IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that money spent on space exploration is not justifiable. There are more beneficial ways to spend this money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It has been a while since we discussed whether space exploration is right or not. The more technical improvements developed, the more desire there was for exploring other spaces. Sometimes it seems like a decent time, and our success in technical advancement. Although it is important, I completely disagree with it being the only major factor.

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Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years lots of economic expenditure has been used to study space projects yearly. most of the individual presenting their thought that all expenditures can be utilized in the development of living life of human beings on this planet. On behalf of this statement, I am standing on the part of agreeing and my discussion explaining my opinion with an example.

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Some children find learning history at school very exciting but many others think it is boring. In what ways can history be brought to life for all school children?

Currently, the topic of studying history is something which bears some consideration. While there are students who think that learning history is very interesting, others suppose that history is really boring. I believe that history brings more benefits to students such as avoiding future wars and maintaining the culture of their countries.

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In some cultures, children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

There are a meaningful messages that have given to the children in several cultures, one of them is children should be shown their hardwork side in order to achieve their dreams. In this essay, I will explain about the benefits and the drawbacks by giving this message to the children.

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Some people think that physical strength is important for success in sports, while other people think that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

To begin with, sport is one of the greatest exersices that we are doing. It is essential for our health and to develop our body. To keep ourself fit. I will dicuss about physical strength and mental strength which one is more important to us.

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Tobacco, mainly in the form of cigarettes, is one of the most widely-used drugs in the world. Over a billion adults legally smoke tobacco every day. The long-term health costs are high – both for smokers themselves, and for the wider community in terms of healthcare costs and lower productivity. Do governments have a legitimate role to legislate to protect citizens from the harmful effects of their own decisions to smoke, or are such decisions up to the individual?

Smoking has been long studied for its deleterious health effects; yet it remains the top legally consumed drug in the world. While the perspectives about smoking regulations vary widely, I agree that tobacco should be subjected to a firm regulatory overweight by governments, as I would argue in this essay.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get new events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s digital age, social media has been popularized due to many demanding purposes of the citizens. Despite the writer contending that those virtual platforms have many beneficial factors as keeping contact with other people and accessing news, while others believe that they bring an adverse factor as communicating resistance in reality.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news event.Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantage?

It is irrfutable that more and more people using social media for staying connected with families and friends,and for keeping up to date with the news.I believe that while there are certains drawback of this trend,the advantages are far more.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep on touch with other people and get news event. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Social media is recently attributed in all over the world and used to maintain relationships and obtain latest news. The writer contends that these benefits of social media, particularly entertainment and keep up-to-date, outweigh the drawback of heavy reliance.

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The obesity rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many developed countries. discuss some possible reasons for this problem and suggest solutions

The issue of obesity rates among teenagers have increased dramatically in many developed countries is growing rapidly around the globe for the time being. This is a worrying trend, since it results in suffers from many diseases. From my perspective, the most detrimental outcomes of this problem are obese teens may experience low self-esteem, depression, anxiety, and body image issues, which can negatively impact their overall well-being along with obesity during adolescence is associated with a higher risk of premature death due to an increased likelihood of developing chronic diseases at a younger age and limit sugary drinks, fast food and processed snack together with aim for at least 60 minutes of moderate to vigorous physical activity each day can be considered as viable solutions to it.

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Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals argues that celebrities's support towards international aid organizations draws public's attention to the issue, while some oppose to the outcome concerning they make the issue less severity. Both perspectives have valid points, but I believe public awareness brings more pros than cons to the global issue.

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Some people say that parents should places restrictions on the hours their children spend watching TV and playing computer games, and encourage them to spend this time reading books instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays plenty of children play games,watch videos and enter Instagram, TikTok, Facebook and another bad thing. Thus, their mothers must prevent this issue but some people obstruct to watch tv and it is the best way to bring up.

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propaganda poster of isis Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the phenomenon.

This poster, in my opinion, was considerate enough to influent both two groups of audiences that ISIS aims at. Firstly, speaking of the audience who is ardent to join ISIS this poster is truly attractive. This poster occasions reflection upon the bravery of fighters of the Islamic state of Iraq and Syria (ISIS) violated the US, the most powerful country in the world, by putting a bomb on the US. The next audiences who wanted to be considering in this concerne is the western nation; this poster is reckoned to be un of the most dangerous literature that ISIS has created so far, because it could terrify the civilians of the western country. Additionally it is not just this poster, in which ISIS has created many more of this movie and photos. This content could terrify citizens of US because the possiblity of happening another disaster similar to 9/11.

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“Many university students live with families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places.” What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations?

The majority of the population are considering that people from Genz are as reliable as their ancestors. The root reason for this is the attempt in grasping economical opportunities in a capitalism society. However, this writer contends that this is an advance for the society because of financial enhancement acquired.

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People believe that Generation Z (1997-2007) are more dishonest than previous generations. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

There is a common belief that the Z generation’s teenagers are becoming more and more dishonest when comparing to the older ones. This assumption derives from the lack of later appropriate punishments while having been a detrimental issue resulting in the emergence of other negative traits in a child’s behavior.

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The best way to reduce youth crimes is to educate their parents with parental skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I slightly disagree with this idea. Letting parents be exposed to education skills is the most efficient way to educate children morally. However, the influence to the youth from the school and the society should not be neglected. There is no single methodology to reduce youth crimes. Instead, it requires coorperative power from different facets to educate the youth.

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Some cities have vehicle- free days when private cars, trucks, and motorcycles are banned from the city center. public transportation like buses , taxis, and metros are advised. To what extend do you think the advantaged of the policy outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, numbers of private vehicles are increasing in the world particularly in urban areas . Therefore , some companies governments have got a decision to ban private cars in some days such as weekends or special hours. However, there are some positive or negative effects to society. I think that the policy of banning private transports is more beneficial than drawbacks .

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In today’s digital age, anyone with a smartphone can capture and share photographs. this accessibility to photography diminishes the value of professional photographers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Now a days, most peole use their smart phone as camera and take many photos and share them by others. This behavior and ability decrease the value of professional photoghraphers. at first I agree with this opinion. But, when I focus on this subject I cannot find any relation between them. I clearly disagree with this subject.

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Some people believe that tourism promotes the economy while other argue that tourism destroy the environmental. Discuss both views.

In the last few years, most people like to travel other countries, spend more interesting time with family or friends. There are many types of expedition such as watch the beautiful nature, rest with their children, conversance other countries culture, try to other traditional foods and watch favorite singers festival. Some developed countries governments have created new tourist attraction for national economy. However other countries have found in other ways for economy.

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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?

On the one hand, there are many possible solutions that the authorities can take to reduce the traffic jam and pollution. First, there are more and more sustainable energy sources such as solar power, wind power, and hydropower that can be utilized to run vehicles and factory, and as a result, the emission of greenhouse gases or other harmful gases like carbon monoxide and CFC will be reduced. For example, there are many countries using solar panels to run public vehicles or to produce electricity for household usages. This not only saves money on the electricity bill, but also encourages people to travel around with eco-friendly and cheap vehicles such as train or bus.

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