IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 21

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living and working in a foreign

Frist of all, there is no doubt that living or working in a foreign country is one of all of young people’s dreams , to sure up this point, you can easy notice their behaviors, education, and the respecting to whom working abroad or educated there. But do working or living abroad really deserve?. There are two faces for foreign country.

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Some think the current generation should take steps to protect the environment for the next generation.to what extend do you agree or dis agree.

In the present time, our environment has been alarmingly polluted. It is common believed that people should take action to prevent the environment from being damaged for the next generation. I firmly agree with this statemen because our daily activities cause environmental contamination and we should tackle the problems immediately.

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Some peoplebelieve that the difference between the lowest paid jobs and tho highest paid jobs should be reduced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

there is no denying the fact that employee should be paid for their job, while it is a commonly held belief that should decrease the gap in payment for workforce, there is also an argument opposes it.

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be published in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The information about politicians' family members should not be distributed in newspapers. This essay agrees with this argument because it creates safety threats to politicians' family members and influences the confidentiality of personal life.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People can be split in two gropus. Some tend to have a job in the same place all their life, others prefer to change often.

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With the latest technological advancements, dating is now possible online. Would you recommend online dating for your single friends? What are the advantages and disadvantages of online dating? Site some examples to support your answer.

The technologies rise up in a decades where now a people is familiar about the online dating. The media such as Tinder, Hinge dating, Bumble and so many to used for the dating purpose. Let's discuss the demerit and merits.

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All children should study a foreign language in school starting in the earliest grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studying a foreign language generally is considered to be one of the most mind-lightining practices that an individual may experience. In the modern world, being familiar with a foreign language opens the doors for better social, professional, and personal lives.

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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

Many people leave their on homes to work abroad and some of them takes their families with them. Do you think the benefits of it outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development? In this essay i will discuss the both point of view and compare them.

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Write an essay on the following topic. 4 two different future forms 5 two more linking expressions In the future, the main reason for going to the shopping mall will be for entertainment, not to shop. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

These days people go to mall for shopping but in the future, it may shopping mall target is going to be for hobby and leisure and be very similar to downtown. Although some people believe that this is not going to be happen more and more in the future. Buy from my point of view it is going to be happen in the future.

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Employment should give their staff at least a 4-week holiday a year to make employees better at their jobs. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

No doubt, we need holidays in our lives, we are not aware of why, or we cannot define reasons, but we just respond to our bodies' needs.

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some people argue that spending a lot on celebrations, such as weddings or birthdays, is a waste of money. Others think it is important for people and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

celebrations make lots of valuable memories for future despite of that it can cost high prices which hard for effort due to some people discuss about spending excessively is just a waste of money.however , other society think it is necessary for the society.I believe that sort of tho seevents memorable circumstances.

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Some people argue that spending a lot on celebrations, such as weddings it or birthdays, is a waste of money. Others think it is important for people and society. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

celebrations are make lots of valuable memories for the people despite of that it can cost high prices which hard for efforting due to some people discuss about spending excessively is just waste of money.however,rest of the people think it is necessary for the society.I believe that sort of this celebrations memorable circumstances.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some people believe that non-academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery, should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.

At present,the pressure on youth rapidly increasing to successful in academic life. Because, some people argue that elective subjects like physical education and cookery, should not be included in the school syllabus so children are able to focus on academic subjects.This essay agrees with this statement because pupils have sufficient time to work on academic subjects and their motivation for studies will be increased.

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In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In this era of rising prices for treatment, a significant number of individuals content of paying more in private sector to get quick review and receive treatment rather than public sector. It is curcial to consider wealth people will able to afford but middle class people will not be afford. In my perspective, i ordently appose this assertion and i will elucidate my position in ensuring paragraphs culminating in a well founded conclusion.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion

According to some people going to university or college after school is the best way to have a successful career. However, others opine that getting a job is the better option. In this eassy, I will discuss both views and give my opinion.

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Some people think exposure to modern technology at an earlier age is good for children, while others claim that it is harmful to their development. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

It is often argued that few individuals believe that exposure to the latest inventions is beneficial for children at an early age while others consider that it is unhealthy for their maturation.As far as I m concerned, I strongly agree with the notion that modern technology is detrimental to the growth of children .

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In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

public finded health care system its amajot health care system that divided in all people who is used to reach the service during thier needed specially when they are sick or seek hepl for other service that mean the people how seek for this kind of service in need for hepl so in my opinion the public health service should be affordable and equiel foe all special that group of pople in need ,

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Many governments spend too much money on weapons and military equipment. It would be better for the government to use the money spent on the military to improve its citizens' quality of life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

everyone knows how important it is to have strong military weapons these days, the need for military equipment is as much as food is needed, but balance would be

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Social media has become a very effective method of communication. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on the individual and society. Do the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?

social media has crucial effect to communicate for people, but at the same time, some people worry about its influence for the person and society. In my opinion, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages about this issue. Although there are some good impact, using social media to communicate is risky for some individuals, especially children.

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Details of politicians’ private lives should not be printed in newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many say that the personal lives of politicians should not be released in media. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement, because making private details public would reveal the truth or maybe even crimes made by political leaders that we are not aware about. Revealing their secrets will also intimidate other politicians to not to commit crimes because of the fear of being exposed to the public.

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