IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 23

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animal. Others say that there are more important environmental problem. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The last years, our planet has being experienced different kinds of environmental problems. Some of those issues are related to human actions which have affected the living things in the world. In consequence, I really believe that the main environmental problems are the loss of plants and animals, and other problems such as pollution, and climate change. Unfortunately, these events have impacted in our life badly.

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Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today’s world, although governments and health organizations warn people about the harmful effects of smoking, many individuals still continue this habit. This is a serious problem in people’s lives in terms of economic and social aspects. However, there are some effective solutions that can reduce the number of smoker.

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In some countries, university students live at home with their families while they study in the same city, whereas, in other countries they live away from home while they study in another city. Do the benefits of living away from home outweigh the disadvantages?

There are two types of situations here for students: ones live in the same city as their university located, as the others have to live far away from their home and relatives to study in their educational place. And here's pop up's the question, "would it be better to live in another city for studying?". And I absolutely agree with this, and wish to explain why.

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The government should invest more money In teaching science than other subjects for the country to be more developed

Spending more money on science is thought better than expend it to other subjects for country's development.

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The government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects for the country to be more developed To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is often argued that increasing public investment in teaching science, compared to other disciplines, is the most effective way to promote a country’s progress.While some agree in favour,i personally oppose this nation.

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Many aspects of the way people dress today are influenced by global fashion trends. How has global fashion become such a strong influence on people's lives? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In this modern world, more and more people especially youngsters try to keep up their styles with fashion trends. There are some reasons behind this and I believe it can be perceived as a negative trend.

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Many young people today leave their parents’ homes in rural areas to study or work in big cities. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays parents desire to give extraordinary knowledge for their children. For this decision, young people leave their parent-house to far areas for studying or working in big cities . Surely, there are both pros and cons to live alone without having someone , but I believe disadvantageous outweigh advantages.

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Nowadays many people are sleeping fewer hours than before. Why is this happening? What are the consequences of this?

One of widely discussed issues nowadays is lack of sleep hours. It is undeniable that we sleep less, because of technologies, which have become a key part of our life. Moreover, people believe that at hight they will be get an enormous motivation and new ideas to how to enhance their life. In this essay I will look at consequences and effects of sleping less related to given reasons.

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many parents today organise extra classes for their children after school and at the weekend. Do you feel that this is a worthwhile thing to do or do you feel children have enough education at school?

Nowadays, many parents arrange additional classes for their children after school and on the weekend. While some people believe that school education is enough, I believe that extra classes can be beneficial in certain situations. On the one hand, too much studying may cause some problems like stress and burnout. Because, children also need free time to play, relax, and develop social skills. Moreover, school already provides enough academic knowledge for most students. For example, studying too much time without the time for rest, may cause major problems in health. Because, children study seated position, that may cause postural issues, and it also provides spinal strain. Also, a sedentary lifestyle contributes to obesity and cardiovascular diseases. On the other hand, extra classes help children improve weak subjects and use the time productivity. Moreover, they can prepare for important exams like IELTS and university entrance. For instance, if we compare two students who go t...

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Some people think hard work and determination bring sucess. Others think other factors such as money and good appearance are more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Hard work is a key of sucess. Some individuals argued that sucess is depend on two factors that are hard work and determination, while some says that a good personality with money is plays a vital role. I am going to elobrate both views before giving a opinion.

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Many students find it harder to study when they are at university or college than when they were at school. Why is this? What can be done to solve the problem? (06.07.25)

Currently, governments tend to encourage the improvement of education generally and also to invest more in upgrading and developing university quality. Therefore, students in next generations might find it hard to adapt to advanced university programs or college lectures after alternative changes. In this essay, I will discuss on cause of why this happen and create the best resolution to deal with this situation.

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The gap between the rich and the poor is widening very fast. What are the causes and effects of this widening gap? You may give solutions based on your knowledge and experience.

The hole between the high and the low classes of people has been spreading so fast in recent years. The main cause of this problem is that people don't imagine themselves living in a low-class family, and the result of that will be more and more miserable people who can't find what they need around the world.

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Education should be free to all people and should be paid for and managed by the government. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Education is a system where individuals get to learn and study in various topics, the system is also managed by the government and the government branch. This essay will explain the opinion towards the question asked previously.

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In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

Recently, there has been an increase in the numbers of athletes using banned substances. It’s effects on sports industry various aspects especially on health and moral. This essay will illustrate cause and provide solutions for this issues.

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, therfore certain jobs are suitable for men and others for women. To what extent fo you agree or disagree

According to some people, men and women are differentiated from each other when it comes to abilities, and because of that, the same part of the population think they must prefer different jobs. This essay strongly disagrees with this view, because generalizing women and men is like generalizing brunettes and blondes, and believing these kind of stereotypes and act in that way are harmful for society.

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Many people today use fast food restaurants for most of their meals. There are pros and cons. Give the advantages and disadvantages of fast food restaurants.

Society is very different today , especially after the fast food become popular . Today people eating so many fast food or unhealthy food . In this time the fast food very popular things . The essay will examine the advantages and the disadvantages of fast food especially Macdonald’s restaurant .

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Many people think that the internet is terrible for both the individual person and for society. To what extent do you agree?

The world is totally different nowadays, especially after the internet is exist. Some people agree that the internet is something good and useful for humans and society. On the other hand, several people think that the internet is affect human and society in a bad way. This essay will examine my opinion, and to what extent do I agree abut that topic.

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Some people think that the government is responsible for looking after the elderly. Others believe that it should be family members. Who do you think should take responsibility?

nowaday elderly is a huge issue, people are getting older and older. the government has some policy for the elderly. Some people think that the government is responsible for looking after the elderly. Others believe that it should be family members. i will dicuss who should take responsibility of taking care of the elderly below.

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Some people argued that young generations in some customs were taught to try hard on their goals in order to achieve them. I strongly believe that there are more advantages than disadvantages from this opinion.

There is no delying that teens try their best in order to accomplish their goals is benefical to their mental health.

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Some people think that social skills are as important as academic qualifications. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Some people believe that social skills are just as important as academic qualifications. I agree with this view to a large extent because both aspects play a vital role in personal and professional success.

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