IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 378

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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The best way to tackle the problem of obesity is to educate people about healthy eating. To what extent do you agree or disagree

Obesity nowadays is a major health issue, it affects the well-being of every society and consumes state financial resources. The solution to this problem seems to be multifactorial , as the very essence of the issue is multifaceted.

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Missions to explore space are hugely expensive, and there are problems on Earth which demand attention. The number of these missions needs to be reduced. Do you agree or disagree?

It is a fact that the discoveries which scientists have done in outer space are crucial for our future although it is a highly debatable topic since we need plenty of sources and money for doing it. Humans also worried about the problems that they face on Earth. In my opinion, astronauts must keep searching the universe and find a new home for the humanity.

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Some people believe that children's leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

According to researchers, there are many forms of incorporating education at school. The fusion of leisure, or sporting activities into academic learning could be one of those ideas. I strongly advocate to this thought of making any games or sports be educational. This essay will discuss how children can be benefited from this fusion using examples.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to the social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer including any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

We live in the era where the technology gives us the opportunity to see the person’s life and their social status. Person’s worth presently valued based on social status and material possession rather than the old-fashioned for instance honour, kindness, and other things. Despite the truth seems true, I am disagreeing with the statement because the out-dated value and good behaviour still matter and urgent to be seen.

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All children should be made to wear school uniform.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that, all schoolchildren ought to wear a special uniform. Personally, I am completely agree with this viewpoint since it every child should treated equally according to the sense of belonging and this essay will provide certain arguments to this statement.

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It is difficult for people living in cities today get enough physical exercise. Why is it the case ? What can be done to solve the problem ?

In 21 century for the young and old generations and for all people in the world difficult to concentrate on their health and it is hard to get enough physical exercise for the mind. There are some ways to solve this problem such as opening relaxation centres, and coming up with a recreation department at work.

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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As the globalization grow rapidly in this era, Internet become prime pivotal media in many aspects of life. Some people stated that Internet could be the perfect place to communicate, but some also argue that it might not be a great place to gather accurate sources. The writer will discuss both of the stated views and also the perspective for the motion.

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The charts below show the production of different types of citrus fruit in Brazil, China and USA. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisions where relevant. Write at least 150 words

The given data illustrate different types of citrus fruit production in three different countries. Overall, orange account for the majority of citrus fruit production in Brazil and the USA, whereas China focuses heavily on growing and selling Tangerines.

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the maps below show an industrial area in the town of norbiton

An industrial area in the town of Norbiton is illustrated regarding the current status and plans.

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To what extent do you agree with the following statement? Anything that is good for you can also be bad for you if you do it too much.

Generating habits that encourage us to feel happier about the good things we can do can help us be better, perform better, and reduce our emotions for the bad things we may have done.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other s think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own oipinion.

advertising were used since long time ago to promote both goods or services. it develop through time and now we can see so many different advertisments anywhere in various medias. i believe that advertising still give impact even though there are only small amount of people notice the commercials.

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Nowadays university education is considered very important for people's future. However, there are a lot of successful people who didn't get higher education. Do you think that higher education is necessary to succeed in life? Justify your opinion with relevant examples.

It is often believed that the higher the degree of studies, the higher is the chance of succeeding. However, many people have been the proof that that is not always the case. In my opinion, that would have been true a few decades ago, but with the advance intechnology and the increasing amount of job positions that do not require higher education, the statement seems to be outdated.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation,such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money.Other argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give opinions.

One of the most important concerns in modern society is how to tackle bad situations. There are those who said that bad situations can be solved by accepting whether it is an unsatisfactory job or a shortage of money ,however others believe that overcoming bad situations by trying and improving.This essay will discuss both sides of the argument and provide an overall opinion.

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Stress-related illness are becoming increasingly common. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

In the current 4.0 era, social become more develop, mental health should cared more and more over because people influenced by social every much. So that, mental illness are becoming grow very fast.

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The only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments for driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent decades, street accidents have been increasing every day. So, traffic accidents are growing very fast. Because of that reason, governments decided to give stricter punishments for driving offences to raise people’s awareness. This is an efficient way but in my point of view this is not the only way.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate whether a myriad of museums and historical venues mostly attract travelers in lieu of inhabitants. This essay is dedicated to the underlying roots, followed by some equivalent far-reaching resolutions to this dire problem.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There is a controversial perspective heating up a debate over whether a wealth of historical exhibition halls attract tourist but not indigenous people. I would contend that this essay is devoted to the underlying reasons, followed by some equivalent effective solutions to this dire problem.

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Some people think that getting a degree from a university is the best way to guarantee a good job, others believe that is would be better to go straight into work and get experience instead.

Today there are various ways for getting job and specilize in it.Some people believe that getting a degree from a university is useful and helpful for having a profession,but others says we must go straight into work and get experience instead.In this essay we will investigate this subject and also present some pros and cons.

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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

In this modern era, advent of advent of technology has brought many advantage and disadvantage to our life. the approach of how people meet each other has been changed.it is true that internet bring a lot of convenient to our lifestyle, however, this has some detrimental consequence.in this essay I want to examine is it a positive development or negative one.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places?

There are some controversial perspective heating a debate over historical area. While some claim that there are some historical sites become attractive to international tourist but not indigenous one, and it is necessary to make historical places become a tourism appealing to local people. I consider myself an advocate of this idea.

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