IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 376

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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime?

From day to day, a number of crimes that made adolescent are escalating progressively in worldwide. The cause of this appear to be highlighted in three fields, and the number of solutions also appear to be possible. First of all, committing atrocities of young people are caused by mental trauma in their childhood, especially broken family with bad relations. According to Frontiers journal, researched by Tomoko Soga, the presence of social stress during early-life can have an effect on many complex mental disorders and uncontrolled delinquency. The consequence of psycho-trauma in formative years result that children make a wrong decision while they are difficult situation. One major reason is abuse substance. Teens who are addicted alcohol and drug have tendency to be low self-esteem, which get involved in doing crimes. The main another cause is lack of moral and ethical education. The fact that young generation spends a lot of time with advanced technology have leads to ...

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Due to the influence of worldwide media such as television and computers, the gap between cultures is decreasing. The introduction of this global culture is a great benefit to the world. To what extent do you agree with this viewpoint?

The modrern technology playd a crucial role in bringing the world cultures together. The vast majority of puplation using global media to communciate in nowadays, therefore, mixing of cultures is a prevalence in present time. This essay, will examine the benefits and drawbacks of cultures integreation, and give the reasons that make me agree partally with global culture.

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Today people can work and live anywhere they want, because of the improvements in communicant technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In the modern world, People easier to contact others than before because of improvement in technology in any sections such as communication system or transportation and made them without border. I strongly agree that those development really have benefit more than disadvantages.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.

Lately, the rise of illicit drug abuse among youth has come into discussion. Eventhough using drugs is normalized in all modern societies, young generation tends to experiment with legal and illegal drugs even at an early age. In this essay I will discuss the causes and effects of this extensive drug usage among youngsters in the modern society.

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Around the world, large cities face the task of dealing with rapid population increase. What problems foes urban grow ath cause? What are some possible solutions to these problems?

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I some countries, people prefer to rent their home rather than buying them. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of renting homes?

Globally, most people see shelter as one of the basic needs of life. Some individuals prefer to lease their apartments than purchasing one. This essay will be discussing the merits and demerits of renting homes.

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Do you think that parents should be punished if their five-year-old child commits a crime? From what age should children be held responsible for their own behaviours?

some argue that if victim is a child who is five years old, they parents ought to fine instead of their offsprings. I agree with this trend and I hold the view that children those who are under 15 years old had better not punish for their crime and their parents have responsibilites about their crimes.

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Surveys show that people are living longer in many countries. But increased life expectancy has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. What are the possible effects of longer living for individuals and society?

Survival rate of some countries is in apex. Some surveys has shown that life expectance rate of some nation is extreme, but their increased life rate has many implications for aging individuals and for society as a whole. This essay will discuss all the possible effects for longer living generation and the community Aging has its advantages and disadvantage in both sectors as a public and humankind. Firstly some positive impact for maturing would be that they gain ample of experience by working in various careers, managing the health and maintaining household chores, the mankind gain wisdom from those who are well known and knowledgeable people because they have seen the world with bigger lens and with age their point of view has improved. For example, in Vietnam, Japan, India, China, older generation have knowledge to curate medicine form medicinal herbs with lots of trials their technique has upgraded, those herbs have been proven to escalate one’...

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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. do you thing the advantages of this development woutweight the disadvantage?

In this modern era, the life expectancy bcome longer beacuse of the medical improved, which permits to live a normal life even if some type of patologies as diabetes or asthma.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Teenager is one of the most valuable age groups in respect to upgrade the social values as teenagers are future of country’s development. In this essay, I will explore that teenagers should do community work for free in their leisure time which would ultimately beneficial for both the teenagers and the community.

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Some people say that teenagers should work part-time and earn money. This way they will learn basic lessons about work and become more disciplined. Others argue teenagers should not sacrifice their rest and after-class activities to work. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many students choose to work while studying. This helps them become good members for society alongside making money. However, others opine evening time and its activities, if not more, are equally significant.

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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is a common fact that migrating to a country which speak a different language result to sever issue in social and practicle context. The essay is indended to explain my view which is agree on the satement emphasis basically on public communication and cultural adoptation in new country.

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Some people believe that sports create peace in world. Do you agree or disagree with ?

football is a sport popular in many countries that will be making restfulness in the earth.

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is arguably believed that nowadays people tend to be rather reluctant of upholding long-established traditions. Also, there is a considerable number of people who believe instilling deep-rooted cultures and traditions is vital. This essay will examine both views dividedly and argues in the favor of the latter. To begin with, Considering the fact the culture and traditions can be fluid and forever changing, it is inevitable to give in to the vanishing of some. However, it also appears that in the modern world people don’t appear as willing to preserve well established cultures as they used to do ages ago and that is duo to fostering of youth culture. Seemingly, the newly established cultures developed by new generations hold a substantial sway over how traditions are rarely kept. Therefore, the initiating gap between the set of values people are currently undergoing is rather unacceptable and inconvenient to adopt and is potentially raising conflict. However,...

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is arguably believed that nowadays people tend to be rather reluctant of upholding long-established traditions. Also, there is a considerable number of people who believe instilling deep-rooted cultures and traditions is vital. This essay will examine both views dividedly and argues in the favor of the latter. To begin with, Considering the fact the culture and traditions can be fluid and forever changing, it is inevitable to give in to the vanishing of some. However, it also appears that in the modern world people don’t appear as willing to preserve well established cultures as they used to do ages ago and that is duo to fostering of youth culture. Seemingly, the newly established cultures developed by new generations hold a substantial sway over how traditions are rarely kept. Therefore, the initiating gap between the set of values people are currently undergoing is rather unacceptable and inconvenient to adopt and is potentially raising conflict. However,...

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Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is arguably believed that in recent days people tend to be rather reluctant of

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree and disagree with this statement?

Nowadys, there is a debat associated with governments should invest significant money on railways rather than roads. In may opinion, developing railways can help to resolve trafic issue and it can lead to individuals moving rurals area without any concern about their commute.

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In my conclusion, I will partially disagree that jail is the only effective option or education is the only choice. I think it depends on the level of crime they have sinned.

Crime depicts the countries social dysfunctions. In various nation it is believed that prison is an only effective solution to the problem of misdeeds, but many believe that it’s better to educate them for their greater goods. This essay will provide all the relevant information as to which option is superior. Anti-social activities has been increasing in various region, there is a belief in society that every lawbreaker should be imprisoned and that this is the optimal remedy to that issue in total disregards to the level of crime they have committed. Although there are various levels for criminal activities like there are people who have committed grave harm to humanity like terrorism, homicides, child abusers, assaults, rapes and many more these are all unforgivable crimes which just cannot be solved by educating them these can only be resolved by prison time or some other major means. On the contrary, there are offenders who have performed a felony...

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In most countries, prison is an effective solution to the problem of crime. Some people think it is a more effective solution to provide a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

Crime depicts the countries social dysfunctions. In various nation it is believed that prison is an only effective solution to the problem of misdeeds, but many believe that it’s better to educate them for their greater goods. This essay will provide all the relevant information as to which option is superior. Anti-social activities has been increasing in various region, there is a belief in society that every lawbreaker should be imprisoned and that this is the optimal remedy to that issue in total disregards to the level of crime they have committed. Although there are various levels for criminal activities like there are people who have committed grave harm to humanity like terrorism, homicides, child abusers, assaults, rapes and many more these are all unforgivable crimes which just cannot be solved by educating them these can only be resolved by prison time or some other major means. On the contrary, there are offenders who have performed a felony...

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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weaknesses. Is it right to exclude male or females from certain professions because of their gender? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience in 250 words.

Nowadays, when roles in society between males and females get closer to each other every year, we are already accustomed to progressive actions in employment as rights for everyone to choose the dream job no matter of any minimal demands. On the first hand it may be seen as a positive aspect of democracy on the other hand as a risk for the own applicant's health. Today, I would like to demonstrate each view of the topic from a different perspective to find the best solution.