IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 224

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Task 2: In some countries, more young adults continue to live with their parents even after they have completed education and found jobs. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages? Discuss both views

In recent years, a growing number of individuals have the opinion that teenagers are given independence too much. There is still heated debate about whether children have too much freedom. Personally, I am convinced that youngster in this generation have more freedom than before.

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In many countries, women are allowed to take maternity leave during the first month after the birth of the new-born. Do you think the advantages of maternity leave outweigh the disadvantages?

There are several countries in which the government have allowed the women to take maternity leave from their respective jobs after giving birth to a child. I opine that the pros of taking maternity leave outscore the cons. The following fragments will elucidate my opinion.

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Air travel has become cheaper than before. Some think it is a positive development. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Traveling has always been one of the prime concern for people since time immemorial. Nowadays, we have more transpor facilities such as train, road, water and so on. Some people are argueing that, airtiket price getting lower is a positive development and the other where around. In my opinion it is not a sighn of development. There are enormous causative factors for my opinion.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, overweight status become more popular all over the world. Everyone think high food prices will prevent this problems. In my opinon, there are more reasons lead to overweight of people.

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Some people think that too much money has been spent looking after and repairing old buildings, so we should knock down old buildings and build modern ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays society begin to think that acient buildings cost lot of funding in case just to repair it, come with solution to demolish the old building, change it to the modern one or can be said as build the new building. However, I tend to disagree with this idea and will elaborate the explanation in this essay.

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should private schools receive government funding? give reason for your answer, and include any relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, children play a vital role any any nation development therefore parents need to give more freedom as compare to past. I ponder that, it is affirmative development and I my justification will come in further paragraphs along with some relative examples.

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and works of arts by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, it has been observed that, public museums and art exhibitions would not be needed because people can view historical objects and masterpieces of arts with the help of the computers. If questioned to me, personally I would strongly disagree with this statement, In detail description and with logical explanations, is in the following paragraphs.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinctions. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Nowadays it is crucial to assist children to understand between false and right in their youngest age. personally, I agree that children should study the difference between correct and incorrect in my opinion, Parents ought to teach them by punishment to aid them recognize their behaviour. this essay will discuss that I feel that for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.

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Some people think the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet to obtain information. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is true that libraries have indispensable roles to play in one's learning process. Therefore, some people harbour a belief that each town should have free libraries, whilst others hold the reverse viewpoint that the investment can be waste since nowadays individuals are prone to searching all kinds of information they need on the Internet. This essay will delve in to perspectives in a comprehensive manner before explicating my position.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do yoy think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is essential thing for everybody to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. In thia essay , I will discuss the main advantage and disadvantage of this phenomenon and argued that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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Many schools these days have problems with poor student behavior. Why do you think these problems occur?What could be done to tackle these problems?

Nowadays,many schools have an issue with bad youngsters' behavior. This essay will discuss the main problems associated with student's behavior and propose some possible solutions to avoid them .

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You recently applied for a course at a college and have been accepted. However, you cannot be join due to some reason

My name is Amandeep Singh. I am writing this letter to express concern that I have recently applied business communication course in your reputed college, also got the opportunity to enroll in the current semester as this course will help me to get suitable employment in this field. However, I am unable to join due to personal commitments this year.

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More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work. What will be the consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Majority of people relocating to urban areas from rural areas for employment opportunities. This essay will explain reasons for this notion such as overcrowded city centre, mismanagement of infrastructure , law and order etc and also explain remedial solution such as grant given by government to big corporate to set up business away from city life and availability of cheap labor in rural areas.

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42.Some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some say that successful lifestyle depends on hard work and determination, while others would argue that money and physical aspect are more important. This essay would argue that although rich people can do more activities, individuals need to learn new things.

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In future all cars, busses and trcuks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passangers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

There is no second thought that in recent times all cars, busses and trucks would be automated and there won't be any need of driver. I personally believe that there are more disadvantages than advantages. In detail analysis with exlpanation and examples is in following paragraphs.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

It is obvious that,the behaviour of school pupils have been getting worse in some regions of the world.There are some reasons that related to this problem but some solutions have been found.

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Some people think that the development of technology helps to reduce crime, while other people think it encourages crime. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. devlpt of techno reduces crime Devlpt of techn encourages crime

Nowdays, how to deal with crime continue to be a controversial issu in todays life. Majority of people believe that redusing crime depeond on imporving and developing technology meanwhile some people argue that it encourages crime.There are some valid point, on both side which will be listed below.

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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can is better for their overall skills development and creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree?

Children are the future of the country so nowadays we always focus on development and pay attention to everything children do. Some people believe that doing an ẹnoyable activity with a child can is better for their overall skills development and creativity than reading.

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Smoking tobacco is becoming increasingly popular among young people, with potentially serious effects on their health. Explain some reasons for this problem and suggest some possible solution

Cigarettes were originally sold as an expensive handmade luxury item for the urban elites of Europe. However, in the last few centuries tobacconist has become cheaper, and available on public specially between young adults or even teenagers. I believe that this popularity is rooted in advertising, family and friends. Everybody knows that smoking is not a healthy habit, but these days many people are addicted to this harmful drugs and most of them are youngsters which is a terrible age to use unhealthy products that can cause serious damage to health.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working proplr no get enough exercise? And what can be done about this problems?

Nowadays , most of the work becomes online as results of improve technology . Therefore most of the workers doing them works in home by suing their own devices . Moreover , they are not able to do some exercise due to their long work time . And also because most of communities do not have places in their houses to so some sports . Moreover , this essay will discuss the solution to solve these problem and the reasons leading to this fitness problem.

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