IELTS Writing Samples Band 4. Page 375

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4

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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the development of technologies and smartphones is considerably reducing the use of newspapers and televisions. Due to this trend, the core resource of news is the internet. I believed that news should be read from reliable and authorized resources. In this essay, I will list some of the disadvantages of getting the news from the internet.

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Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason to doing this? is this a negative or positive development?

It is certainly true that today many parents put a lot of pressure in their offspring in order to become successful. In my opinion, there are several reasons behind this perssure, I believe this trend can leads to detrimental consequences on children.

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n some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

In my opinion it has so much advantages. First of all you can get rest after your whole 12 years of education journey and you can clear your mind for university and you can go to some volunteering mission that different from your main language, it builds confidence and reduces social anxiety for your university journey. Secondly you can work much more for your branch and that gets you much more ahead of your classmates when you're about to go to university. Some people want to follow their passion and that gap year gives em' so huge a chance, they can build their business or what they want to do with their carrier without university stress. Minority of people doesn't know what they're going to build their carrier about and that gap year gives a huge chance too because they can find in this year their passion or whatever they need for the build their carrier about. Now it's time to get in my experiences, while i was educating 11th class i was in so much school projects that gave me s...

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The Plans Below Show the Layout of a University Sports Centre Now Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plan displays the university's sports centre at current and how it is planned to redevelop.

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Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What is the reason for this? it is a negative or positive development?

Technological advances in children entertainment have been spread widely, and it is quite addicting. However, the reason children prefer playing video games rather than sports are the convenience in playing digital games. This essay will elaborate the negative development causes by this phenomenon.

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Many people now have the freedom to work and live anywhere because of advances in communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Day by day world changes with the technology and it adds various newly features for our lives as well. As a result of that, human beings are free enough to work anywhere. This affects with the new modes of transportations too. win considering the given statement, I strongly demonstrate that advantages of that outweigh disadvantages.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than on roads.

Administration of the city sometimes debate which sphere should be developed, therefore this topic should be touched. But what positive sides we can highlight from it. In order to figure out what is better, to invest in railways or road, we need to consider all the pros and cons. Now, advantages and disadvantages of sponsoring railways and roads.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In some parts of the world, more distribution of population consists of young generation than older one. Although this inclination can be problematic in some cases, this sessay will explain why I believe that some of the benefits for the whole society is extremely sufficient to outweigh their drawbacks.

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The bar chart demonstrates how many inhabitants visit every month from June to October in London.

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The process below show the life cycle of a specie of large fish called salmon

The picture illustrates the way in which the fish called salmon develop from eggs to adults.

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Some people think that exams are a good way of assessing a student's level. Other people believe that they put unnecessary pressure on young learner and tell us very little about their acutal ability. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

No doubt ,students are the future of the upcoming generation however often people claim that unit test is the best method to check the school-going's children knowledge whereas opponents think this put extra pressure and stress on their pupil lives. Both viewpoints have their significant value in this modern world and I stand with the latter opinion as I am a teenager due to study loads I am unable to concentrate on my hobbies .

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Most people agree that cities shoud give the right for graffiti designer to show their skills in public spaces, While other not prefer to allow that types of arts in the streets walls. Personally, I believe that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti, I feel that for two reasons which i will explore in the following essay.

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Behavior in school is getting worse.Explain the causes and the effects of this problems,and suggest some possible solutions.

Even the activities at school are changing for the worse. The essay will first suggest that the biggest problem caused by these phenomenon is disorder and bad up bringing of children and then submit strengthen discipline and raising children as the most viable solution.

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Is the freedom of speech vital in a free society? agree or disagree

Firstly it is very important to know what is the freedom of speech means. Freedom of speech is expression our ideas and thoughts in community even with mass media. Some people say that freedom of speech is not too important in society, because it is very hard to control it. Others say that it is vital for society so that ideas do not go unnoticed. I consider myself to the second types of people, so now I want to explain why does freedom of speech important in our life.

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You recently went to a restaurant and were very disappointed in the level of customer service. Write an email to a restaurant owner in about 150-200 words. Your email should include the following things: • Describe your situation • Complain about the service • Suggest solutions to improve

I trust this message finds you in the best spirits! I am writing this email to voice a concern regarding the unsatisfactory service of your restaurant in expectation of rectifying the same.

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In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to support your position.

Every year the goverment try to improve our lifes and create new rules for us. One of them is to disallow smoking in public places, but there are advantages and disadvantages in such decision. In this essay I would like to compare pros and cons and explain my position.

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It is widely believed that the overall quality of healthcare will diminish. I completely disagree with this anticipation owing to the futuristic innovations and the broad popularisation of medicine across the globe that ensure the sustainable development of this realm.

It is widely believed that the overall quality of healthcare will diminish. I completely disagree with this anticipation owing to the futuristic innovations and the broad popularisation of medicine across the globe that ensure the sustainable development of this realm.

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Nowadays people work too hard. What is the reason for this? What should employers do to prevent employees from over working?

It is common for employees to do overtime these days to provide better for their families. Some employers have solutions to prevent their workers from being overworked. In this essay, I shall discuss the causes of why people work too hard and some remedies to maintain the work-life balance of employees.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In this fast modern life, there is no doubt about the significance of science and technology and how it plays an important role in our life, some people opine that all university students should choose to study the major that suite them, while others opine the contrary, they believe that students should study subjects that help to improve technology and science. In this essay I would like to discuss both views and I will provide my opinion, hence, I will elaborate more on this and offer exampels to support my argument.

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Some people take their vacation in abfoad but others want to stay in their own country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Well, in this current era, spending holidays while visiting other places is very common. Some people believes that it is better to explore their own country but other folks including me thought that it is very crucial and beneficial to go to other countries for vacation.

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