IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 227

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Punishment has been one of the important part of disciplining children for a long time. There is a belief that punishing kids is crucial to teach them what is propper and what is the unpropper behaviours. I tend to think that punishing children would be useful in disciplining them; however, the way this method is using is of prime importance.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles, and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does plastic do to the environment and people? What can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

After plastic was invented, people have enjoyed using plastic in their daily lives for the reason of convinience. It is undeniable that using plastic gives us more comfortable lifestyle but it also visious side effects on human's health as well as the environment.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is a prevalent perspective that all college students ought to learn whatever they enjoy, while others hold a different point of view that students are better off restricted to learn subjects that will come in handy in the future like Science and Technology. I agree wholeheartedly with the latter statement, as now will be presented in this essay.

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Some parents believe that students must work hard and at school and spend their free time learning their school lessons , while other belive that students need to spend their free time playing and devoloping other skills Which opinoin agree?

In modern life some people argue, that many students should spend their free week primarily focusing on schoolwork or engaging in other activities to develop different skills is a matter of perspective and can vary depending on individual circumstances. Both viewpoints have valid arguments, and it is important to strike a balance that suits the needs and goals of each student.

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what are the factors that cause stress and how to cope with stress?

Nowadays, stress is one of the main health concerns worldwide. However, reasons such as work pressure and lack of time management skills can have a serious impact on lives. This essay will explain these issues and propose potential solutions like balancing and prioritizing work and studies.

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Many people still believe that riding a bicycle is the best way to get to places. What are the advantage and disadvantage of using a bicycle these days?

It is quite common these days for people to ride a bicycle because it is the most convenience way to travel in many countries. This trend would create certain benefits but there will also be some drawbacks.

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In many countries today, crime novels and TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

Nowadays, crime novels and TV crime series are becoming more and more popular in some countries. I think it is happening due to increasing of violence in these countries and because of the people's curiosity. Personally, I do not like to watch this type of books and TV shows. I prefer romances and comedies instead criminal stories.

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Some people believe that the experiences children have before they go to school will have the greatest effect on their future life. Others argue that experiences gained when they are teenagers have a bigger influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinions

There is a perception that the best option for children’s further life is their pre- school experience, rather that the experience, which they gain in their teenage time. I believe that experience gotten / got / received at an early age does not have as much functionality and high value as experience gained at an older age.

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Increasing numbers of students are choosing to study abroad. To what extent does this trend benefit the students themselves and the countries involved? What are the drawbacks?

Nowadays, it is noticeable an increasing trend among students to study abroad. This phenomenon is related to the peculiarities of the young generation, which is very free and wants to expand its social connections, brain processes and worldview.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugars which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays many factories which apply food and beverages manufacture include numerous amount of sugar in the products. It leads to spreading health problems among the customers. Prices on this category of products should be raised to make a downward trend of popularity sugar products to society. I completely agree with this statement.

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You recently bought a digital camera. You discovered that it was damagend and some components were missing.

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing this letter with the crucial purpose of complaining about, for the past 14 days, I have been purchasing and using digital camera products.However, I am a photographer. For this reason, I want most important this device. Additionally, I'm interested in photographing nature. So I'm really enjoying it . Furthermore, I want to buy this photograph, this device worked for 10 days and 2 days of letter not work.

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Farming is the backbone of the country but nowadays many youngsters hesitate to enter this profession. Why is this the case?

For many countries the farming industry is a basis of the economy, but the younger generation doesn’t choose this profession and doesn’t have the passion to develop that industry and bring some innovation. In my opinion, there are two main problems which can be the causes of that tendency: the lack of information about future prospects in the industry and the small number of profile universities with those professional courses.

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Many old buildings are protected by law because they are part of nation's history. However, some people think old buildings should be knocked down to make way for new ones because people need houses and offices. How important is t to maintain old buildings

Nowadays , old building as bridge taking a part of countries budget and place , and this building is under monitoring in all time. A lot of people have strong believe that government should not take care about this historical Arcana because people want exploit this area to built what they need such as houses , stores and work offices. Therefore, this essay will argue why the national history important to the country and also how can low protected them .

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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following as media for communicating information. State which you consider to be the most effective. •comics •books •radio •television •film •theatre

Every things people do affect on their mind. When we watch, read or listen impact on our thinking. For example, books, television and theatre. All of they may chosen by different individals. So everyone has to be select what he or she show.

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In some countries, more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

There is no denying the fact that some people are so interesting in knowing the history about any place they live inside, in this essay I am going to discuss their expected reasons for doing this thing, and also talk about the ways they are able to use in order to find out the information they are seeking to know.

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Advertisments of snacks and toys have a great impact on children and their parents. So, the advertisement to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree

The line graph provides information about British people's consumption of three various fast food namely Hamburgers, Fish and chips and Pizza from 1970 to 1990.

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With the recent improvement to the internet, people can leave views or opinions on certain goods or services that they have purchased. Is it a good or bad thing. Discuss both views.

In the era of ever-evolving world, the advent of internet plays a pivotal role in every parts of our life. Now, the world is becoming a global village due to internet. Individuals often use internet at their own purposes. there are several pros and cons of using internet. In this essay, I will explore benefits and drawbacks of it in terms of online services and shoppings, and present arguments and examples to provide a comprehensive analysis.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, numerous countries face the issue of overpopulation. Interestingly, the age distribution has become disproportional, with youngsters being considerably higher in number compared to the elderly. Although there are positive and negative perspective regarding this matter, I strongly argue that its advantages outweigh the drawbacks.

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These days, people are living into their 90s and beyond. As a result, the is increasing concern about care for elederly. Do you think it is the responsibility of the family to care for their elderly member or government should be held responsible?

Technological advancements has made a great influnce in people lives as increase the life longetivity of individuals. Some people believe that family has the main rule of taking care older people , while some people think that the government should protect them. However,I firmly consider that the family typically is the best solution of taking care elderly individuals. In the following, I will illustrate more why I think the family should has the primary rule.

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computer are increasingly used in education in which areas do you think are computers more important in which areas are teachers more important

Nowadays, teachers and the education system are fundamental parts of society; however, some people claim that it is possible that computers and robots will take the place of humans. That is a paramount issue that is becoming a big education problem. A significant number of people possess this at their schools.

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