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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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university students are increasingly study abroad as part of their studies. do the advantages of studying abroad out weigh the disadvantages.

I am writing this letter about an Apple hardware failure. A few days ago, your company delivered an office laptop to me. At first, this laptop worked fine without any incidents. After some time, I found out that this laptop was faulty, as it began to fail, quickly discharged, the keyboard buttons were poorly pressed and the touch mouse also did not work from time to time. As a result of these problems, my productivity, communication decreased, more time was spent on work, and I had to work more with papers. You stated that you provide a four-year warranty on this laptop. Because of these problems, I decided to contact your company, hoping that you will pay attention to this and take action. And I would like you to take into account all these shortcomings, exchange me for another new laptop or return the money. In case of refusal to exchange or refund money, I will sue your company. I think you don't want t...

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Some people say that death penalty is a useful tool for those whoo committed violent crimes. Other people say that tdeath penlaty is uncaccptable in today’s socity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that the death sentence is reasonable in modern society for cruel crimes, such as mass murder or terrorism, whereas others claim it to be excessively cruel punishment. This essay will discuss both points of view regarding this problem

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Some people believe that it is important to spend a lot of money on family celebration while others think it is a waste of money.DiScuss both views

Celebration seems as a festival because of the way they are performed and a way of bringing people together.majority believe that it is paramount to spend lavishly on a family celebration while others believes otherwise.This essay will discuss both views and my notion.

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According to an international travel magazine, many tourists today fly straight to their holiday resort and almost never leave it. Unlike tourist in the 1960s and 70s, they return home with no experience of the local culture. Why do you think this happen? How was tourism different in the past?

Instead staying numerous days and socializing with some natives, there is a new trend which makes a number of tourists nowadays just visit straightly to their destinations. There are some plausible reasons behind this which will be elucidated in the following paragraphs. Additionally, the comparation from the past condition on tourist ecosystem will be given later.

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Some people fear that technology is gradually taking over control our lives while other think that it has led to many positive developments in all aspects of their life.

It is undoubtedly true that advancement is growing at an alarming pace. The majority of individuals ponder that technology is taking control from human hands to their hands. Others believe that technology proves a boon to complete human requirements. As far as I am concerned I am in the favour of latter notion. This essay will discuss both aspects in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

These days, more and more people from diffrent societies, prefer to travel and discover new places. Some of the places have dangerous and difficult conditions for living, like the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. The goal of this essay to explain some advantages and drawbacks.

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The process diagram details the steps by which liquid chocolcate is produced from cocoa beans.

The diagram explains the procedure of creating liquid chocolate from cocoa beans.

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Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that spending money on wildlife protection is pointless because we humans do not need them. I cannot entirely agree with this point of view.

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In many part of the world , families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or more disadvantages to be part of large family in the past?

Family is an essential place where children can live , grow and continue their growth. In the past it was a common view that a family had about ten or twelve children. I think there must be some benefits to have as large as the family in the past. In many countries , living together with more than five or ten children was a popular status in a society for most parents in the past.Some parents thought that the more children they had the more fortunes and happiness would come.However , sharing things with large family sometimes had not brought a pleasure for a child.There will be a crisis in maintaining everyone needs and also overcrowding does affect globally. The parents have to earn more money to feed a big group. and also to have a good lifestyle.Therefore, children who stayed with this family were reared to enjoy their quality of life. ...

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In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the past, extended family had a lot of children. In that family, all the siblings were kind and loyal to each other. The reason I am saying that is because my old grandparents came from extended family. In this essay, I will discuss positive aspects and negative sides.

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Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the present era, money plays a significant role in human activity.It is argued that earned cash ought not to pay to authorities instead it should be kept with oneself, while others argue that it should be paid to the state . I agree to some extent and this essay will discuss both views.

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IELTS WRITING TASK 1: PROCESS THE PRODUCTION OF BEER

These pictures demonstrate the typical process of beer production. Overall, there are ten stages in the given diagram, beginning with gathering malt and culminating in beer bottling. The first step is that the malt is gathered and after that is put into a milling machine where it undergoes the grinding procedure. Once the malt has been milled, mashing process begins, during which grounded malt is turned into a soft unshaped substance that is usually called ‘mash’ in brewing. Following that, the derived mash goes through the lautering stage. At this point, water is used for the purpose of filtering. Already filtered pulp is then boiled for some hours, after that it is flavoured with hops. In the subsequent stage, the hot liquid that is going to become real beer must be brought down to a lower temperature before the fermentation process starts. Only after cooling down to the necessary level, this product is fermented, and then a brewer transfers the fresh beer into a special ...

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

There are two differing views on choosing an appropriate career. Some people are of the opinion that earning a high income is a much more paramount consideration than have sense of satisfaction with their job. Some others attach more importance to being satisfied with one’s career. However, I disagree with the first group and arguing that mere have a high salary cannot guarantee success at work. In the first place, statistics show that a majority of people quit their job not because their salary is low but because they lack of job satisfaction. This was true of me, despite the fact that I failed to have a high income in my previous job, I was successful because I was passionate about my job, and that leaded to desirable results. Moreover, eminent executives in business world take the view that employees enjoying a positive outlook on their career are more likely to achieve higher success irrespective of the one’s salary. Furthermore, the concerns that stressful and ardu...

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A big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

There are two differing views on choosing an appropriate career. Some people

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Nowdays people began to think,is freedom of speech vital on free society? There almost 8 billion people in the world, and unfortunately not everyone has the right to freedom of speech. In many underdeveloped countries , in there society there is no concept of freedom of speech, they under dictatorship of one “ruler”. In this essay , I would like to consider my point of view about freedomof speech.

Nowdays people began to think,is freedom of speech vital on free society? There almost 8 billionpeople in the world, and unfortunately not everyone has the right to freedom of speech. In many underdeveloped countries , in there society there is no concept of freedom of speech, they underdictatorship of one “ruler”. In this essay , I would like to consider my point of view about freedom of speech.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the importance of freedom in society.Now people are beginning to realize that where there is no freedom there is no justice.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is the importance of freedom in society.Now people are beginning to realize that where there is no freedom there is no justice. Personally,I tend to think that the freedom of speech affects on evolving of society.

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many people no longer read newspapers or watch tv programmes . instead they get news about the world from the internet . is this a positive or negative developments.

There is no denying fact that the phenomena of most of the masses in this modern world do not spend time on reading newspaper or wathing tv news programmes .However, they get national or international news from internet via social media such as instagram , facebook etc. It is ubiquitous across the globe due to its importance . Majority of statements due to its number of merits . However some of the people highlights its demerits first . In my further paragraphs , advantages and disadvantages of the same will be discussed.

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many people no longer read newspapers or watch tv news programmes . instead they get news about the world from the internet . is this a positive development ?

There is no denying fact that the phenomena of most of the masses in this modern world do not spend moment on reading newspapers or watching tv news programmes .However, they get national or international news from the internet via social media such as Instagram, Facebook etc. It is ubiquitous across the globe due to its importance . Majority of statements are due to their number of merits . ,However some of the people highlight its demerits first . In my further paragraphs, the advantages and disadvantages of the same will be discussed.

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Some people believe that social media platform have a negative impacts. And some people argue that social media have a positive influence. In my opinion I do not completely agree social media have negative impacts, and the following examples will be provide information support my point of view.

Social media have a negative impacts and positive impacts. People can use social media platform to harm another people and then, they can post a negative contents such as sex contents drug contents on their Facebook or Twitter For example In twitter has too many accounts to make a porn video and then, they can make money following by people are under 18 years old can access to negative accounts on twitter. As a result every government in global should make a new law to control social media platform.

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Earlier technological developments were more beneficial and changed the lives of the ordinary people than recent technology ever will. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is argued that in the past, technologies were developed and they were more handy than today's ones, Moreover they affected common people's life. I agree with this idea because technology evolution impacted widely people's life in the past. The essay will be discussed how to change and be useful for individuals' life than today's.

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