IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 24

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to slove them?

so for the people that prefer to live their whole lives in the same area sometimes it's not their choice to stay in the same place forever maybe they have to stay because they have to take care of their families or their work and have them to stay at the same place or they have some fears of changing their whole lifestyle and afraid of the changes

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Some people are happy to spend their whole life in the same area, others prefer to live in many different places in thair life time? discuss both sides of view and give your opinion

so for the pepole that prefer to live thier whole lives in the same area some times its not thier choice to saty at the same place forever maybe they have to stay because they have to take care of thier familys or thier work have them to stay at the same place or they have some fears of changeing thier whole life style and afried of the chagnes

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Reporting of crimes and other kinds of violent news on television and in newspapers can have adverse consquences. This kind of information should be restricted from being shown in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? You should write at least 250 words.

Television and newspapers play a vital role in creating mass awareness whether it be violent or not. I strongly agree that such criminal activities going on around the world should be exposed to all so that we can know that they exist and become wise beforehand.

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governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is said that governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. I strongly disagree with this statements because of the societal need to all infrastructure.

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The world has seen an enormous increase in flights for leisure,business and commercial purpose around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights? Do you think flight should be texted more?

Nowadays Flights for holidays, business and commercial purpose around the world has increased. those have many positive and negative impact in several aspects in the world.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication hurts young people's reading and writing skills. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a view that users of computers and mobile phones for communication become a danger to young people's abilities such as writing and reading skills. I completely agree with this proposal as it reduces literacy skills and declines reading time.

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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that students study in university in their city, someone view is that get knowledge abroad more beneficial. It is undeniable that study has become an essential part of our life. However there is no absolute agreement as some people find learning overseas beneficial, while others consider everything associated with foreign states negatively. Surely, there are both pros and cons to schooling in another city but I believe advantages outweight disadvantages.

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Ordinary people try to copy famous people either regarding magazines or watching TV. Why do they do this? Do you think it’s a good idea to copy this people?

Ordinary individuals tend to mimic celebrities' and influencers' lifestyles these days. There are plenty of rational explainations to this behaviour. This essay will examine the reasons why people do this and my opinion on this issue.

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some people think that zoos are crual and should be clouse down. others belive that zoos are useful in different ways.discuss both views and give your opinion?

minority belive zoos are rude and that has to be close down. majority thiks zoos are very important. i agree with this statmen. i mention it because, some zoos do not treat animals better as well as small zoos have high capasity of animals which damage their freedom a but soam zoos protect endangerd animals as well as the students can very easily research them and we can see animals from other contries in one place.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

With the developement of technology, smartphones bring a huge usage area on our lives. While parents use smartphones often, children aslo influence them. Some parents see handys as a good way to keep their children calm, which is a huge mistake. Nowadays many of the children spent their hours with smartphones. There are major negative consequences of vastly usage of handys, which is unsocial kids and lack of quality knowledges.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Children noday. spend too much time on their electric equipment. As far as I am concern, there are several resons causing contributing to this issue and it have has a negative effect on their development.

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Some people say that it is important to dress well, according to the latest fashion & trends. Whilst some believe that it is a person’s choice as per their comfort and ease. Do you agree or disagree give your opinion.

Well,Nowadays most of individuals presume that it is necessary to dress well according to fashion while other believe that we should dress up according to our choice and comfort.I do accord with the idea that comfort dresses wear better rather than fashionable due to some causes which will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs.

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Working is an It is certainly an essential things in our lives. true that kids can achieve the best if they work hard. However, not all the effects of this innovation have been positive, although there are surely some advantages.

Working is an It is certainly an essential thing in our lives. true that kids can achieve the best if they work hard. However, not all the effects of this innovation have been positive, although there are surely some advantages.

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The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime Do you agree or disagree?

Technology is a boon for the society to alleviate the crime in these days compared to past decades.I am partially agree with this notion.Arguments to crutch my notion will be discussed in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

While it is widely debated that all researches on animals is cruel and should be outlawed, others argue that without them there would not be any scientific discovery in this world. Both point of view towards justification of experimentation on animals and suggestions on alternative means will be further discussed in this essay.

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ordinary people copy famous people whom they see on TV and magazines. Do you think it is a positive development?

The middle class people are trying to become esteemed personalities by copy their styles either from televisions or magazines. This has been an issue of debate. In my view, this is a negative development.

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In recent years, there has been a considerable rise in crimes committed by the young in cities. What has caused this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, significantly increased crimes by the youth generation in town, which is the most serious

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantanges outweigh the disadvamtages?

Generally, everyone around us in the modern world uses social media to touch others or to get info from them which has so many advantages and disadvantages . I have a complex view about this which I will write all of them in my essay. And how can we turn to beneficial in our daily life.

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The proportion of income adults and children spent on 4 common items in the UK in 1998.

The table compares spending money for British adults and children in 4 common items,more specifically, food, electronic equipment,music and videos in 1998.

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Professional sports person are often idolized by the youth. Some people think that they, therefore, have a responsibility to be role models at all times for children. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days professional sports person are often affected by the youth. Some folks think that they, Nevertheless, have a responsibility to be role models at all times for children. The question is, Do professional players have to be idolized by teenagers? In this essay, I am going to explain everything about players and feelings for the fans.

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