IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people are changing their careers. what are the reasons for changing? and can there be any positive or negative impact by person or by society as whole.

A lot of people take decision about change their careers and ı think it has somelogical reason. For example low salary and work's terms. On the other hand, it affect many things about society. Actually, it don't affect just society but also personal life. İn adittion, It has a lot of pros and cons.

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Some school leavers tend to go for travelling or work for a period of time before directly going to university. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages?

An increase in crime is always associated with a dysfunctional society. If there is favorable economic development in the state, there is no significant gap between the richest and the poorest, then crime cannot be fueled from those strata of society that are interested in it or join the ranks of its members.

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Online learning is becoming more popular and some people believe it will replace traditional classroom teaching in the future.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. 1 Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons 2 for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. 3

In modern society,there has been a notable increase in number of individuals who put their trust in alternative medicine rather than their doctors. While they are several reasons for that, I believe it is a negative trend and it will be explained in this essay why.

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Some people think that employers should focus on the personal qualities of potential job seekers instead of their academic qualifications and experience. To what extent do you agree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Academic qualifications refer to the evidence that a candidate has knowledge and competence in a particular field of study. This means that the job seeker has attained a foundational comprehension of the subject matter, and has acquired necessary skills through assignments, coursework and exams. This suggests that the individual possesses the knowledge and skills to perform well in the role. A software development firm seeking to appoint a programmer, for instance, may put more focus on a job applicant with a computer science degree. The degree demonstrates the fact that the candidate has acquired a certain level of programming languages, algorithms and competencies required for the job.

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In some cultures, marriage and having children is viewed as the main purpose in a person’s life. In other societies, having a good career and income is what is seen as success. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In contemporary era, a happy relationship and having children is the principle aim of thier lives in various societies while others are thaught that to have an excellent academic records and financial growth has seen as success. I have discussed several things for both scenario in ensuing paragraphs with suitable examples with my opinion.

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Some people think only best students should be rewarded. Others think we should reward students who make progress. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Every educational institution has their own outstanding students which are measured by different aspects. Not all of them become the top among others since the beginning, but there are also some students who work harder to fill the knowledge and skill gap between them and their peers. This essay will cover my opinion regarding which students deserve an appreciation from two points of view.

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eople nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past. What do you think is the reason behind this? What are the effects on individuals and people around them?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that people nowadays sleep less than they used to in the past.  It is undeniable that using technology has become an essential part of our life.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this problem? How can this problem be solved?

The number of population plays a role in who the universe should be.Nowadays,the effective of the large number of population become an incridible scare over the world. This essay will discuss the issues of this phenomenon and will implements solutions to overcome these problems.One possible cause is assembleing people in one city , as there is a a lot of people being crowded in small area this will increase the number of citizens,and it seems to put people together in a box. Moreover, this problem will leads to lack of food and water. Subsequently, another possible reason is the poor management , the management in this timeframe could leads many problem on people and environment . In contrast, the administration could also control the population's numbers and gives rise to good management. perhaps the huge number of immigrations in the cities around this country, this is a common issue and leads to a higher number of population owing to the newly people who enter the country . This...

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Some people believe that in order to reduce the rising obesity among children the school administration should make it necessary for every child to participate in sports and other outdoor activities. Do you agree or disagree?

Some populations think that to decrease the percentage of increased obesity among children the school administration has to make sports participation indoors or outdoors necessary for each student. This essay totally agrees with enforcing the students to engage in sports activities.

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The amount of time spend on sports and exercise should be increased in schools in order to tackle the problem of overweight children? Do you think this is the best way to deal with the problem? What other solutions can you suggest ?

These days, the rate of time spend on sports and exercise shoud be rose in schools in order to solve the problem of overweight students. So, I think this is not better way to behave with the problem. In this essay, I am going to discuss this point and give my own suggest.

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Many university students want to learn about different subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others feel it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for their qualification. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, many individuals at university level have the desire to learn extra subject than their main stream course. However, certain groups of people are of the opinion that students should concentrate on selected program to achieve success in their academic. I agree with the second statement and In the following paragraphs, I shall explain my reasons for this befief.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary forgovernments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

In this modern era, an increasing number od people are choosing to eat juck food and because of that folks are suffering from a plethora of health conditions. Thus, it is essential for the governments to take a more tax from the people who is buying fast food. If questioned, I bolster with this notion to a major extent. My inclination is justified further.

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Some people believe that in order to reduce the rising obesity among children the school administration should make it necessary for every child to participate in sports and other outdoor activities. Do you agree or disagree?

In order to control the increase levels of unhealthy children, it is important for school to make sure that they make sure physical activities are being practiced by children everyday. As a matter of fact I totally agree with idea.

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There is more need for houses at the moment, people think that they should built houses at the countryside. A small group of people think that they should not build it in the countryside. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, cities have a lot of structure, and many people think cities need to have more apartment at the countryside. On the other hand, some people think the opposite of this idea. I particularly agree about it.

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Scientists predict in the near future, cars will be driven by computers, not people. Why? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Vy

In the modern era, technology is more developed.Therefore, new-brand robots are invented by scientists.It is opined that cars will be able to drive automatically without human, in the future.In my essay, I will outline some possible in this topic and how it brings more benefits than drawbacks.

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Scientists predict in the near future,cars will be driven by computers,not people. Huy Tran

In the age of industry 4.0, researchers predict that auto-driving car will be debut in the near future to replace humans. In this paragraph, i will analysis this topic and give my points of view.

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Films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people say they have negative effect on society and should be banned. Others say they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Movies and electronic games whether on the mobile or the computers have evolved with technology, better quality of graphics, better scenarios and better gaming services. The issue with todays world is the increase of simulation games or films that center arround violence (physical or mental), the following paragraphs we will discuss both.

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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

I do agree to the statement that children brought up in poor families are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up wi by wealthy parents.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that governments should give a fund to railways rather than road. While investing money in railways have some benefits, It would argue that it is better for governments to spend money on roads for several reasons.

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