IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 323

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Some people believe that violence on television and in comouter games has a damaging effect on society. Others deny that these factors have any significant affect on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

In today's world a lot of vilonce can be witnessed in computer games or on television some people argue that these virtual violence can have a damaging effect on the society while on the other hand some believe that these factors doesn't have any significant influence on people's behaviour. I belive that the violence on television and in computer games does effect behaviour of the people and effect the society to some extent.

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The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress . To what extent do you agree or disagree. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience.

The most irrelevant purpose of music to individuals is helping in decreasing Apprehensiveness caused by our daily activities.

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Pie chart showing different jobs and salaries of Anthropology graduands in the past five years. Analyse the table and write on the important points

The pie chart depicts the diverse employment status of Anthropology graduands, while the table shows their different monthly income spread across five years as measured in percentages.

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The internet has transformed the way information is shared and consumed, but it has also created problems that did not exist before. What are the most serious problems associated with the internet and what soluitons can you suggest?

In the contemporary world, the internet has improved in the different way and a lot of information is sharing which has resulted in severeal issues. In this essay, which problems have existed and how it can be solved.

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4.Please provide three practical and realistic examples of how you intend to use the knowledge, skills and connection you will gain from your scholarship on your return to Indonesia. Possible tasks can be personal and/ or professional

I intend to implement my experience as a Master of Education in Australia to improve the digital learning curriculum in my current work as an educator. I believe in-depth knowledge, skills, and connection that I will gain will benefit me, my organization, and the institution that I cooperate with. I will do some practical ways:

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In the future,nobody will buy printedpaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Newspapers were the major spurce of information for people world wide over several decades.On other hand, electronic materials are more polular mostly among your generations with the advancement of technology.

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nformation technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benifits of IT outweigh the disadvantages.

I agree with the fact that information and Technology are changing many aspects of our lives and now dominate our home, leisure and work activities. Technology in recent times has developed so much that it has made human life much easier than we think . I think IT has more benefits than disadvantages

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Some people think that to learn a second language well it is necessary to live in the country where that language is spoken.What is your opinion about this?

Some people think that it is a good way to learn a second language in the country where that language is spoken. I am convinced that it is important to learn a language in its motherland because of the fact that improvement will be very fast and also pronunciation will be right.

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People who live in large cities face a range of problems people in their daily life . What are the main problems people in cities face and how can these problems be tackle ?

Some people believe that the living in a large city can be factor which affect on local area while this trend has several certain problems i suppose that there are some solutions for this problems.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction

These days we live in modern society so community should have nobel behavior and it is important for children to gain the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to un bringing them. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of the modern society. some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community to create a better world to live in to what extent do you agree or disagree

The article states that increasing taxes on cigarettes purchases and unhealthy food is beneficial and helpful for the government and provides three reasons for support.However, the professor explains that this increase will lead to many problems that, definitely, will affect the government negatively and refutes each of the author's reasons.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays there are a lot of interesting games, films and video clips,… posted on some network foundation like Youtube, Pop kids and Netflix,… Therefore, some children are attracted by those things and they waste hours everyday on their tablet and their phone to enjoy it. I think this is negative activity. The harm of using smartphones excessively are discussed in this essay.

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he first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Transportation is one of the most important and required things in life. Before the year 1888 there were no cars available within the British streets, however, once the first car appeared, the production started increasing notoriously. Arriving in the year 2000, there were approximately 29 million automobiles on the roads. Regardless of the many benefits of these types of vehicles, it is suggested to use different media to transport. Even though an automobile is the easiest way for moving around the city, people should start considering other options.

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Today many people do not know their neighbours, why is this? What can be done about this?

Nowadays, people are no longer friendly within their neighbourhood owing to the fact that no one knows who is trustworthy and as a result , people decide to mind their own business.For instance, sometimes ago, In my previous neighbourhood, some law enforcement agents came to arrest some guys based on information that they were

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The world should have only one government rather than a national govenment for each country. Do the advantages of this outweight the disadvatages?

Advantages and disadvatages of having one international raining government rather than having a variaty of national governments each with their own laws and system, on one hand, some belive that it would be better if we hd just one governig body, however, others belive that this would lieave no place for difering opinions and culture.

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It is becoming increasingly popular to have a year off between finishing school and going to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays, having a gap year after high school is trendy among students before attending their universities. While this offers a few advantages, there are also some disadvantages which are worth considering.

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The number of indigenuos tribes living traditional lives in the world's rainforests is decreasing. Within a few decades the last of these indigenuos tribes may have disappeared forever. What are the causes of this problem and what can be done to prevent it from happening?

The swarm of traditional people who are insistently continue living in jungles is diminishing as time goes by. There has been a sharp drop in the amount of their regions. In this essay, I will look at the reasons for this and propose some solutions.

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Some people are of the view that only university education can ensure success, whereas many others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Academic study can be avouch of success. In this essay, I will attempt to outline both Ideas and provide my perspective .when people study at a , all academic university they will have More discipline and people will respect them more and after that they will have a job that maybe they can earn money from when people respect you you may have more options to work and earn money after that when you’re educated from a higher level university you'll find job and people will give you more positions to work. When you are spending your time on a purpose and a goal life will be more add visible and you can leave your life and take your time better then the person that doesn't go to college or doesn't have university degrees after studying at university you can find it more easy to find what you love and how you want to spend your time and how you want to earn money.

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Some people believe that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way. Do you agree or disagree?

In Britain, when people are being taken care of in nursing homes where many nurses and care givers are serving them. It is difficult to decide whether all those running costs are being incurred by the government or the family. It depends on the country’s political policy. Everyone must pay taxations for the living. The government must decide how to allocate their tax into respective transactions. So that when people retire, they can have their own entitlement when they are not able to make money. On the other hand, people with families deserve to be cared for by family regardless of financial obligation. The family should be supported to old age in the means of mental obligation. Old people sometime may think that they become useless unless family supports them. From my point of view, it is good that the government has a strategy to provide a live plan to secure their people till end of their time. Not just because of political policy, it is because of giving them back wh...

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting renting one is very important for people. Why might ths be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Nowadays Vehicles become integral part in peoples’ daily life in British. International laws should be implemented to control the usage of vehicles and ownership . I would agree people should not rely on their own vehicle it may become high usage of patrols and high rate of CO2 emissions and pollution . I believe developing more public transports and using alternate transports to facilitate public transportation will reduce usage of vehicles in term of public buses , trains , Private Ferry ( School Buses) and so on. If public transportation running smooth and good in facilities , people will prefer to take public transports so that they not need to worry about parking fees and parking locations. In addition, peoples can minimise their daily costs like petrol expenses , parking fees and vehicles repairs costs. In addition , government can control usage of vehicles by increasing of vehicle taxations or limit the patrol usage for each vehicle or restrict buying vehicles by t...

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