IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 329

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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In many parts of the world, it is common for one parent to stay at home and raise a new born child while the other works full-time to earn money. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

In this modern era, parents are more flexible to do some activities, apart from raising their children, they could also work to earn money. By doing those responsibilities, there are some advantages and disadvantages which would emerge. I will discuss it in this essay.

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Overpopulation in urban areas has led to numerous problems. write problems of overpopulation and suggest solutions government and individuals can take to tackle this problem

Population growth has been accerelated by many factors, including decreased infant mortality rate and extended life span. This growed population has brought about huge negative impacts to metropolises, such as environmental degradation and unaffordable houses. I will propose some actions which can be enforced by governments and individuals.

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It is better for people to be unemployed than being employed with a job they do not enjoy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is thought that being employed with a compelling and undesirable job worse than being unemployed in terms of individuals. I mostly disagree with this suggestion because for those who are being jobless have more problems in terms of psychological and economical in comparison to the rest.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

It is argued that risk is a vital thing in people's vocational lives and also their private lives. I completely agree with the idea that everybody should take some risks to develop their life. There are a number of reasons why I believe individuals have to take risks in every paths of their life and it has some positive consequences. One possible reason is that if we take risk, we will gain perseverance and patience. When we take a work, we know that it has uncertainty . We have to do the work again and again for fixing it as lifelong . For example, the king Robert Bruce could not win his war at a time that is why he left the war and then he saw a spider which tried to make a spin which was trying again and again and after six times attempts the spider did it. After seeing it, he understood that he had to be patient for his victory.. another reason is that it helps to remove fear. If we pass our life through the fearless, we can not take this risks. Moreover, we have to be stron...

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A group of people believes that guardians should teach children.How to be an ideal member of society, whilst other experienced people think that school is the best place to teach every newborn.This essay intends to elucidate both the perspectives before reaching and opinion.

It is generally acknowledged that children shoud be taugh by their parents more than teachers in schools how to be living in society as a great one. This essay will elaborate on different lessons that children could be learned from home and school, including support opinions on these perspectives.

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Some opine that the proliferation of sugary drinks are appearing recently. This essay will analyze both reasons and provide solutions to this problem

There are several reasons why people require more sugary drinks. In terms of working, the highly competitive circumstances in working hours keep on inspiring workers to continue contributing for the company, so employees' consumption for surgery drinks to acquire energy is constantly increasing over the period. For example, Masan consumer company produce an energy called 247, which provide the workers a surplus amount of energy to work overtime, causing employees to consume the product daily. Furthermore, the addiction of sugar-based products may result other individuals buy mass amount of soft drinks, causing people to become reliable to the sugar product.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, many have argued over whether kids in different ages should have bigger responsibilities at their houses or workplaces or if it is better to enjoy their time after classesfor them to do what they want in their leisure time. In this essay I am going to examine the question from both points sides and explain why I believe that children must be encouraged to work.

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A group of people believes that guardians should teach children.How to be an ideal member of society, whilst other experienced people think that school is the best place to teach every newborn.This essay intends to elucidate both the perspectives before reaching and opinion.

Education plays an important role in children's lives while growing up, not only intellengently but also mentally. Some people believe that parents should be resposible to educate their kids, while others think that school is the ideal place for them to learn. This essay will address both sides and give my opinion.

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The process below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below. Write at least 150 words.

the diagram illustrates the process by which drinking water is produced by a solar-powered water pump and water filter.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend to you agree or disagree with this statement ?

Language barriers are the most noticeable one when it comes to learning other languages. Align with that, using a non-native language as part of our necessity as a human being could contribute to either social problems or practical problems. In my point of view, I do really agree that speaking a foreign language in a country can lead to some serious social problems and practical problems as well.

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The retoration of old building in major cities in the world involves a lof of government expenditiures. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

The phenomenon of the government spending a lot of money to restore historical constructions has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as people's views on this issue in question may be, I personally believe that the restoration is worth to spend money on it.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In modern era, a large number of communities tend to try alternative medicine than believe it to specialists. Although this decade is far more developed, usual doctors considered as professionals with high education. Both of these tendencies have their own pros and cons which will be discussed in this essay.

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Some people believe that radio is the best way to get news while others think that television is better for this purpose .discuss both views and give your opinion with relevant examples.

It has been argued by many individuals that portable device is the optimal method to acquire news of daily bases, whereas opponents reckon that TV is the right choice. In my opinion, I favour the former perspective; however, this essay shall dwell on both viewpoints in the subsequent paragraphs along with a reasoned conclusion.

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Figures show that some countries have an ever increasing proportion of the population who are aged 15 or younger . What do you think are the current and future effects of this trend for those countries.

Some demographic surveys have shown that the proportions of young people are rising rapidly. This may be because of any reasons such as illiteracy and poverty or wars or any other reasons. This essay shall delve into the immediate and long-term outcomes of this trend on those countries. The most important current impact of such a trend would be on the national economy. For instance, goods and services would need to be imported, which would lead to an unstable economy. ln addition to the effects on economy, there would be social implications also. The young population has lot of energy, which must be channelized in the right direction, or it would lead to crime and violence in society. The government will have to invest a lot on educational institutes, as more children need more schools andcolleges. ln addition more spending on health would also be needed. lf careful management of such a situation is done by the government, for instance, by providing good education and ...

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world.” Use reasons and details to support your opinion.

In contemporary time, it is considered that using Internet on daily basis has advantageous effects on community. This essay totally agrees with that statement and reasons will be explained.

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Write about following topic: Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

it is certainly a very interesting question, Does what a person wears tell us so much about theirculture and personality or not, I tend to agree that clothes can tell us some basic things, but that they do not tell us much more than those basic things. First of all, I will consider how a person's choice of clothes reveals their culture. This is true in some ways, for example, in many ,countries people have a distinctive national style of wear and some particular clothes and fabrics are typical of certain areas. Therefore, clothes can sometimes reveal the ethnic origins and culture of a person, but as so many people nowadays dress in business suits or jeans and T-shirts worldwide this is becoming less and less true. As the character is concerned, we can tell in some places if the wearer of clothes is a follower of fashion. Another aspect of the dress is whether the clothes look clean and ironed To sum up, I would say that we can find out something about a person from their ...

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

It is a beneficial thing to learn about what is good and what is not at the early age.l, and for that parents and teacher needs some actions in terms of punishment. I also strongly believe in fever for this statement and my incilation are as follows.

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In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Humans had a similar diet for thousands of years. However, the last 50 years have seen a radical change in our diet and the consequences have not gone amiss. Governments are embattled in health issues of their citizens and no one seems to know what to do. Yet, the solution is not beyond us.

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Young people are much more awareofand concernedabout issues likethe environment, poverty, and animal weljarethan previous generations. Whatisyour own opinion?

Nowadays, young mans worries about animals, our environment and poor mans a lot. For example, Greta Trounberg, who talks about this on for entire world, also organizations like GreenPeace are taking their places more and more still the time, and everyone can have the question, why does this happen and what this causes? Let's talk about this.

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The Internet is becoming a dominant element in modern life. What are the advantages and disadvantages of the Internet?

In today's world, where everything is connected via the internet, it would be safe to say that, it is a big part of our lifes and humans are largely dependent on it. There are numerous advantages of the internet, but at the same time it does has it's share of disadvantages. In this essay we will see them and thus, coming up with a reason conclusion. Firstly, the net has made life easier and comfortable for the society. With the help of it, people can study online, do shopping as well as in some case even work from home instead of going to office school or sto re. For instance, when covid hit in 2019, it affected everyone in a big way, because of it people were getting sick and many were dying, as a result public stay at home. However, this didn’t stop our daily life from moving forward, because of the web we could work from home, children were able to continue their education from home and the public could do shopping without even going out to the store. Nevertheless, ...

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