcome this address, the first one is the government make the social organization. The second is making a lottery club.

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In many cities, an increasing number of people do not know their neighbors and the sense of community is lost. Discuss the causes and give measures to turn it around.

Most metropolitan city, it is growing numerous people who are not known their bordering resident and then feeling of community is lost. There two main factors are the lifestyle and busy time. To overcome this address are, the first one is the government make social organization. The second is making lottery club.

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Overpopulation is the world's most serious environmental problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In today's fast-paced world, overpopulation is often viewed as a major environmental problem due to the pressure on natural resources and contributes to various form of pollution. I strongly believe that overcrowding impacts our world adversely.

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Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical knowledge but give more practical training throughout their courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement that universities should provide more practical training throughout the student's course of study rather than providing their students with a load of theoretical knowledge.

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Although necessary experimentations play a pivotal role in scientific discovery, fauna must not be threatened. While some people argue that experimentation on animals is deleterious and it should be outlawed,others are of the view that discoveries in scientific fields can only be made by using animals for demonstration. I opine that harming wildlife should not be encouraged just for benefiting the society because it plays an important role in our ecosystem.

Although this topic is widely debated, people must not ignore it as frivolous.Experimentations performed on wildlife may help in augmenting the scientific discoveries,but will jeopardize animal wildlife. For instance, according to reports published in China, many species of bear got diagnosed with cancer after performing multiple experiments only to trace back their ancestral history. Therefore, such actions alleviate endangering species which as a result in the extinction. Moreover, such actions must be prohibited by regulating authorities and the government should take strict actions against this act.

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In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, university or even after finding a job. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowdays there are a lot of people that had takenoption of living with their parents, but what are the causes ans risk about this? there are differents posibilties than help that people, however there are other disadvantages if a person don't take control about their selflife.

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Some people think that parents should be punished if their children commit crimes because they are responsible for their children's actions To what extent do you agree or disagree

There are differing opinions regarding whether parents should take consequences if their children engage in criminal activities as they have to be accountable. From my perspective, this idea is profoundly true in terms of parents’ parenting and parents moral hazard.

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Some people believe that modern games do not develop skill in children.However traditional games developed skills in childhood.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people opine that in the development of skills and coginitive ability during childhood is beacuse of traditional games rather than modern games. I , partially agree with this as balance is the the key to everything.

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In some countries, physical education is a compulsory subject for the leaving certificate. Some people suggest that this practice be abolished. Which view do you agree with? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.

Even when physical education has been included in schools’ curriculum for decades, some people nowadays opt for the abolishment of it. I strongly disagree with this view and will explain my reasons in this essay.

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Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind , such as reading and doing word puzzles . Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time . Dicuss two views and give your opinion .

In the modern world, there are some pupils who consider that a variety of activity spend in their free time such as listening to music, watching films and so on. While some people claim that sleeping is much more comfortable than activities. from my perspective, I believe that both views are necessary moments in their lifestyle. This essay will demonstrate and provide examples to illustrate.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam’’ How true do you think this statement is? What are measures can the government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Several people think that the rapid increment of car owners contributes to the stagnancy of traffic in every part of the world. The statement requires supporting data to ensure how the necessary measures can be taken to eliminate this issue. I totally agree with the stated point that the uncontrolled amount of cars triggers a stagnant traffics in big cities. This essay will discuss what actions can be chosen by the authorities to reduce the effect of abundant cars operating in the cities.

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Some people believe school children should be given multiple vacations while others think they should get one long vacation. Discuss advantages for both and give your opinion.

There is an ongoing debate in the society regarding the way the schoo holidays are given to children. Some opine holidays should be given at different times of years while others think one single long holiday should be provided. I agree with the former statement multiple vaccations should be given to students as it helps them rejuvenate after every holiday period which later helps with heir productivity and effiiency to study.

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The working week should be shorter and workers should have a longer weekend. do you agree or disagree.

There is currently a contentious argument over whether working weekdays should be shorter, while other think workers should be given longer weekend. In my opinion, I agree that workers should be given longer weekend to improve work-life balance atmosphere and also improved their mental health.

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Some people think residents should keep their streets clean and tidy while others say it is government’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Keeping a street clean often leads to pointing fingers of who should be held responsible. Others believed that it should be the residents' responsibility while the latter viewed that it should be the governments'. I am of the opinion that cleaning public streets should be a collaborative effort on both parties. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and give my opinion afterwards.

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Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

First of all this statement is not completely true. not everyone should have a full-time education, at least it's not required .

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