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In some countries, ordinary citizens are allowed to keep a gun in their houses. Some people think this is a good idea, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Whether the public should be entitled to own a gun or not is a topic of heated debate. Some people advocate for this idea, whereas others do not. This essay will discuss both opinions, and explain why I agree with the latter/former.
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People are responsible for their happiness. Others feel happiness depends on other factors in their life. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Issues related to the enjoyment are frequently discussed these days. Although some believe that people are responsible for their happiness, others criticize this and argue that happiness depends on other factors. In the following paragraphs, both sides of this statement will be discussed.
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Many people today find that the cost of attaining university level education is extremely high for student and their family, what are the cause of this situation and how can governments, Universities and the student themselves overcome the problem?

With passing time, more and more adolescents desire to study at university, however due to cost of studying as well as living, people suffer from them. The cause of this appear to be focused on two or three are, and a number of solutions, also appear to be possible.
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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To waht extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Many people are of the opinion that music can unification humans with various cultures and divergent generation together. I totally agree with this opinion due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
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Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent times, several people have had conflicts about whether employers have to obey the dress principles in office or the productivity of work is their priority. I strongly believe that people should concentrate on the quality of their work completely instead of their dress, and this essay serves to elaborate on my opinion.
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It is recommended that traditional market be phased out and replaced by supermarket and e-commerce. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

There is an argument that traditional market will be predicted in the future which will be took over by supermarket and e-commerce. In this topic, I strongly agree, as I suppose that there are two reasons related to this issue, which I will state in the following paragraphs.
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Parents should encourage children to spend less time in studies and more time in physical activities. To what extent do you agree?

There are two different views of the people if children should invest more time in eduaction or in outdoor activities. In my opinion , i support both sides as it is equally important in an individual's life.
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addiction to the internet is a widespread problems. what problems does this causes? what is a suitable solution

A worrisome trend has emerged with regards to people who are addicted to the internet. This issue leads to the increased obesity and mental health problems become worsening. A useful solution should be prioritised is addicts should be cut back on the amount of using social media and replace by having some hobbies such as reading books, hanging out with friends.
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Parents should encourage chuldren to soend less time in studies and more time in physical activities. To what extent do you agree?

No one can deny that guardians should encourage their kids to spend little hours in studying and much more time in physical exercise . I agree with this notion because today's learners spend more time on their studies and not spend a their day on activities. I will discuss this in the upcoming paragraphs.
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Museums and art galleries should charge admission fees. Do you think the advantages of charging for admission outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, visiting historical places such as museum is popular among societies, although there are opinions about the admission fees. It is right for museums and art galleries to charge entry. I belive that benefits do outweight the drawbacks.
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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Nowadays, plastic, polythin and glass like weste products are main cause to environment pollution. Most of the householders not return these products to recycle, poeple think if there is a law regading recycle they will do it in a proper manner. I strongly believe we should have proper recycle prossece to overcome this problem and protect our environment. Therefore, I agree with impliment of legal method for this.
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In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

It is broadly believed that university education ought to provides free of charge tuition for everyone. Although I support this view, somehow, I assume that this could be pletorah problems if each university apply this impractical view due to the government should take the burden. Therefore, there should be a criteria for those who could get this benefit and the reasons will be elaborated on this following essay.
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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from home is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governaments to make it a legal requirement To what extend do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Globally waste management is facing critical issues. Some argue that waste from home is not required to be recycled, and they force the government to make the process legal. I think that the food waste have to be separated and recycled in family will reduce the burden of the government.
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Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources,whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a vital part of education.Discuss both these view and give your opinion.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is sports in a academy is a waste of time,but others believe that sport is a pivotal part of education.It is undeniable that sport has become an essential part of our life.However,there is no absolute agreement on whether physical education should be in school programmes or not.
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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some would argue that homeschooling has more advantages than sending a child to school. I believe both have advantages and disadvantages to both methods of schooling.
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32.Air travel can only benefit the richest people in the world. Ordinary people have little to gain from the development of air travel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that travelling by air is only advantageous for wealthy individuals and not for normal people. This essay disagrees with this statement because there are cheap tickets and it increases employment.
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31.Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people?

It is claimed that citizens do not visit local musems nor historical sites, instead, mainly people from others countries will go to these places. This essay will argue that this is because of the different interests and carry out some activities can attract local individuals.
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30.In some countries many young people choose to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

It is said that in some nations, students after ending high school will take a gap year for travelling or working. The main benefits of this are gaining work experience and expanding knowledge; however, the key drawbacks are people may stop studying and think that university is not important.
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Some people think it would be a good idea for schools to teach every young person how to be a good parent. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Describe the skills a person needs to be a good parent.

Teaching is a main part of educational system which somebodies belive that parentig should be a part of that. Many parents these days are young and do not have useful information about children and their needs so I agree with teaching parenting in platform tutorial.
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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, we are living in a world a lot of technology and this is causing changes. Some people are moving to cities because for them is more comfortable and useful, there are more things such as monuments and shops. Unfortunately, the population in the countryside is decreasing and this could create both positive and negative developments such as the creation of new places of work and so on. In this essay, I will explain why in the future there will be some advantages and I will explain my points of view.
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