IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 17

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people feel it is a waste of money to try to save endangered animal species, for example the tiger or blue whale. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is understandable that some people do not like the idea of spending money on disappearing animal species, but those people need to understand that the animals preserve ecological balance, environmental diversity, a rich natural world, and with that money they also ensure the continuity of biological studies. Whilst there are many reasons to justify such a viewpoint, I do not entirely agree with it.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets should be responsible for reducing the amount of packaging of goods, while others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The issue of reducing the packaging of goods has generated considerable debate. Some individuals strongly believe that manufacturers and supermarkets should be take action to reduce, while others argue that customers should reduce purchasing product with a lot of packaging. this essay will discuss both perspectives and critically examine the arguements for and against each view. It will then conclude wuth my own opinion on matter, based on the analysis presented.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, on of the hotest debate in bussines context is either competition or colaboration is the most benifitial approach to achieve success. while competing motivates individual to keep up their capabilities and enhance their proficiency level, I strongly assume cooperation supports not only embracing acompalishments but also high level of mental health.

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The number of people who are at the risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. What are the reasons for growth in the overweight people in the society. How can this problem be solved.

Nowadays the society is very diversified, either people may be starving themselves to get an attractive body, but on the other hand the number of being overweight is also increasing, and leading to the increase of the number of people who are at risk of serious health problems.

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Some people think the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, carbon emissions have been increasing at an unprecedented pace, causing severe environmental problems. Some people believe that raising fuel prices is one of the effective measures to mitigate these issues. While such an initiative reduces air pollution to some extent, I strongly disagree with this perspective, since alternative strategies are more sustainable and effective.

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The news media have too much influence on peoples lives today and this is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

THERE IS NO DENYING THE FACT THAT, NOWADAYS, SOCIAL MEDIA HAS A SIGNIFICANT ROLE IN OUR LIVES ,AND THIS CAN BE NEGATIVE AND POSITIVE AT THE SAME TIME. IN THIS ESSAY, I TEND TO DISCUSS THE PROS AND THE CONS MOREOVER, I WILL EXPRESS MY OPINION.

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Some people believe that governments should spend money on building more public libraries, while others think this is a waste of money because people can access information online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Investments made on various public space is often a debatable topic amongst different countries. Public libraries is one such amenities that needs to build more by the government is often argued by few individuals. On the other hand , some people are against this idea as in their view it is not profitable, due to the availability of online resources. This essay will discuss both the views and argue why construction of public library is not a necessity.

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Some people think that young people are suitable for learning foreign languages. Some people think adults are more suitable. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Some professionals advocates that Learning new languge which is appropiated for younger ages while others argue that older people might be more affective. It can be seen that young educators who learning new language can familiar with pronuciation comparing to older generation. On the other hand, adult learners will more effective in grammartical issue than young people. In my piont of veiw, I absolutely agree with firt persepectives which kids might more suitable for learning new languges.

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Some young people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. What problems are caused by this issue? What can be done to solve the situation?

Our Z generations have to leave the small city and the old people to move to the big city. The problem that happened because of this issue is, the city is not moving forward economically. The solution is that the government should support the younger people's ideas.

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Some People think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate school. Others, however , believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Number of people believe that schools should be based on the gender of young people. Others argue that make them together can be better. In my opinion, mixed schools have more advantages than single-sex schools, that can help in developing the understanding between genders, which contripute to grow their brain and openence.

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Many things that used to be done in the home by hand are now being done by machines. Does this development bring more advantages or disadvantages?

Due to the technological development, people are now equipped with modern appliances. It is often asserted that many household chores that used to be done by hand are now performed by machines. While this new development brings several benefits, such as greater convenience and saves time, it also poses a few drawbacks that cannot be overlooked.

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nowadeys many people complain that they have dificulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause. what can be done about lack of sleep.

THERE IS NO DENYING THE FACT THAT, GETTING SUFFICIENT SLEEP IS PRIMARY FOR A HEALTHY LIFE.

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Government investment in the arts, such as music and theatre, is a waste of money. Government must invest this money in puplic services instead. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that doing activites in the country can help them get high econome and happier individulas.while it is commonly held belief that it is waste of money and not all the people agree on this idea.there is also an argument that government should focus on this kind of intertamint in the country.this easy will descus both points of view and share my opinion.

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It is pointless making children who lack artistic talent learn painting and drawing in art classes at school. Instead, they should concentrate on other creative or practical subjects for which they may have more apptitute for. To what extent do you agree or disgaree?

Some people believe that it is useless letting children who do not have an artistic talent study painting or drawing in classes at school. Instead, they should focus on other creative or practical courses that they have enough skills on them to improve them. Others hold the opposite view. While I agree that children should learn as many subjects as they could, because it enhances their skills and knowledge. I also believe that they have the right to choose the subjects that they will study, by doing this the child will enjoy studying and will work harder to be better.

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‏Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Most of the people consume a huge amount of products that include sugar, in their daily life. However all the doctors have warn from this issue, and say you shouldn't eat that much of sugar, while other believe is should be more expensive. I think it should remain as their orignal price for many reasons.

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In some countries, it is illegal for employers to reject a job applicant because of their age. Is this a positive or negative development?

In many countries, there are laws that prevent companies from rejecting job applicants because of their age

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Government around the world should be responsible for providing a free education to all of its citizens. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that governments should spend extreme efforts to improving the education systems, especially in public schools. While it is a commonly held belief that authorities should be provide this service as a free, there is an argument opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that this trends dependence on many factors such as, the economic circumstances and the proportion of population.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory, job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Individuals differ on their opinion on whether one should accept an unpleasant situation or try to change it. While accepting reality could help people remain calm and avoid frustruation, I believe that active effort to enhance life usually brings greater benefits.

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Raising children is one of the most important missions for many countries. It is recently updated that new mothers and new fathers should take trainings before getting a child. To what extent do you agree ?

Nowadays, parents are worried about how to raising their children. So, many of them take classes or courses before they got newborn. This essay will examine a agreement about why we should stay relevant and up to date to take care our childrens.

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Some people believe that it is a waste of time ot read read newspapers and watch news on televison. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While some people claim that reading newspapers and watching news on TV is a waste of time, others oppose to this opinion. I completely disagree to this statement. I believe that accessing latest information by newspapers and news broadcast can beneficial.

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