IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Write a report describing the information in the graph below.

The bar chart illustrates either the number of computers or the internet per 1000 citizens in the nine Arab countries.

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Some people regard that we ought to spend money and time protecting wild animals.Others argue that it is better only to spend it on human populations.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In modern times, as climate change accelerates, many species are in danger of extinction. It is often argued that spending money and time on animals is more important than spending them only on human populations. In my opinion, spending resources shouldn't be limited to human. Rather, we should use our resources to preserve species for two reasons.

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You have registered for a six-month computer training program at Sambro Community College. You want to rent a room from Sambro Housing Agency. Explain when you need to rent the room. Describe your requirements for the room. Ask about costs and the application process.

I am writing this email to express my interest to rent a room in your facilities since I just enrolled in the computer training program for the coming summer.

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The use of cell phones (mobiles phones) has grown rapidly in the past few years. People use them for both business and personal reasons. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the widespread use of cell phones (mobile phones)? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Using smart phones has increased a lot recently. The community use them for professional and personal purposes. There are many benefits and drawbacks of the usage of mobile phones, such as portability and addictiveness.

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Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil and natural gas, are the main source for many countries. However, some nations are using alternative energy such as solar power and wind power. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

In my nations, people still dependent on fossil fuels as the vital energy source, for instance, coal, oil as well as natural gas. Mammoth dimension has taken place due to change in lifestyle. Therefore, few countries are utilizing solar and wind power as a substiute rather than exploitating fossil fuels. I firmly belive this is a positive deveploment and I applaud the efforts being done to bring this transition.

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Many people believe that formal "pen and paper" examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Although some believe that the traditional way which is writing in paper with pen is the most beneficial way to get the best results in education achievements , while others think the opposite . From my own prespective I disagree with the first statement and this is because teaching in practical way is away more useful and our world now is more advanced .

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People are living in a ‘throwaway society,’ using things for a short time and then throwing them away. What are the causes of this? What problems does it lead to?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people live in a "throwaway society", prefering to choose single-usage things after witch utilise them, because they are effortless in modern world. However, this may aggrovate nature-related problems.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (15/16 years) (for example for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). Do you agree or disagree?

It is highly avknowledged that involing of volunteering task should mandotory for high school. While I partly agree because participating free chores bring several benifits , it also has some drawbacks for learners.

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Some people think visitors to others countries should initiate local customers and behaviors. Some people disagree; they think the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss the two views and give your opinion.

Some think that tourists should prevent cultural differences and act as same as local people in order to show respect to their country. I disagree with this opinion, because i think it is better for citizens of a country to be polite to those visiting a country and be flexible to learn something new about communities abroad so that visitors then will return back and try to learn local customers behaviours voluntarely.

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Topic: In many countries, too much money is spent by government and individuals for national holidays such as New Year and religious festivals. Do you agree or disagree?

National and international holidays are involving significant spendings by both government and individuals in many countries. I pursely agree with this opinion, but in some cases these costs are not economically beneficial.

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In many countries household wast e.g .food packaging is increasing day by day. What are the reasons? How can this process problem be solved

Recyclable materials have become an indispensable part of modern life. There has been a frequently discussed issue of whether household waste is crucial for community, or whether it poses risks. I firmly agree that there are a lot of beneficial effects to reduce using food packaging. This essay will delve into this phenomenon, supported by relevant example and insights.

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Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Tax is the amount individuals pay to the government for the betterment of society. Many argue that paying taxes is sufficient as member of society. On the other hand, some believes there are more responsibilities for a person than just paying taxes. I believe both ideas are equally important and will be disscussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some countries have legal ages at which people can drink. Other countries believe not having strict laws is a better policy. Discuss both and give your opinion.

There is a debate about laws for drink. While some societies are using legit age of drinking, others think such harsh laws are not needed for better policy. This essay will discuss both views in detail and put forward that why former idea is more beneficial.

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Some people think that universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills needed in the workplace. Others think that the true function of a university should be to give access to knowledge fo its own sake, regardless of whether the course is useful to an employer. What, in your opinion, should be the main function of a university?

University prepares graduates to be prepared for jobs. While some people argue that graduates should learn anything, I side with those who feel that graduates only be prepared with needed knowledge and skills in workplace.

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Recent advances in air travel have focused only on those sitting in first class and have left other passengers with no benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that people who purchase air tickets for the first class have more advantages than other travellers. This essay agrees with this suggestion completely, that the first class tickets have high influence in society. The essay will discuss the relationships between employers and clients, and about an access to comfort in an airport.

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People today are not as fit as they were in the past. What are the causes of this? What can governments do to deal with this issue?

Health is wealth, we have often heard this a lot. However, it is very difficuilt for people to stay fit in today's busy world as compared to the past. So we will discuss the causes of unfit people and what important steps government should take to prevent this issues in upcoming paragraphs.

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Employment sectors of graduates from Brighton University, 2019

The chart illustrates the proportions of Brighton University graduates in 2019 who were employed in various sectors. Overall a lot of graduates chose service industries while very few chose charity or sports sectors.

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Some people believe that it would be beneficial if employees worked three or four days per week rather than five or six days. Why is this? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is a debate among individuals some believe that people should solely work for few days in a week while others say working five days during weekdays would be advantages. However,I personally believe that humans should only work for few days.In the upcoming paragraphs, I will discuss my viewpoints.

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Some people think parents should control the behaviour of children from a very young age but others think we should give them more freedom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The debate over whether parents should strictly control their children's behavior from a very young age or allow they more freedom is a hot topic. This essay will discuss both views and I will provide my opinion later.

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Some people think that government should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

There is no denying the fact tht the transborts have a big impact on the way people live, and there is a commonly held believe that nations requier to maintain the money and spend it on benefical things such as improve roural roads, as well as there is how argue this idea. In this essay, I will express my own opinion and discuss this question the end.

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