IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 322

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible. What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

In many countries around the world, it is common to start going to school at 6 six or 7 seven years old. Some people think that these are this is a reasonable ages for children to start their education life, while those who disagree point out that commencing going to school earlierly gives children many advantagesis more advantageous for children. In my opinion, it is more beneficial to for children to start their school at the suggested day when they are slightly older because only at that age one’s are they cognitively is mature enough to receive formal education. On the one hand, some people argue that children should go to school as soon as possible because it helps to set their development their development of young ones in on the right track right at from the beginning, while which staying at home and playing does not offer. For example, at school, a professional teacher can identify and teach children how to playing games that are appropriate to develop their literacy and num...

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people that lives in 21st century have better quality life than people lived in previous time. Agree or disagree.

I completely agree that people are well off today compared to life in earlier centuries.I will support this statement and provide my reason for supporting the argument.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days public discussion has been going on over whether the producers and the supermarkets have greater control to reduce the quantity of packaging of goods while others believe it is the responsibility of the consumers to stop buying goods with a lot of packaging . From my own perspective I believe the producers ,the supermarket have greater responsibly than consumers in the packaging of goods .

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary problems should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Generally, it has been discovered that most manufactured food and drink products contain an elevated level of sugar in them which causes numerous health challenges. I support the notion on increasing the prices of sugary products to encourage people to build healthy lifestyle based on two reasons. Firstly, research shows people with high sugar intake are more susceptible to diabetic mellitus. Also, they have severe migraine in their 50s and above.

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Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some people are of the notion that manufacturers and supermarkets should bring down the cost involved in the packaging of goods whereas, others believe consumers should flee from goods that has so much packaging. Although, I believe packaging attracts the buyers to buy more, it however is a choice and customers should avoid goods that costs more.

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List of causes and effects of global warming. Often that might slow or stop the problem associated with him.

Global warming is unusually rapid increase in the temperature on the earth. The main reason for global warming is human activities such as deforestation and the burning of fissile fuels that have detrimental effects on the the ecosystem.

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Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of lower positions in the same company. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that senior employees get well-paid salaries compared to other workers in the same company. I completely agree with this idea becouse every worker should be paid a large amount of money to their own task. In this essay, I will discuss why employees who work in the same place earn different amount of money than others. The essay will be provided with relevant answers and examples.

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Instructions Read the question below and write an opinion essay. Remember to write down a clear thesis statement followed by your essay plan. Only then attempt to write this essay. Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth rather than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To What extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, top stars who are in the field of acting they are very conscious about their buety, Moreover, they are concentrating on their remuneration rather than their succeeding goals which impact on youngsters who admire them. I this forthcoming eassy. I shall discuss my thoughts why iam agreeing with above statement.

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Topic1 Problems and solutions Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is irrefutable that currently young generation are pressurized by serious difficulties in terms of communal, educational and commercial as well as. This essay intends to analyze cause of these issues and suggest some measure to alleviate the trouble

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Technology is becoming progressive universal .In the fullness of time classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology.Do you agree or disagree.

In today's world, technology has greatly increased that in due time classroom will be replaced by artificial intelligence robot.I disagree that classroom tutors should be replaced with computer because artificial intelligence robot cannot instill displicine and this will also learning to be boring and less interactive.The use of computer will further allow student to lack focus and directions toward their curriculum.This point will be further explained with relevant examples in the subsequent paragraphs and with logical conclusion.

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There has been an increase in the use of technology globally and some said teacher last will be replaced by technology in the classroom.Do you agree or disagree

There has been an increase in the use of technology globally, and many predicted that teachers may be replaced by Robots in the classroom. I strongly disagree to this because it’s going to cause unemployment for many teachers and would increase the rate of indiscipline among students.This essay will explicate these with relevant examples and a logical conclusion.

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Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

Introduction.It is indisputable that most of parents are taking care of to their children for their future.However this situation is causing to lots of problems and pressures.This essay intends to analyze the causes of these problems which are connecting to academic popular and commercial approach and suggest some measures to alleviate the issue.

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Problems and solutions Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is indisputable that most of parents are taking care of to their children for their future.However this situation is causing to lots of problems and pressures.This essay intends to analyze the causes of these problems which are connecting to academic popular and commercial approach and suggest some measures to alleviate the issue.

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than continual assessment.What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as form of assessment?

In recent years, the approach of using examinations to assess students has risen in popularity ocer the alternative continual assessment. This essay will outline both the advantages and disadvantages that result from such an approach.

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"Nowadays it is noticed that cultural mixing is reflected within local cultural practices. Do you think it is good for our society?"

Cultural mixing is a positive attitude, which is adopted by people from different nations or countries .From my ,perspective it is the best way to know about other communities.

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Your friend has been offered a place on a course at the university where you studied. He/she would like your advice about finding a place to live. Write an email to your friend. In your email, describe where you lived when you were a student at the university recommend the best way for him/her to look for accommodation warn him/her of mistakes students make when choosing accommodation

It was great hearing from you. Congratulations! On securing a seat in Computer Engineering at my university. I understand you need suggestions related to renting a place and I'm happy to help you. While studying, I lived in the campus hostel and it was a great experience. In a single room, four people used to reside with each having a personal bed and a cupboard. There was a hostel mess where breakfast, lunch, snacks, and dinner was served and it was included in the admission fees. I am aware you are looking for a place to live alone, however, I would advice you to live near the college campus.

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“Government should spend money on railway rather than roads. To what extend do you agree or disagree?”

The importance of improving railway over roads which was debatable has now become more controversial with many people claimimg that it is beneficial, while other reject this notion. Both railway and roads are essential aspects for citizens in the country. Althought roads are important and many people in society use their car daily, but i believe that railway help much more residents in the cites

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ln some countries celebrities complain about the way media publicize their private lives. Some people say that they should accept it as part of their fame, Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, exposing the privacy is subjective matter, but the new reporters are intrigued to publicise the renowned personalities. However, famous individuals from various nation criticise the journalists for their involvement but other school of though reckons is as complementary. This essay shall delve into narrating the critical aspect of this notion.

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Most people pay taxes to contribute to the development of their country, however, some think they have other responsibilities rather than paying taxes. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

There is still debate regarding the contribution of taxes to the country's development. While some people believe that taxes is very crucial, yet, others feel that considering other' responsibilities is more important that paying any taxation. There are arguments on both sides, however which we will discuss here.

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Some people believe that competitive sports, both team and individual, have no place in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Physical education is always every student’s favorite subject. Students view PE as the most relaxing and active subject because they will play sports during the lessons. Many people think that there is no room for sports in the school curriculum and it is a fact that most schools still priorities other subjects, activities more than sports. In my perspective, every student should choose a sport which they are interested in to play and it can be accounted as an extra curriculum activity.

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