IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 24

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

In these time, becoming increasingly free and paid museums. I reckon, it is more useful I mean benefits for government. It is too much advantage to community's pocket. For example when people go to the museums and all staff request few cash for access to museum. So, that situation more beneficial for community.

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The claim that animals have “rights” has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? Should zoos be banned? Do you agree or disagree?

All animals are the living creatures and they have emotions like a human beings . Being a living thing they have right to live in their homes called jungle and no individual has privilege to kept them in the cages . I agree that zoos should be banned for the welfare of animals.

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Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

there is a school of thought that famous people can attract public attention to problema, while others opine that their involvement may undermine the gravity of these issue. This essay will shed light on both viewpoints.

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People aim to achieve a balance between their work and lives, but few people achieve it. What are the causes of this problem? How to overcome it?

In recent years everyone try to find and work very well paid job with minimum working hours, which is almost impossible. People try to reach a balance between their work and social lifestyle, but only few of them are able to manage work and social life. In this essay I will argue some major causes of this problem and possible solution.

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Studies suggest that many teenagers these days prefer socialising online to meeting one another in person. Why do you think this is the case? What measures could be taken to encourage teenagers to spend more time meeting one another in person? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

It becomes a common phenomenon that lots of teenagers choose to socialize online rather than having face-to-face meeting according to many research. The reasons behind this social issue could be included in some facets and several measures could be taken.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there is an ongoing issue regarding the period when children learn a foreign language. Some people argue that learning another language when the children are young has adverse affects on the children. On the other hand, some assert that learning a foreign language is good to kids.

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The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

Many people believe English will be the only as their primary language due to tourism effect. Having only one language to be spoken will impact the connection and development of other countries globally, however it might also affect countries’ identity as their language also represent their culture. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of this notion.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree what other measures do you think might be effective

As private cars are becoming more and more pervasive in our society, the relative problems such as traffic jam and environmental pollution have drawn extensive attention of public. Some people alleged that the best method to address these issues is to elevate the price of petrol, and they have raised some evidence to support this opinion. But in my estimation, I don't agree with this view and I believe there are plenty of measures could be implemented to address these issues more effectively.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

it is argued that eviromanental is significat issue, otheres say it is resied becasue of some species of trees and animals die out. i believe that while eviormanetal problams are accured due to use of fosil fule rathe than disapperaing of trees and wild animals.

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Many parents today pay for private tutors to teach their children after school hours. Do you think this is a positive or negative development？

It is clear that children suffer study pressure in these days. A large number of parents employ personal tutors for their sons and daughters during evening and weekend classes to Improve their kid's academic performance However, I think this is a negative development because it affects offspring's emotional growth along with parents have to spend an extra money. A further explanation will be presented in this essay.

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Many elderly people no longer looked after by their families but there are put in care home or nursing home. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Nowadays edged people are taking care by nurses in nursing home instead of their family. Although there are number of drawbacks involved in, the benefits accruing to elder people are by no means negligible.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

In contemporary times, technological advancements have enabled many adults to work from home, while an increasing number of children are also receiving their education remotely. This shift towards remote work and study offers both advantages and disadvantages, and in this essay, I will argue that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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many elderly people are no long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

One of the most feared topics to think of is aging because it cannot be taken over, for that reason, many elder people end in nursing homes. Within these care homes, some elderly individuals benefit from expert care and medical services, while others confront emotional challenges and detachment from families. This duality forms a central theme for the discussion.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history oft h e house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In the contemporary society there are increasing concerns or interests regarding exploring the history of building where the individuals live in. This essay will illustrates the factors and the roots of such situation.

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Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that congestion. While it is a commonly held belief that crowded, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider privately owned vehicles because privately owned vehicles are crucial in any country but they can solve the problem of congestion in cities such do traffic management and In my opinion the

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Some people thinks that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree.

With the rising rates of crime in today's contemporary era, people have diverse opinion over handling accused and guilty person of a particular crime. Proponents believe that, prisoners are not safe for the community if they come outside the prison. Hence they should remain locked in prision. However, advocates for human rights and humanity thinks that they should get a second chance depending on the seriousness of the crime. This essay will discuss both viewpoints.

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Parents and teachers make many rules for children to increase good behaviour and protect them from danger. However, children wood benefit from fever rules and greater freedom. To what extent do. You agree or disagree?

The issue of whether parents ought to implement a lot of regulations for their kids has prompted considerable debate. While many advocates for this, because it enables the children to pick up good characters and keep them away from societal pit holes, which I completely agree with. Others contend against it. Analyzing these facts will give a comprehensive overview of the subject matter.

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Nowadays, a lot of offices employ open-space designs instead of separate rooms for work. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this matter?

It is known that bussines life can be boring sometimes that's why some boss try to make work place like normal life. They make affices employes open-space, it is has some advantage and dis advantake. I will going to expline it in this essay.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations

Whilst some people believe in accepting a difficult condition of life, others believe that every person deserves a hope for a better life condition. In my opinion. Everyone has a choice and certain reasons like the unsatisfactory job or shortage of money cannot be a serious problem.

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What are the advantages and disadvantages for children of watching televizion?

There is view that watching televizion can provide children with entertainment. While this if they addicted to watching television,they would be spend less time on physical skills and should artificial light from the television negatively affects their sleep, I believe the benefits - some shows will help kids how to think creatively and television is educational.

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