IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 231

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people believe that playing games and watching TV programs is beneficial but others say it doesn't improve mental ability of children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Few individuals argue that youngsters learn few things watching television and playing video games, whereas,

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Should developing countries concentrate on improving industrial skills or should they promote education first?

Developing countries, in spite, should have proper planning and balance in the development of every sector. Education is a most essential factor for the country and the youths from every aspect yet, industrial skills play a vital role in development. Both industrial skills and education should be promoted.

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It is crucial for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Few people believe that parks are crucial places for relaxing , while others argue that gardens and squares are making the land useless and should be used for more practical purposes. In my opinion, parks and squares are important for various reasons in cities and towns , despite the voices against this issue.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

In the realm of sustainable world, there is a persistant discussion on recycling ratio which could not be enough for sustainibility in now and the future. On one side of the spectrum, there is a strong advocacy for the only way to rise recycling ratio is establishing legal arrangements by the government, while on the other side, people might consider the amount of reusing is enough in terms of the environmental transformation. Both approaches have their own concerns and merits, but my perspective aligns with the belief that authorities should take an action through establising some regulations to escalating recycling ratio of materials in households.

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Some people think problems with traffic and housing in the city centre can be solved by moving companies and their employees in the countryside.

Traffic and housing problems in urban cities can be solved by locating major companies and their workers to the rural areas. In this essay I will describe why I completely support the idea of transferring companies to the countryside.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Since the phenomena of widespread globalization started, the need for a common language for international relationships became evident. For historical reasons, English bacame the prime candidate to fulfill this role hence its impotance as a subject in education grew accordingly. Overall, several local languages are at risk of dying out thus we should ensure their survilal because their influence on our identity is much broader that it might appear at first glence.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

An advertisement, per se, is one of the most essential factors how each business product can be sold. Hence, some products' advertisements focus on the rate of products' freshness. Admitting that there are pros and cons to this development, depending on the value systems or circumstances, the answer varies from person to person. All in all, I consider this derives from the idea that many customers will follow an emerging market, regarding this theory as a totally positive development, discussing in the following essay.

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Some people say that companies that sponsor big game gain a lot; while the others believe that it can become a disadvantage. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people argued that organizations who funded massive game events tend to received a huge sum of feedback while others believe that it potrays as a disadvantage. In this essay, I will elaborate each sides but personally, I strongly agree upon the group that stated funding huge game events can impact a drawback to the companies itself.

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These days, too many people maintain their health by relying on doctors and medicine, rather than by following a healthy lifestyle.

In this modern era, there are a lot of people who do not pay attention to a healthy lifestyle. They really depends on doctor and medicine to keep healthy. I totally agree with statement and this essay will elaborate more about the reasons.

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Many people spent a lot money on clothes, haircut, and beauty productsto enhance their appearance. Discuss advantages and disadvantages.

Today people are becoming more fasionable than in the past. A vast majority of individuals spend money to buy many things to increase their beauty though it has a plenty of pros and cons. This essay will examine meticulusly the benefits and drawbacks, presenting arguments and examples to provide a comprehensive analysis.

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Feedback and evaluation are necessary aspects of school and work, but many people dislike being evaluated. What are the causes of this problem? How could it be solved?

Many schools and corporations evaluate their students or employees continuously and give feedback on a regular basis. Although many dislike these procedures, they help people become better, eventhough the majority aren't consciously aware of it. The main reason for this problem is that people's ego get hurt in the process and this can be avoided by having a private one-on-one feedback sessions.

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Some people say that parents should place restrictions on the time their children spend watching TV and playing games and encourage them to spend this time reading books. Do you agree or disagree?

These days, children have become increasingly addcited to television, games, and smartphone. Some individuals reckon that parents should limit their pupil's time spending with these entertainment, which I definitely agree with the statement. In this essay, the reason to support my point of view will be elaborated on the following paragraphs.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will one day replace face-to-face education. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience. Write at least 250 words.

In a world, where we spend a significant amount of time on the Internet, online education experiences a strong increase in popularity. While some people expect that e-learning could take the place of face-to-face education, I agree with the proponents of this view that it cannot be a substitute for traditional education.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

There is no dying, in fact advertisement is popular nowadays. While it is a commonly held belief that advertising increased the sales of product, and another point, say it is a traditional way to become a known account, so people don't interesting for this, there is also an argument that opposes it as I mentioned. In my opinion, I consider that the attractive ads made me more curious about the rest of it.

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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Learning other tongue has a high impact on youths' future. specialists are trying to find the optimum time of learning but there is a disagreement between them. Some of them believe that kids should start train at elementary school but others think it should be started at high school. I believe that the first opinion is more beneficial for juniors since they get the contents faster and more durable in addition to benefits in strengthening the brain capability. Of course, it may also cause two important problems which are mental energy consumption and social harms in some cases, but I think these are manageable.

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Schools should focus on academic success and passing examinations. Skills such as cookery, dressmaking and woodwork should not be taught at school as it is better to learn these from family and friends. To that extent do you agree or disagree. You should write at least 250 words.

There are number of people who thinks that schools should focus only on the academic success and help students to pass their examination and skills like cookery, dressmaking and wood work should not be taught in the schools. They states, these skills can be develoved by parents as well as by friends of that student. From my perspective, I strongly believe that this statement is correct, but I will be explaining both points of view with the support of some relevant examples.

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sOME PEOPLE BEILEVE keeping animals as a pet is good thing for children others think it is advantageous and unhealthy which option do you agree.

Few people concern that keeping fauna in home is benefical for the children because having a carnivore can enhance a child's social skills and aid them developing confidence while, others opine that there are some disadvantages and health risks associated with staying savage. I agree that kids may improved their creativity by the animals but causing allergy is another issue.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this positive or negative development. Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, there are many people living in the countryside and decide to move to urban areas, which leads to a decreasing number of populations in the countryside. I personally believe that this trend is totally harmful.

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In many countries adound the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you tink this positive or negative development. Give reason for your answer and niclude any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowasday, there are many people who live in countryside to move to downtown leads to it decreasing number of pupulation in the countryside. I personally believed that this trend is totally harmful.

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Some people believe that it is wrong to keep animals in zoos, while others think that zoos are both entertaining and ecologically important.

The part of a human community believes that it is unacceptable to keep spices in zoos,and other part of community suppose that zoos are vital for financial development and human entertainment . While the development of breeding programs contributes to the preservation of endangered species,I believe that the poor conditions that many animals held in captavity are kept in make the extinction of zoos unacceptable.Here,this essay will discuss about contribution of zoos for wild animals conservation,and the unethical sides of animals capturvity.

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