IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 23

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Due to the rapid development and expansion of supermarkets in some countries many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local businesses will bring about the death of local communities.

It is being argued that shutdown of the local business will become the reason of the death local communities , due to the largely development of supermarkets in some nation.I totally disagree with this statement as supermarkets provides several benefits Such as cheaper products and more convenient for public.

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The pictures illustrate the way how plastic bottles are being recycled. It is a plastic circle which never ends up.

The pictures illustrate the way how plastic bottles are being recycled. It is a plastic circle which never ends up. These 9 steps, which are shown on the diagram, from collecting bottles to producing daily routine products, provide convenient opportunities for humanity.

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In some parts of the Us, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this? Give reason for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The freedom of going out is banned for adolescents without the presence of an adult in some regions of the United States. For me, supporting this implementation is impossible on the ground that restrictions make such things more charming and may lead to mental issues.

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Should Children be encouraged to be competitive in sports and other activities? Or is it better for them to learn the benefits of co-operating with other people? Discuss both these views and give your own answer.

There are many different opinions about encouraged children to be competitive or co-operating. In my mind, both of them has the positive effects in their lives and developing country, but I believe being co-operative outweigh competitive.

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What role does photography play in the context of influence and art?

Photography rapidly processes influence and it is an art form.Because many influencers become famous by doing photography.So, it is clear that there are many photographers but only some of them are famous which means that photography is an art which cannot be learned by everyone. Also one of my friends has an amazing photography skill and he is a famous wildlife photographer and he is very successful in his career because of his talent and unique art.Photography rapidly processes influence and it is an art form.Because many influencers become famous by doing photography.So, it is clear that there are many photographers but only some of them are famous which means that photography is an art which cannot be learned by everyone. Also one of my friends has an amazing photography skill and he is a famous wildlife photographer and he is very successful in his career because of his talent and unique art.

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Many people believe that scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than the private companies. To what exend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A vast number of people believe that instead of private sector the government should be incharging all scientific research. Is this case, I consider benefits outweigh than the drawbacks that i shall be discussing in this essay.

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Some people work for the same organization all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organizations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are people prefer working in the same company through their whole life, by doing so they got a stable payment and working environment. Whereas others think is better to work in different organizations. Although working in the same firm for a long time could have a steady income and comfortable working environment, I believe that switch job properly could have a better job development opportunities.

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Environmental problems are becoming a global issue and are encounter-challenging the quality of life.

In the contemporary world, the most significant issue is whether authorities should be more concerned about infrastructure or ecology. Despite the fact that building new houses provides technology and economic development, caring for ecology is much more important because nature is the basement of everything. Therefore, I think ecology should be first to take care of.

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The pictures show how a new underground platform and changes were made to the toronto go train station during and after construction.

The three figures illustrate the construction process of Toronto Go train station. Overall, the origin station had gone through an expansion in order to create a new level for people who walk.

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In some countries, it is becoming increasingly common for people to follow a vegetarian diet. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The consumption of vegetables and fruits are gradually increased in some parts of the worlds. That is, individuals are looking for more healthy diet. I believe that, this way(trend) is more beneficial for humanity and wildlife which (that) outweigh the its drawback.

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In your opinion how can government of each country eradicate or lessen the crimes committed by their own people use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

To effectively reduce or eradicate crime, governments must adopt a multifaceted approach that addresses the root causes of criminal behavior, strengthens law enforcement, and fosters community engagement.

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Some people think that it is best to accept bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss bothh these views and give your own opinion

Today, it seems that people are often judged by their social status and material possessions, rather than by traditional values like honor, kindness, and trust. This shows a growing focus on wealth and outward success, but it is important to consider whether this is a fair way to measure a person’s worth?

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should people set personal goals, giving reasons for your views.

Is it really beneficial to set goals?

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The best way / the only way to reduce poverty(INDIVIDUALS / GOVERNMENT) in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education, so that they can at least read, write and use numbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent times, people have argued that the best method to decrease poverty in developing countries is by giving up to six years of free education in order that they can at least read, write and use numbers. From my point of view, I consider myself as an advocate of this idea.

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Open plan offices offer a better working environment for staff than a normal office. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that open plan offices are more advantageous than normal offices. In my opinion, normal offices have many more advantages than open plan.

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Some people believe that it is beneficial to play sport in a team rather than playing an individual team. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many individuals acknowledge that team play has more significance than personal one. Although people who busy with the sports that are carried out by one person have an opportunity to take greetings for themselves, friendship and cooperation make group sports superior.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?

In today's world, we are approching with an advancement of scientific kowledge to improvise the people's lifes. It's a harsh truth that the aim of science is to offer a better lives to all human beings. This is a heated argument nowdays among lot of peoples, some are favour with statement whereas some reject this notion. However, I agreed with the aformentioned statement. This essay will further emphasie on my perspective with suitable examples and leads to possible conclusion.

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Q: Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present day, most companies' technology orders personal data for access to software. Some people argue against this trend. While others say it has demerits. In this essay, I will explore some foremost pros and cons.

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The bar chart details the amount of waste that was disposed via landfill, burning and dumping at sea, in a particular European country between 2005 and 2008.

The given bar chart shows the data about the average amount of disposed waste disposed of by three different methods in one European nation from 2005 to 2008.

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Research has shown that the transportation of products and people are the main source of pollution. Some people believe government should be in charge of this, while others believe it is the fault of individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Research has presented that the people and transfer products are the major polution source, someone thinks that government should be in responce for this, while others say that it is the fault of workers. The government can not control all processes, however I think that all processes is on workers then their are to blame.

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