IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 379

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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it has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Advantages and disadvantages

Should the primary children be taught gardening and animal husbandry in their early age? The merits of learning aforesaid skills, which is possibility to grow organic food and to learn about animals, is insignificant in comparison to the demerits of the learning these skills, including distraction from academics and danger of any accident .

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Some people believe public libraries are not important for people, others disagree about this statement. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

orCertain individuals assert that libraries are necessary for them whereas, a cluster of like minded people advocate that there is no need of library.I shall hashout both opinions of this essay in forthcoming paragraphs before embarking on specific conclusion with the advancement of my knowledge along with my personal viewpoint.

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Some people say that the only way to get success is to go to universities while others think that it depends on other factors. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There are controversial perspectives heating up a debate over how to become fruitful. While some hold a strong view that digesting precious insights in institutions is the sole approach to achieve high accomplishments. The opposite makes a statement that various elements make a great contribution to success. While each has its own perks, I would contend that it is optimal to combine both mentioned factors.

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Movies with spectacular car chases are a thrill to watch and fun too but they have led to an increase in car accidents on urban roads. Do you agree? What do you think can be done to make the youth more aware of road safety?

Nowadays, some people are thought that the film industry has developed rapidly as a consequence car chase developing also. It means that film industry setting up new standards of car chases. However, it could affect to other people in motorways. Generally, I agree with this statement and I will try to find ways out.

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All natural resources are limited. It is therefore important that all companies make products that can be used for many years. To what extent do YOU agree or disagree with this statement?

There is no question that the indispensable role of mineral deposit in this era; hence, businesses should manufacture durable energy for their usage in the near future. From my perspective, I could not convinced with this phenomenon by virtue of several reasons; however, justifiable parameters of this issue will be pointed in the paragraphs below.

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Parents today often tend to organise extra classes on weekends or even after school. Do you believe this is at all useful? Or, do you think the education provided in school is sufficient?

In this cutting age era, individuals have the tendancy to compete with each other and they also want to gain more knowledge on a particular topic to stay ahead in life. I strongly believe that parents are the well wishers of their children and they want their children to achieve best in their life. As per me, because of this mindset of parents, they always encourage their children to make an extra affort from very young age. So, they want their pupils to do extra classes after school hours as well as during holidays. As per my perspective, it is necessary to do extra classes to stay positive and to stay ahead in the life.

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In some parts of the world, traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

Why vast culture and heritage have taken the propensity of vanishing? In this concurrent age, various conventional celebrations and programs have lost their significance in several parts of the globe. It is believed by individuals that this disposition can be created a multitude of drawbacks such as creating a gap between generations and besides that it might be generated harmful situations for boosting the economy. Although there are a few issues, several strategies must be absorbed to handle these difficulties likewise implementing government initiatives and individuals' own creativity. This dissertation will explore some related dilemmas as well as a few antidotes also by citing examples.

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In the modern world, many employees lack soft skills such as communication and working in teams. What are the main causes of this problem? What are the effects of the lack of such skills? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, communication and team management are basic aspects of achieving success in organisations. At present, there is a shortfall of skills like communication and working as a team in workers. In this essay, I will explore what causes that shortfall and how it is affecting their performance.

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A company has announced that it wishes to build a large factory near your locality. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this new influence on your community. Do you support or oppose the factory establishment? Explain your position.

After months of crisis, the job market is ready to expand itself again. This is the cause of the decision taked by a big society to open a new establishment in my area. The fact will obviously lead to consequences for local people. Despite someone may can think that is will bring a lot of advantages for the place, I'm convinced that the new factory will be a problem for it.

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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in foreign countries. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

Nowadays, a big percentage of students choose to complete their higher education abroad. They want to try a new experience, and discovering different school systems. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of studying in a different country and provide a logical conclusion. Completing a degree or a master's abroad is becoming very popular among students and the two major advantages of this are providing an experience of personal growth to the pupil and the possibility for him to learn a new language. Firstly, deciding to move abroad for university is not a simple choice, would not be easy for everyone, because it means leaving family and friends and start living in a completely different reality. The student has to face many challenges like documents, making new friends and living in a new culture. In my ,opinion this is an incredible experience of personal growth for the student, because, in the meanwhile, he will become more open minded and will learn how to su...

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Some people believe that development of computer has changed the human lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advent of computers has completely changed people's lives and the benefits are manifold. I completely agree with this statement and discuss it in detail in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people believe that longer prison sentences are the best ways to decrease crime while others believe that there are alternative ways to decrease crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Statistics in 2009 showed that stroke and cardiovascular diseases were one of the leading causes of mortality among Korean females (Office, 2009). Excessive accumulation of visceral fat and menopause are likely to associate with an increased risk of developing cardiovascular diseases(Dagenais et al., 2005; Rosano, Vitale, Marazzi, & Volterrani, 2007). The author believes that mobile technology is a potential solution to resolve this problem but only a few studies were conducted to test the effectiveness of mobile phone or internet on diabetes or obesity care. The objective of this study is to assess how efficient a mobile text-based intervention and Internet can help post-menopausal female with abdominal obesity reduce waist circumference (WC), body weight (BW), blood pressure (BP), fasting plasma glucose (FPG) and serum lipid levels. Population This is a quasi-experimental study that compares baseline data with results after the 12-week intervention. Participants were post-men...

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Some people feel that manufactures and supermarkets have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of foods. Others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The amount of packaging of foods is a topic that has been getting increasing attention over the past few years. While most agree that something has to be done in order to reduce the quantity of packages used, the best way to achieve this is still controversial. On one hand, some people think that the manufacturers and supermarkets should decrease the packaging of the goods they sell, but on the other hand, some are convinced that the initiative has to come from the customers, who should avoid buying such products.

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The restoration of old buildings in major cities around the world costs enormous amounts of money. This money would be better spent on providing new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, many people argue that government expand a sum of money on the renovation of antiquated construction in many megacities,,however some people believe that the same quantity of bills must spend on assuming contemporary residences and highways advancement.From my point of view, the government must focus on both views.

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It is important to use English language for the development of tourism.Some people thinks that this will lead to English spoken globally. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages.

In order to develop the tourism industry, English plays a fundamental role. Many people are convinced that due to this, English will become the global language.

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In many developing countries, there is a problem with declining Quality of water and air from both industry and construction. What measures could be takenTo prevent this?

The provided line chart depicts the ratio of unemployed people in theUnited States and Japan's labour pool in the United States and Japan between March 1993 and 1999. It is evident from the given graph that the unemployment rate experienced two contradictory patterns throughout the given period.

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some people believe that university should offer places for people with high marks, others says that universities accept all age of people even if they do not do well at school. discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,some people believe that only top scorers may gain admission to universities,,,however others have an opinion about accepting all levels of students,irrespective of their marks.In this ,essay we will evaluate both views.

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Carownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using thei cars?

recent years and is cousis a range proviems, particularly in built-up areas. I think there are a number of ways that governments can aim to deal with this. 33 fearl 34 shel 35 diar Many big cities in the world have traffic problems but these problems vary. For example, it is reasonably easy to drive Reac around my city after 10 am and before 5 pm. However, outside 1 FAI these hours, you have to allow double the usual time to reach 2 FAI Yines, and there is the continual sound of car horns as people, 3 TR' 4 TR try to get wherever they want to go. 5 NO One of the best approaches governments can take in busy 6 FA cities is to encourage the use of public transport. This means 7 NC the transport facilities have to be well run and people must be able to afford them. Buses, trams and trains are good ways of getting around, and if they are cheap and reliable, people will Rea 14 NC use them. 15 YE Another approach is to discourage people from actually 16 N ent...

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1.Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views

1. What does an airline clerk say when he/she wants to check passengers’s tickets, passports or visas? Key: May I have your ticket / passport / visa, please? 2. What does a passenger say to an airline clerk when he/she want to carry his/her bag on the plane? Key: Can I carry this bag on the plane? 3. What does an airline clerk say when he/she wants to ask a passenger how many bags he/she wants to check in? Key: How many bags do you want to check in? 4. What does an airport security guard usually say to passengers at an airport security check? Key: - Please put all of your metal objects in this tray. - Please take off your coat and place it on the conveyor belt. - Now, step I walk / go through the metal detector. - Sir, remove / take off your belt / shoes, please. - Please stand over here and put your arms out. 5. What does a passenger say when a customs officer wants to know the purpose his/her visit? Key: I’m here to study/to visit my relatives/for sightseeing/fo...

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Nowadays more people are choosin to socialize online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

In recent years, there has been a new trending toward virtual communications and most people prefer less to interfere with each other face to face. As far as I am concerned this is a negative development due to the reasons which will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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