IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is neither possible nor useful to provide university places for a high proportion of young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, the government can't provide university places for a high precentage of young people. I a gree of this point, so in this essay, I am going to discuss this veiw and give an example.

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The most effective way to solve traffic and transport problems in the cities is to encourage people from the suburbs or the countryside to live in the cities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that is the most effective way to end traffic and tansport problems in the city is to encourage people from the suburbs and countryside to live in the city. I dissagree and do not think it is right to till the families who are live in the suburbs and countryside to come in the city will solve the traffic problems.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Zhazira.

It is argued that announcement is exceedingly lucky at coaxing us to buy things, while others say that sales promotion become common

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In recent years, it has become increasingly common for some members of the public to admire mostly sportsmens and other well-known individuals rather than the professionals like teachers and doctors. This essay will provide the possible reason and some positive and negative arguments.

It is the social media which is the main factor of this trend. This is, many companies are taking advantage of famous people’s faces in order to get immediate profit which means as soon as they post on celebrity endorsement ads, these ads can easily bring targeted leads due to the immense popularity of these figures. If it was to continue this way, inferior outcomes might take place. For example: an over-reliance on celebrities can lead to disrespect towards professionals who play an integral role in society, allowing people to start to overlook their performance. Given that, the professionals who always contribute to the development of the world should be appreciated not only financially but also socially.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are good at or that the find the most interest. till what extent you agree.

Some individuals believe that adolescents should focus on all subjects in school. on the other hand, some believe in focusing on the subjects they are good at or passionate about. In my opinion, I agree with the former because it can help in student's overall personality development and opens up a great number of career choices.

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Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children.

People without social network or no interest about that for me do not exist. of course I am talking about place, where people have got access with internet. Thus their advancments are bigger than other countries. Some people think coverage of celebrities is having bad impact, and in the future or in present have or will have influence on their children. While others think their children can have access all this tings and get information celebrities life and it is usually. This essay will discuss both views and explain why I believe, children can have access wiith that.

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Having babies later can have more negatives than positive effects on young adult? What is pros and cons about having babies later and how do you think?

In 2000s ,most of people prefer having babies later than their work . Since 2010, the fertility rate of Hong Kong has decreased quickly .Obviously, having babies later can have more positive effects on young adult .

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There are some population desired the country to investing money for seeking life on different planets, while some of them display opposite opinoin and said instead of that, they have to fix issues on our plant first. Some argue that seek for other living environment is really worth, others believe that it is just wasting of money. In my opinion, the governments have to direct their abilities to solve earth's problems.

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Some people believe that social media sites, such as Facebook or Twitter, have a negative impact on young people and their ability to form personal relationships. Others believe that these sites bring people together in a beneficial way.

Social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter are widely used by young people. Some argue that these platforms have a negative impact on their ability to form meaningful relationships, while others believe that they help bring people together in a positive way. in this essay essay we will talk about the benefits of sosial media.

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One of the consequence of improved medical care is that people are living longer life and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

With the rapid development of medical, people living ages are more and more older. With the longer life and expectancy increasing, some people think it's not meaningful, and some people don't agree it. In my opinion, I disadvantages longer life are more outweigh, and there are some reason for this.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones in communication has negative effects on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Currently young people tend to using either computers and mobile phone to communicate, where they just need to type while texting rather than using their own skill hand writing. It will lead them to reduce their ability both in reading and waiting skills. In this essay I will discuss about the issue.

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Write your opinion of Tesla presentation, which took place on October 10,2024. Do you think it was successful or not? Do you believe robots can replace people in the future?

On October 10, 2024, Tesla reached its latest innovation in promoting a new model of driverless car raising questions about the future. This essay would argue how victorious can be the fact that human labour might be replaced by the usage of automation.

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Goverments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Many countries have railway lines, subways, roads where buses and other means of transportation are used. To be more precise, the use of vehicles is very relevant today.

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ISome people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is widely belived nowadays that competing one another is useful, however there is another belief that it is not. In this essay I will discuss both sides of this argument and reach a reasonable conclusion.

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Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligence than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some scientists predict that artificial intelligence will surpass human capabilities in the near futures. Some view it as a positive development, as it enhances the convenience and improves quality of life. Others, however, believe that it will disrupt the economy and pose security threats. In this essay, I will discuss each perspective before giving my own view.

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Deforestation cause by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be done to solve the problem?

Increase cutting trees in forest for human needs and activity on varity of forests a round the world , will lead to serious problems,that can affect our environment . This essay will present a solutions for deforestation that can be done by government or rich citizens .

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some people think that drug addicts should be treated like criminals and sent to jail , while others believe that they should be treated like patients and sent them to hospital . discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that some humans believe that alcoholic individual should sent them to prison while others think that should be treated them like a pationt and sent them to rehabilitly . Sent them to the jail it is not the perfect solution and can not helping them , however , sending them to reform is another chance to give them a new life . In my own opinion , I compeletly agree with sending them to the hospital .

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Many people think that consumerism has led to significant environmental issues, while others believe that it fosters innovation and economic growth. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There has been ongoing debate about the impact of consumerism. Some individuals believe that there are numerous environmental problems associated with this trend, the rest, nevertheless, claim that it boost the innovation and economic development. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own viewpoint that agrees with the later point.

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Modern technology, such as personal computers and the Internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead f going to an office every day. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are advantages and disadvantages of people do their work from home more time instead of going to an office every day. Now I will talk about the advantages.

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support you r answer.

In the comptemporary era, tremendous technological advancement has evolved every aspect of human life. While certain people are of the view point that advent of digital gadget such as computer has succor with its propitiousness, others believe that development as such this is boon to both mental and physical well being. In my perspective, indeed the computing machines offer multifacted benefits as shall be elaborated upon presently.

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