IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 325

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

A curfew have been imposed in some of the regions of the US, due to high alert surveillance enterance of teenagers in such places has been prohibited post the sunset.However, if nesessary they can move oustside in the night with the company of an elder person.I completely agree with the decision and this essay will dictate the pointers to support the statement. Initially, youngsters who age below 18 years are considered as the soft targets who could be manipulated easily. Moreover, this is because they lack experience to judge people around them.Additionally, they can be threatened or misbehaved easily from any stranger. For instance, a study showed that teens who age under seventeen year are soft hearted, which is why they can be easily fooled in certain ways form any mature person with bad intentions. Secondly, plethora of youth are getting indulge into bad practices such as consumption of drugs, alcohol and betting as well. furthermore, It can be a wise thing to keep th...

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people consider the significance of maintaining hygiene at their house as well as their workstations ,,Moreover such individuals prefer everything to be arranged in a suitable place.I entirely agree with this idea as this habit can positively affect a body's character. To begin with, Indulging neat habits in one's lifestyle can help human beings to create discipline in their lives.Furthermore, which supports the in better their personal and professional journeys. For instance, a guy with a mindset to keep things sorted out carry a go-getter attitude in life. Also, they hardly procrastinate in finishing up the given assignment,and work towards achieving their goals.However, it is not always necessary that a man who keeps their environment tidy always succeed but it provides them with better clarity to finish the day-to-day project effectively. Secondly, It also reflects how much reliable you are as a body when handling important functions, such individuals are mostly a...

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Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People believe that it can be more harmful to use a computer for every day than beneficial effects on our children. I completely agree with this idea. There are less positive effects than negative ones using computers for children. In this essay I will discuss why using computers can be dangerous every day for our children and provide relevant answers to the question.

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Some cities create housing for their growing population by providing taller buildings. Other cities create housing by building on wider areas of land. Which solution is better?

In the recent years the increasing population has been a major concern for all the countries. Both solutions has it's own advantages but as per what I think in the above situation building taller buildings would be a better solution.

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Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Student's regularly learning english language than their native language specially in school. In my perspective, people have the right to choose what language they are interested to speak or to learn.

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where i want to live it is perfect to live do you agree or disagree

Every person has a dream place to live, the same as I do.My target country is USA.

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While mobile phones have many advantages, a number of problems have also resulted from them or the way in which they are used. What are some of these problems? What solutions can you suggest for solving these problems?

Even though, mobile phones have many benefits, there are some resulting problems because of using phones that cannot be ignored. In this essay, I will outline some of the reasons that have contributed to this problems as well as some solutions.

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the pictures show the changes of a park from 1980 to present day

The maps show changes in the layout of a park between 1980 and the present. In general, the park is now more accessible and has several new facilities to serve different recreational demands of the public.In 1980, there was one pathway running through the park from the west gate to the south gate. A number of trees were located in the northeast, and flowers were planted along the south wall. There was also a pond with several benches around it situated on the eastern side of the park. Between 1980 and now, the path was removed and replaced with a new path which leads to all four sides of the park, and essentially divides it into four different areas. In the south western corner, the pond and benches are still intact, but the flowers in that area have been replaced with bushes. A new picnic area with tables and a barbecue grill has been set up in the northeastern corner, while the southeastern corner is now a dedicated playing field.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disgaree with this opinion ?

Overconsumption of fast foods have been resulting in detrimental health problems, for example, diabetes, obesity and high blood pressure. There are myriad of reasons for this, which include excessive oils and sodium. However, many people still turn a blind eye to this concerning issue and I believe the government should take necessary action by imposing higher tax on fast foods.

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The goverment is spending a lot of money to discover life on other planets. Some people think that the goverment is wasting money and should spend money addressing the problem of public.

Nowadays the space and the exploration of the other planets are one of the most popular research topic. Famous componies and governments are investing money to support the technology and everybody believe that they will find some new useful things. For example a new place where we can live. It seem to be a good business with a enourmos benefit but like in every risky things it is possible that at the end we will realize that the whole process was a wasting money. I agree that we have problems int he Earth which are important and necessery to solve them. For instance in the developing countries develope health care, stop starvation and globally is to protect the enviorment. Other hand the space reserches are helpful to modernized our life and invent new technology tools or discover now things. My opinion is that we can spend money to both of them in the same time. The constantly growing population require to find new place where we can live because our planet has a space- ...

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Some people say that e- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some men say that online book apps and new gadgets replace simply newspapers and magazines. I totally agree with this statement . Because this is a century of innovations .

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Individuals think that gaining knowledge of another language, is very significant go to on vacation abroad or trying to set a career in a foreign country. Besides, other people believe that there are also some reasons to learn a different country's language. I will discuss both scenarios and give my opinion. People tend to learn a foreign language to travel to various countries and get another region's job. When they choose a foreign country for spend their quality time, they have to communicate with people in English or their local language. Otherwise,we may face several issues interacting with them. Such as if people go abroad for enjoying holidays and suddenly they need any important things from their hotel authorities, they will not properly express their demanded products in the receptionist. AS well as some people have a goal to work out of the country. For them English is a mandatory language to learn.For example, those who are willing to establish their work l...

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reason for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

Living close to the birthplace is prioritizes by large number of people. There are enormous reasons to support their decision along with some pros and cons. This essay will shed light on it.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam”. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

There is a rapid increase in number of users for cars as their daily drive for the past three decades which most cities around the globe does affect with huge traffic jams. In this essay, we can see how true the above statement is and, how the governments prevent from these problems.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

Technology has changed almost all aspects of our life and the most common is how we communicate with each other. Because of the inventions of the internet and social media, we can talk to anyone who lives anywhere in the world. This essay will discuss how the internet has made our long-distance relationships enabled, and social media makes us able to find new friends. I think that this is a positive development because it makes our relationships stronger and possible across the globe, and allows us to work from home.

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People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulites of modern life. Some read, some exercise, others work in their gardens. What do you think is the best way of reducing stress.

Nowadays, our life so complex and rude and everybody suffer from the everyday stress. Many individuals try to find solution how to reveal stress and feel better mentally and even physically. There are a lot of resolutions of this problem. As well as , everyone I have this difficult to. So in this essay I will further examine this thought-provoking issue.

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Governments should be responsible for funding and controlling scientific research rather than private organizations.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Scientific inquiry and development will play a crucial role in any nation's growth indeed. So, the local government must be more responsible for funding and controlling exploration activities than private organizations. I do agree with this statement due to various reasons.

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Many working people get littel exercise or no exercise either during the worikng day or in their free time and ha health problems as a result. -Why do so many working people not get enought exercise? -What can be done about this problem? Give answer + include any relevant example.

Nowaday we live an unhealthy and lazy lifestyle because we use a car so it is not necerssery to walk and we can buy premade food or fast food which are ready to eat. Burn less energy and eat much more calori so the balance is disappeard and this is the reason why the percentage of the obesity is growing int he world. On the typical working days the workers, studients and pupils get up really early and generally finish their day after 8 hours work. After their job they need to do other tasks like go to the supermarket or posta, if we see the children they have extra lesson after the school. The time is really late we they arrive to home and it is logical that they are tied so they haven’t got energy to go to the gym or do some exercise at home. Most of the people in there free time watch TV and order some food or go to a restaurant or bar where they meet with ther frinds or family. So they havent’t got extra 2 or 3 houre and extra energy to do some sports. Few years ago I ...

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Some people think that governments should provide more money on faster means of public transport, while others think that they should pay attention to more important priorities such as spending money and the environment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

There are great number of government’s accountabilities for society. Some people claim that investing funds on rapid public transportation could be one of the fundamental aspects of its duty to deal with. However, others argue that they should focus on more desperate parts in need for society. On the one hand, providing more money on rapid transport has a significant benefit for the citizens. For instance, faster public transport facilitates them to save their commuting time especially during rush. Although, current transport systems are well established in most of urban areas, it still needs to be developed outskirts of cities in particular. Despite densely populated in these areas interval time between metropolitan buses is infrequent than its demands. It ultimately causes a severe shortage of transportation for them. Thus, rapid public transport enables the residents to reach their destinations without any delays. Moreover, it could be considered as a fea...

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

Some countries choose to do a specialised facilities for certin athletes instead of providing it for everyone, I cant really choose my opinion cause if i was an athlete i wouldn't want untrained people to come to my place and injur there self, If i was a normal teenager i'd want to go and visit places like that.

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