IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 228

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The data show significant changes in the proportion of international students among university graduates from different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.

he data show significant changes in the proportion of international students among university graduates from different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006. The most notable growth was in New Brunswick, where the proportion of international students increased from 7% to 12%, indicating the province's growing attractiveness to international students. Nova Scotia also experienced growth, exceeding 10% by 2006. Quebec, Alberta and British Columbia saw steady growth in international students. Manitoba and Newfoundland and Labrador, although showing lower percentages, still showed notable growth, reflecting the widespread quality of higher education in Canada. Ontario, although showing growth, is more modest, indicating a somewhat slower rate of growth in international student enrollment than the other provinces. Overall, the findings suggest a positive trend of increasing international diversity in Canadian universities.

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Some people believe that the time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe this may have negative effects on a child's development. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals perceive the time that children spend on television, video, and computer games are worth it, whereas others think that there are bad effects on their development. I believe, these type of medias provide a creative way to learn things, but this indeed affect their mental health also. This essay will discuss both views further and provide a concluding view.

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some university students want to learn about other subjetcs in addition to their main subjects. others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often said that it is necessary for university students to concentrate only on being high-qualified experts on their field; while others claim that they should learn extra subjects apart from principal subjects of their study. From my point of view, improving other skills in addition to main subject would be crucial for students.

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in a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these vlews and give your own opinion.

Citizens of some countries consider it should spend a large number of money on building high speed railways between cities, other think the money should spend on improving the existing public transportation systems. Some may say the high speed rail way is the most efficient way to get to another city, some says it is too costly.

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Many people use written language in a less formal and more relaxed way. Why? Does this development have advantages and disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

There are the large number of people who thinks that nowadays individuals prefer to use the language that is less formal and is in more relaxed form for their written message. However, there are several indiviuals that are not in favour of such writing practice. According to my points of view, I agree with former statement, which is expalined with some the relevant examples.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed, whereas, others feel that crucial scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments.

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Some people think that online reading materials are better for children. Others argues that traditional paper based resources are better. Discuss and give your opinion.

By the appearance of the innovation of online reading materials, the debate on whether the innovative reading materials or the traditional one will bring better learning outcome attract people's attention. From my perspective, the online reading materials are more recommendable.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles, plastic packaging are bad for the environment. what damade does plastic do to the environment? what can be done by governments and individuals to solve this problem?

Nowadays, most of the scientists’ research have been revealed that our world temperature rapidly increases because of the amount of trash and the pollution, therefore, the scientist attempt to revolution our society.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world.whybis this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

Nowadays, people are becoming more and more resourceful in a lot of things, such as generation of electricity through the source of sunlight. This has become trendy due to its clean, renewable, and abandunt source of power as well as it reduced the greenhouse gas emissions. This also promotes indepence and security as people does not need to depend on foreign imports and fossil fuels.

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The crime rates nowadays are decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?

Due to evolving technology, it is said that the amount of crimes have been lessened compared to the numbers we have in the past. I disagree with this notion, because with the number of killings and stealings that is happening at the moment around the world, no surveillance cameras and smartphones have evidently stopped these wrongdoings, in contrast in the past, it has gone to worse.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

Owning a home is more important than renting a house, In other countries, In my opinion, this is a positive situation that I will explain my own opinion. Nowadays, Bangkok in Thailand has most of condominiums than houses. Especially, the house was bought by wealthy people which is the reason why we have to rent a home or condominium by the way It is a high price to rent it including having to pay month by month must be more expensive than buying one time. Buying a home is much more comfortable than renting one because if you buy a house, you can do anything that you want for example you can rent a house for rent to gain money for do else’s business, On the other hand, if you renting a house you can’t do anything with your house and have to pay much of money including an interest payment if you pay late. It can be concluded the passage below is positive situation , that owning a home is much more comfortable including paying less than renting a place that also important fo...

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39.It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture. We can learn as much as from books, films and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that individuals do not need to travel around to acquire knowledge of cultures of other countries, since there are other resources such as book, films and the Internet where people can find information. This essay disagrees with this statement because the way of understanding is different and books and movies are subjective.

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Many young children have unsupervised accesss to the internet and are using the internet to socialise with others. This has can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision? How can these problems be solved?

Nowadays the underaged are allowed to have as much access to the internet as adults do and the social a media is becoming a tool for many young children to socialise with surroundings. But all these unsupervised access might lead to a situation that can endanger children's wellbeing.

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Trying to save endangered animal species from extinction is a waste of valuable resources. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The issue of attempting to preserve endangered species or not is a controversial one. Although the argument of some individuals that these animals bring about no usefull purpose and should let to die out as many others in the past (such as dinosaurs), my personal belief is that they should be protected. the two principal reasons for this issue is in the following.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is true that manufacturers have introduced their products as an innovation in their advertisements. While persuading customers to purchase their products can be the main reason, I would argue that it is highly detrimental to exaggerate the quality of products.

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The media is increasing interest in famous people who have ordinary backgrounds. Why do you think people are interested in the lives of famous people? Do you think this is a good thing?

It is an undeniable fact that over the past decades people have develop higher interests in celebraties social and family life. The reason behind this is numerous and while others opine its a good thing, other people suggest it is not important. I strongly believe its worth it and i will enumerate the reasons behind that in this essay.

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The use of smartphones is decreasing our collective intelligence because we are reliant on the technology not on our own minds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , with technology developed smartphones become butter and more smart than before . Therefore ,a lot of people start getting new phone to help them in business life as doing homework and doing full research. As a result for this the mindset for community becomes worst because they depends on the artificial intelligent. Also there are tremendous benefit from mobile phons.moreover, this essay will argue this statement and also will provide some example .

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Demand for food is increasing worldwide. What is the causes of this topic? What measures can be international community take to meet this demand?

In this contemporary era, there is a significantly increasing rate of food needs around the world. There is multiple reasons behind this dilemma, but the main culprit is the gradual population growth. However, the most effective solution to overcome this issue is to expand the agricultural areas and encourage the implantation.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making temperature higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperature rising?

Currently, the temperature are increasing frequently in all over the world by the human activity . Moreover some bossom evidence has been seen that it may causes harmful impact on the atmosphere. In this essay, I will intend to analyze a few reasons, such as, burning fossil fuels and deforestation in upcoming paragraphs.

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In the future all cars, busses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Technology evolves day by day and as a result of that many advanced features are adding to vehicles continuously. It predicts that in future there will be driverless vehicles such as cars, buses and trucks for the transport. However, there can be several vital drawbacks and in this essay; I will state that how advantages do not outweigh its disadvantages.

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