IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 24

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kid of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many countries are facing a major health concern becasue of their people's fast food consumption. This has striked a debate among groups who believe authorities should increase the tax brackets for these food items and others who think this is totally unnecessary. I strongly believe this is an essential step government should take to support their people.

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Many children have become habitual about excessively using mobile applications day and night. Why do you think this is so? What parents can do to avoid this situation declining further?

there is now daout these days phone applications become populier and with children in partuculir. in this essay, i will set up what i agree and disagree in terms of this trend.

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Many parents these days choose to send their children studying abroad. What are the causes? Is it a positive or negative development?

In today's globalised world, many parents are sending their children to abroad for higher studies. There are several reasons behind this trend such as high-quality of education and broaden career apportunities. While I acknowledge that adjusting in a new country might difficult due to culture and language bareers, I believe it has several benefits that can help individual to grow professionally and personally. Therefore, in my opinion, it is a positive development.

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Some people think that older school children should learn a wide range of subjects and develop knowledge. But other people think that they should only learn a small number of subjects in detail. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that learning many subjects in school can be useful. While it is commonly believed that studying in detales is better than general teaching, others insist that learners study in all area have more information; thus, the debate continues. Although students learn a small number of subjects are less stress, I believe that development starts from learning a wide range of subjects; this is because children can chooses which subject is good for them, and it also we must give them an information that will help them in the future.

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Some people say that all popular TV entertainment programmes should aim to educate viewers about important social issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Some people say that every famous TV amusement programmes should focus to teach audience about essensial social problems. This essay totally disagrees with this statement. I strongly believe that in the world has speacial programmes to announce the problems connected with social to audience and teach them how to solve these problems.

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Some people believe that young people bring more profits to a company. Others says that older people actually bring more profit. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that making profit is the main goal for companies. While it is a commonly held belief that young people bring more profits, there is also an argument that elderly people actually bring more profit. This essay will discuss this topic both point of view and express my opinoin.

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Many people join the distance-learning programs (study, learning material, post, Tv, Internet) and study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits as attending college or university does. DO you agree or disagree?

The question of distance learning or online programs has taken on a new significance since COVID. Let me describe the positive and negative impacts of that type of study. On the one hand, students can apply to a lot of programs without geographical limitations. This argument is really important for people who cannot afford to live abroad. Secondly, these students can choose several programs at the same time and mix them with the main program. Finally, I think it's an excellent opportunity for small and poor countries, as they lack highly qualified universities.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think that these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

In my part of the world, crime novel and television crime drama have become increasingly popular forms of entertainment. This rise in popularity can be see across all age group and social back ground, suggesting a white spread appeal. This essay will discuss the reason for this trend and present my opinion on crime related media.

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Despite the benefits for health, fewer people today than ever before exercise by walking. Why is this? What can be done to encourage more walking?

Nowadays, the advantages of walking to maintain health and physical feet have been proven. A number of people who choose to exercise by walking are significantly decreased. There are many causes that lead to this phenomenon. In this essay, I will outline some possible reasons and the ways people can be encouraged to walk more.

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Studies suggest that the rise in the consumption of junk foods is the major cause of obesity. Some people argue that this problem can be tackled to a great extent by increasing the prices of these food items. Do you agree or disagree.

Scientists proved that consuming junk food is the main cause of obesity. Society argues that this problem can be prevented by making theese food items more expensive. In my opinion i the key of reducing obesity, that is caused my junk food, is to increase junk food price, however, another important factor is reucing the accessibility to theese junk foods.

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Some people believe that capital punishment should not be used. Others, however, argue that it should be allowed for the most serious crimes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Capital punishment is always a warm topic in todays world. Some say that capital punishment is violating the human rights, while the others is insisted that capital punishment should be allowed for the serious crimes.

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As the country develops, does the benefit of car popularization to individuals outweigh the harm to the environment?

The proliferation of private vehicles in developing nations has sparked debates over whether individual benefits outweigh ecological costs. While automobiles undoubtedly enhance mobility and convenience, their environmental repercussions necessitate urgent mitigation measures.

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Some people believe that the advent of economical air travel has been very beneficial by making international travel more accessible, while others argue that it has had a very negative impact. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Although many individuals think that cheap airplane tickets are detrimental, others concur that making travel abroad more accessible has many upsides. I completely believe that making overseas travel easier is beneficial.

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some people believe that in order to reduce the rising obesity among children the school administration should make it necessary for every child to participate in sports and other outdoor activities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that do sports and physical activities should be an obligation in schools to reduce the obesity rates for children. While I believe there are some benefits and disadvantages on this issue, I agree with the statement.

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lacke of fresh water is becoming a global issue if increasing importance what measures could be taken to overcome these problems

So water is a main source and a living need for our life, It has to get a real place in our lifestyle. -Firstly we have to notice that-But now in this topic, we see that some kind people give no value to water.The lacke of fresh water is not a good way for our future.Moreover there are some countries,villages that cannot even afford for a cup of water this is called being ruthless or impolite.

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Some people think watching television is bad for children in every way other belive it is good for devolping children as they grow up discuss both views and give your own opinion

the children should have set time to watch the television. The question is, Some people believe watching television is not good for the children, however, the others believe is good for them. In my opinion, I believe the children should have spicific time in a day or a week to watch the movies or catoons. In this essay, we are going to discuss both views and give my opinio.

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Some people believe that what children watch on television influence behavior other say that amount of time they spend on television influence thie behavior

Some are think that what kids consume from TV it effect on their habits other accept that how much quantity of time they spend on TV influence thie conduct in my opinion, time vast on watching screen is more harmful for child

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Market approach as a part from the marketing strategy in recent years, by offering the fresh solution from the product that closest with the buyer needed. The advertising strategy that introduced the newest improvement can attract the customer interest, however this technique are have two side impacts if the management production are lack.

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Television dominates the free time for too many people It can make people lazy and prevent them from socializing with others Do you agree or disagree Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Nowdays, television is in everyone houses,i think we got used to watch tv every day since we were childrens. but in some people case it become an ediction , they spend almost all of there time in the couch whatching the tv , away from reality , making there social life nearly disappearing ,which i don't agree with.

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Some people believe that museums are mainly a source of entertainment, while others think they are primarily educational. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A museum is a place where people visit to gain education accompanied by entertainment. Museums contain a variety of articles , some are historic and others are antique. Different folks have different views regarding it, many think that it is only a source of amusement and it has no educational value. Bodies come and go; they see different items decorated in glass windows, and enjoy. But others say it has a role in providing intelligence regarding many unknown facts. Both views may be correct, but in my opinion, knowledge is a more obvious thing that we gain by visiting a museum.

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