IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 21

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams.

As compared with last three decates, it is true that their is an quick increase in car owners causing traffic jams in urban areas. There are various reason which perfectly stands withb this approch and varity of measures that government should implement to overcome from this situation.

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Today food often travels thousands of miles from the farm to the consumer. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only ate food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this idea outweigh the disadvantages?

Importing and exporting foods globally is trending in today's era. Many people believe that men and women should eat locally grown food for better financial development, and the atmosphere. This essay will explain that consuming fresh food has more drawbacks because it ensures individual's health, and shield different germs to transfer from one place to another.

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Nowadays, learning have gained in popularity but some people argue that courses can never be as good as those taken by attending a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Learning by attending is preferred by many people, others, however, like to pursue it virtually. While both ways has prons and cons, I personally deem both options acceptable with a slight inclination to the in-person side.

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SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT ART (EX. PAINTING, MUSIC, POETRY, ETC.) CAN BE MADE BY EVERYONE WHEREAS OTHERS BELIEVE THAT IT CAN ONLY BE MADE BY THOSE WITH SPECIAL ABILITY. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

These days , people think the art is easy for all but its not like that so , some people think the art is very eassy , while others believe that is not like he think.This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion.

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In major cities around the world, traffic congestion has become a serious problem. How can this problem be tackled? Give reasons and examples from your own experience.

In many huge cities and urban area in all over the world traffic crowded has become a serious obstacles that it is a bad effect on wheather ,environment and polloution,in my opinion pepole have to use public transportation,in this essay we will look into it .

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Today more and more people want things instantly (e.g; goods, services, news) why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people desire to achieve their needs as soon as possible. This phenomenon which is happening in the present ever-changing world, and I think is completely positive one, could have many reasons that some of them will be discussed below.

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More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplace. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families. But, others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Working at home has risen many debates. Some people believe that staying at home could be beneficial for individuals and their families; However, others think that being an employee from home could increase stress level at home. I heartfully believe that working out of home could be more effective than managing a job from home, and the reasons will be discussed below.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing, Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argue that competition at workplace, at school, and in daily life is beneficial, while others advocate for increased cooperation over competition among each other.In my opinion, I tend to believe that cooperation is more crucial than competition since it will enhance the relationship and trust among the participants.

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In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

These days people loves to stay alone so that they can hide from the life it is obviously something worth it to stay alone for a while.

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The following diagram is a flowchart of the process of recycling of the plastic bottles for production of new products

The following diagram is a flowchart of the process of recycling of the plastic bottles for production of new products. It starts with the collection of used plastic bottles from people which are then taken to a recycling facility. In the recycling center, the bottles are separated according to their type and the quality of the material. The bottles are then compressed into large blocks in order to ease the handling of the bottles after the sorting process. These blocks are then crushed into small sizes and the resultant sizes are washed to eliminate any impurities. The clean plastic fragments are then melt down and formed into small pellets. These pellets are used as the input in the manufacture of different products from plastics. The pellets are then heated once more and then pressed into various shapes depending on the final product that is required. Last, these new products, for example bottles, clothes or packaging material, are used by the consumers. This process helps to min...

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might be the case? Do you think this is a positve or negative situation?

New days,having a home instead of renting, it is a necessary in this statement . It is a positive way to reaching to stable . This good sign for society. In my opinion, paying home it is a positive situation. In this essay we talk about what the reason to having your home and what the result in the nation and why the renting it is a negative thing.

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Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibilities for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days the world have a many of poor So, some people think the goverment responsibilty on them While, others believe that they should take a responsibilty on themslef . This essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal opinion .

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107.Some say that music is a good way of bringing people from different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Some people believe that music can assemble individuals from diverse generations and nationality successfully. This essay completely concur with this perspective, as music has a strong to negotiate linguistic, cultural and time barriers, as well as, to enrich mutual experiences of humanity.

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Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think that cheap air flights should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Usage of planes are said to be one of the best ways to travel overseas in terms of saving time.I strongly believe cheap air flights should be banned as it not only promotes air pollution but may lead to even higher problems such as smuggling and theft.

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Compared to the past, people can now work in places that are far from their homes because of modern means of transportation. How has this affected the lives of workers? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having modern transportation. Support your answer with specific reasons and example.

Nowadays, the advancement of technology has covered all part of the globe, providing a better infrastracture and transportation systems. There are several advantages of modern transportation, as well as potentially disadvantages of this matters that affected the lifestyle of people who is working.

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What experiences have shaped who you are, how you invest in others, and what kind of leader you want to become?

Looking at my dad building his own business and then failing has encouraged me to pursue entrepreneurship. When I stand in my shoes, building on my own business for 4 years, I realize that business is not only about passion. Passion is important, but what is more meaningful is grit and discipline. As an entrepreneur, I often lack of reference and do mistakes, but from mistakes, I learn a lot and keep trying and looking for the right mentors and networks.

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IIn some countries, more and more people are hiring a personal fitness trainer, rather than playing sport or doing exercise classes. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

In particular domains, instead of attending fitness groups or playing particular sports, an increasing number of individuals are choosing to exercise with an expert. From my perspective, this is a positive trend on the grounds that excercising with the help of trainer allows people to train self-focused programs and continuity.

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Task 2 comment finding the history of building where you leave

Please advise how to use the app to improve Coherence and Cohesion, and Task achievement?I did try to correct;The linking words: to have more than 7 worldsThe world repetition: less than 3 or fewerGrammar mistakes: almost zero mistakes- I think cannot it be expected to be zero with target of bank 7? The other 2 criterias which are Task Achievement, and Coherence & Cohesion I not sure how to improve about it. Likely, does the app not provide the recommendation to this as the other 3 criterias listed above? I am looking forward to improve to bank score 7, so is this app "" writing 9" suitable for this purpose?

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You recently purchased a fitness program online which did not help you lose any weight. Write an email to the fitness instructor in about 150-200 words. Your email should include the following things: • Mention when and where you bought this course • Describe why you were disappointed • Urge the instructor to remedy the situation

The purpose of my writing today is to inform you about the fitness membership which I purchased from the website, was not any help to me.

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The most effective way to solve the current traffic and pollution problem in cities is to encourage people to move from suburbs and countryside into the city centre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Urbanization is the best variant to solving live traffic updates and environmental contamination troubles. But based on my personal knowledge, I strongly disagree. Moreover, I believe that urbanization will worsen these issues. In this essay, I'll first discuss why urbanization is not a solution and when, and then I recommend alternative solutions that do not involve moving rural people to the city centers.

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